I Want to Save Someone, but She Lived a Thousand Years Ago

Not bad, good looking! Especially the character Qing Xuanzi, the portrayal can be said to be flesh and blood. Does he love his daughter very much? Undoubtedly, he loves her very much, but his love is too paranoid and extreme [crying] Goose goose goose! Forget it, my writing is not good, so be it, this book is good anyway

A new book has set sail. This time it is not an invincible text, but more about fantasy cultivation and a small amount of innovation. It is blessed with a 10,000-word outline and the overall logic is smooth. It is guaranteed that the eunuch will not collapse! It is still the humorous style that foreshadows the plot. I will try my best to make the content better and more interesting than the previous book, and the pace will not be too slow. I hope everyone will enjoy reading it. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Realm: Five realms of Lingtai, human, earth, heaven and immortals. Before the fairyland, each realm has nine steps. After the fairyland, you ascend to heaven with endless steps. Also: The power system and practice settings of this book are somewhat different from the classic Xianxia settings. The right to interpret all settings belongs to the author [Smile][Smile]

I think the plot is very good and the characters will be very vivid in the future. Kavin is smooth and not sloppy. I like it very much [laughs evilly]

Wonderful. The characters are three-dimensional. Killing people is the way for the weak to survive. After all, the world is idealistic. The author's thoughts on life, parents' love, comparison... (Although I already knew this, it is still worth reading). From the perspective of a reader of 5 years, this is an excellent book! Come on, author! Don't let the pigeons go! There is a shortage of books! Help me! ! !

After reading Chapter 509, I discovered that the author's views are exactly the same as mine. The structure of this book is very logical, and all the pitfalls in the previous and later chapters are basically filled in. The author's portrayal of the characters is so exquisite. Each character has his or her own personality. Each volume has a character worthy of tears. Their personalities are so distinct that tomatoes are rare. In fact, the author's writing style and the advancement of the plot alone are enough to score 9.5 Or above, but this is Tomato, a world of cool writing, which is a bit of a pity. The author's concept of writing an article is actually basically the same as that of us literary youths. However, what I didn't expect was that someone could actually write it. The author's skills are definitely sufficient. This book is undoubtedly one of the best books I have ever read on Tomato.

I have only one comment on this book. It is amazing, rich in emotions, and the description of people is really full. The protagonist's strategizing feeling made me see the shadow of Zhang Chulan. This book has written content that other books have never described and dare not write, and readers can easily relate to the protagonist. It resonates with me, and I have that immersive feeling. I really felt sad when I saw Gu Qingshan asking Jiang He if he would stay. Jiang He's choice is understandable to all of us. After all, I am not from this world. Being at a loss is the most normal behavior, and It's not like other books that directly accept one's own time travel and then take in the harem without thinking. The author's writing is online and his own thinking can be clearly seen. It is indeed a magical book on Tomato. It can only be said to be unique and emerge from the mud without being stained. This kind of author is not good at writing. Please reply to the reader. The frequency is still high, where can I find the second one? I think 9.1 Is really not the level of this book. I think it is not an exaggeration for this book to get 9.6 Or above. I hope the author will continue to persevere and work hard. Good books will definitely be well-known by readers. [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

The logic of the plot is completely OK. The author's legs are very strong. Some holes are dug very deep, and the settings are buried very deep. You need to read carefully to find the clues. If you like reading with your brain, it is recommended. In addition, Legs is also very patient, very active, and very interactive. He will explain to you things you don't understand logically, and he will also respond to jokes. Except for the fact that the leader's stock has dropped to the limit and makes people want to stab him, everything else is completely OK. I hope Legs can give more care and love to the lonely old man Xiao Jiang (ꐦ ●_●. )

Good book. It may not be realistic to say that this is the most awesome book on Tomato, but it is at least over 99. In today's trend, there are very few novels like this. Please note that this is a novel, not some spicy online article. I only read half of "Zhu Shen" and was too lazy to read it. I can almost guess what is behind it, but this book is really worth reading. His description and shaping of characters, a person, even if he is a villain, he is also a person and has his own life. At least he is not the only protagonist in the world. I really love this book, just read it if you don't want it to be too toxic. Update the author quickly, don't hide and save the manuscript, it's not satisfying. Really good-looking

