"Hey, Mila Luz, your days of summoning people to other worlds are over. Give me the way home."
The girl in white stood up from the throne, turned her head and looked behind her
"If you want it, you have to get it yourself. You know the rules."
"I knew you would say that."
As if he had expected it, the man advanced instead of retreating, taking a step towards the girl in white.
"How long have you been in this world?"
"It's hard to say, from the time