A very recommended book. There are not many such good books these days. I think it only deserves five stars. I look forward to this book reaching 9.5 And above! However, I think Qingxuanzi should not end up like this. Qingxuanzi is not a good master or father, but he is definitely an important figure in the main plot. I have a hunch that Qing Xuanzi's experience and cultivation were manipulated by the Jiang family in order to let him pick up Jiang He, so that the whole thing would be coherent. The fact that Qing Xuanzi was able to break through even though his lifespan was so short felt like it was the work of Sect Master Jiang. In order to restore the cultivation level of Jiang He who killed him at that time and obtain the elixir, he could deal with the five brothers of the Barbarian Kingdom, which made a major development for the subsequent plot. And he probably left something in Qingxuanzi's body, which would be a big help when Jiang He attacked his heart. Otherwise, he would still be in the ground and would not be angry to death. If you say that he took the extra-large Zhiyu Pill, I would still believe him. This book is quite good. I finished it after reading it for only a day or two. I look forward to the author's updates!

The emotional drama is really delicate, and the feeling of "being a stranger in a foreign land" is vividly displayed in this book. Jiang He's hesitation makes me feel that this book is different from ordinary time travel novels. His hesitation gives me a sense of humanity. I don't know how to describe this feeling, but I think I like it very much. Jiang He is very direct to Gu Qingshan. Bai's emotional hesitation can even be considered as fear, fear of reluctance in the future, and worry about whether Gu Qingshan can bear the possible separation after being together. This emotional scene may not be the best among the books I have read, but it is my favorite. In my own heart, this book is the best book in my opinion, update your legs quickly, don't kill me Jiang He Qingshan [Shy]

The characters were written with flesh and blood, and the plot was full of ups and downs. I was drawn into it without knowing it, and the last step was something I didn't expect. One more thing, update soon. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this [laughing]

Seeing more than 300 chapters so far, the setting starts from a thousand-year conversation, from escaping from a dangerous gym, to a series of events in the Carp Kingdom. Everyone encountered along the way, whether they are immortal cultivators or ordinary girls who ask their families to prepare more pies, each character has his or her own My true thoughts, in terms of setting, are different from previous novels about cultivating immortals. The divisions, methods, and theories of cultivating immortals in this book are all very novel. The protagonist is thoughtful and intelligent, and is a "gambler." The emotional line is also good so far. I hope the author will give it his best. The last silly thing to say, Gu Qingshan yyds[awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

I dare say that from the hundreds of online books I have read, there is nothing better than this one. Maybe it is not hugely popular, but it has a compact and continuous story that I have not seen in other mainstream online books for a long time. In other cases, the protagonist shines alone, and the other supporting characters are like NPCs. After reading it, I can't even remember their names. The supporting characters in this book are very detailed in shaping the characters, but most readers nowadays have no patience to appreciate such detailed shaping. Each character has his own ideas, and has his own light even if he is separated from the protagonist. The foreshadowing in the front will be echoed in the later. I think this is a novel that can be called wonderful. It's a pity that good books don't have those bad jokes after all. The pursuit of cool writing and eye-catching popularity comes quickly. I want to see the candy. . .

The author's writing is really good [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] I hope the author will give me a like, hehe (ง ˙ω˙)ว However, the update is a bit slow. I just came to comment after reading it. There is a question that has been bothering me [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] Who is the heroine?

I have been too lazy to write a review before. This is my first review. This novel can really be called a novel. The protagonist is not a cookie-cutter protagonist, and the supporting characters are also flesh and blood. It is really praised!

Five stars, no explanation. I feel that the author, as a real time traveler, put himself in Jiang He's shoes and described the thoughts and thoughts of Jiang He. I have read many books about cultivating immortals and time travel, but there is no point of view of "sense of belonging". This is a highlight of this novel. It is a bit suspenseful, but I feel that the main line is a bit slow. The most important thing is the shaping of the psychology and emotions of the characters. I feel it is already very powerful. It feels unreasonable to give a low score to a book just because it does not meet your expectations. What you read in a book is a story. Stories are not good or bad, only the author's ability to depict them. I feel that as long as the story is written with care, no story should be given at least one point.

I thought it was a light-hearted and refreshing novel, but I can only say that the writing was better than I thought. The overly plotted plot was not so rigid. The character of Sun Yi was successfully created. It looks good. However, I would like to know how you plan to deal with the relationship between the male protagonist and this woman from a thousand years ago. Is it a simple use or will it be converted into a husband-wife relationship later? . I hit the wrong one, Sun Ercai

I have seen the latest chapter, it integrates a lot of things, and the author's writing is really good, but Qing Xuanzi and his daughter are a bit private. At present, the female protagonist's role is a bit small, and the male protagonist saves the female protagonist. They each take what they need from each other. I don't see the male protagonist's "thinking". Secondly, how to deal with Gu Qingshan. Although there is no ambiguity, it is still uncomfortable to write too many female characters, unless there are multiple female protagonists, but I only watched it because of the single female protagonist recommended by others. Finally, I hope the author can update quickly. There are multiple female protagonists. If you want to see a single female protagonist, you can go.

It's very beautiful. I feel that there are no routines in books on the market. Each character has his own thoughts and personality, which is real and vivid. The plot development is reasonable and orderly. The foreshadowing in the previous article is explained in the follow-up. The protagonist is not particularly outstanding. I just hope that the protagonist will Jiao Neng is more dedicated in the emotional line, and falling in love with one person is enough. I read the first 300 chapters in one go and accidentally read the comments and found out that this is a novel that will open a harem in the future. I am still a little disappointed, but for now, it is still very exciting. I like it very much. Thank you to the author. Come on!

I have listened to about 80 chapters so far From the perspective of the protagonist's creation, it is in line with the appetite, with beliefs and goals. Many supporting characters also have their own world view, and the way of writing group portraits is more attractive to me. From the plot point of view, the pace is relatively slow, and I feel that a lot of the writing is about the author's self-expression, friendship, family affection, opposition between men and women, and kindness. But the desire to express is too strong. It appears frequently in Chapter 80. In fact, it can be slowed down a bit. Frequent indoctrination of ideas is not pleasing after all. I sincerely suggest that the author appropriately reduce some of his desire for self-expression. Finally, regarding the emotional scenes, the author also pays more attention to rhythm. In the novel, there are only two emotional issues, one of which is frequent male-female scenes, but the result is not acceptable. The first one is about falling in love with one after seeing the other, and there is no drama after all. The harem supports it, but they don't want to have a drama of forgetting each other... The ending plot of Li Man was too delayed. Especially because he disagreed with what General Gu did and the confession that had been prepared for so long. One was unwilling to leave Li Country, while the other compromised to stay. I choose to give 0 points to show my appreciation

The prototype of a divine work can be called a semi-divine work. Every character has a soul that belongs to them, and the plot connection is not cliched. The most important thing is that the heroine is not brainless, which is hard to see in Tomato. The supporting role of Sun Ercai has also been sublimated from the sentence "Senior Brother, hurry up and leave". I hope that the reunion will have a good ending. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good book. It's definitely a masterpiece without being messed up. I hope it will go on high like Entertainment Spring and Autumn. No comments available, move to the main text

No one gives 5 stars, I give 5 stars. This book is rigorous yet humorous. There are quite a few reversals. I always thought the master was a big devil. In a sense, he is a devil but not a devil. He is not a good father but he is a good father. So far, no one is truly a bad guy. If anything, I think the protagonist is a bad guy. He is bad in his bones and can smell it through the screen. There are many of them. Although they are more like fairy tales, their IQs are also online.

It's a really good book. The protagonist's character is well understood, or the author's character is very good. Everyone's taste is different, but for me, this book is probably the best book I've read on Tomato so far.

It's not a brainless novel. It was really slow in the early stages, and I probably sacrificed some reading experience for the sake of logic. I have read Chapter 45 so far, and it is finally exciting and exciting. The protagonist is well established and a type that I like very much. The supporting characters are also well-shaped and not stereotyped. Fortunately, I didn't abandon the article before, and I hope it won't collapse in the future.

[Thinking] To be honest, I only read this book when I was about 20 or 30 years old. I read about ten chapters and gave up. At that time, it gave me the impression that it was just a newspaper. [Sneaky laugh] Later I saw this book again and I forgot that I had read it. So I clicked in and read it. After thinking about it, I continued reading and later I found out that this book is real. It suits my taste. Both the character description and the plot line are quite good. Of course, it is good to have this kind of book in 🍅. After all, I really like this type of book that can be read without spending money. It is really fun to read it with a little brain. Reading a book without brain, it feels like it is boring after you finish directing. Finally, I want to say, author, if you are not sick, please update more if you are not sick. Look at the author next door to see what you are really reading. You let the next door see it and think we don't have to read more. Thirty chapters for each person, at least thirty chapters for each person. If you don't update more, I will follow you every day @legger @legger @legger. Now, finally, I want to say that if the production team doesn't have you, how can they rest? @Legger

It should be posted to a pay site. Most of the readers of this site like to read mindless and invincible novels. There are too few novels with all the members' IQ online. There is no conventional fantasy lengthy training and there are not many fights. It probably relies on describing the daily psychology or language of each character. The characteristic is that "no one is perfect", each character is like a flesh-and-blood person, and one cannot simply judge "good or bad" based on a certain point; and the psychological "change" of each character on his own basis; and the impermanence of life, which in many cases causes most people's plans to not change quickly (including the male protagonist). Just mentioning the plot, there are a lot of foreshadowings in the book. When the foreshadowing at the beginning of the incident is recycled at the end of the incident, people often feel "that's it". It can be seen that the author really understands online writing, and he definitely has a complete outline (at least a complete single volume).

The world view in the article, such as "Three Mountains and Five Sects", "Zhuoxian" and "Heaven", form a curtain. If all can be unveiled smoothly, this article will be regarded as an excellent book. It's just that the description of emotional scenes is too delicate and makes people feel a little stomachache [I learned it] [I learned it]

His literary youth flavor could not be stronger. He does not cater to the market, is slow to work, is unhappy, etc. These are his shortcomings. However, the people in his writings do not deviate from the personality, and the logic of "because you love me, I must love you too" will not happen. This logic runs through the whole book, and the protagonist is more like a living person. People who are born and raised, people who stick to the bottom line, of course have too many flaws. The first is the driving force. The protagonist's driving force to live is not enough, and the driving force to help Sect Master Jiang is not enough. It is too forced and does not give readers good positive feedback. For example, going back to the past with Meng During that period of time, the protagonist was emotionally indifferent and like a robot. It was really difficult to read. The pace was so slow in the early stage and so fast in the later stage. It was difficult to stretch. I think it is reasonable to give the protagonist a more powerful plot, with more pretense, slap in the face, and a hero saving the beauty. The whole book The most difficult thing for me to deal with is that Lao Xue died. It makes sense. The ending is not a dumpling ending. All in all, the writing style is good and the concept is also good, but how to cater to the market is something you should consider. You might as well cater to the readers within your advantage range, and you can write better.

It's a great book, but to be honest, I really don't like the Sect Leader now. I didn't have the same throbbing feeling towards Gu Qingshan when I read it. There's nothing to say about the plot. It's very strong, but I may have read it a little depressing and aggrieved. Jiang He has been being plotted, good or bad, and has always been a pawn in the hands of others. He can't resist. It runs through the whole story. In addition, it is a bit slower, and there is a strong sense of fragmentation. It always takes a while to get back to it. Thinking about the plot and the characters, the design is very successful. It can be seen that the characters in this book are not single-sided. People are complex and cannot have only one thought. The author has written this very well. There is no need to say more about the writing style. You will know it after reading it. Overall, it is a very good novel. For me, a rating of about 9.4 Is almost perfect. I have no suggestions. I just express some of my opinions and only represent my personal thoughts.

The subject matter is novel, the writing style is unique, it is quite literary, and the characters are well created. However, the contrast between the previous and later texts seems to lack background support, making it less flexible and not like a living person, but it is still quite good. If the setting is introduced in detail, I believe it will be better. It must be a rare masterpiece.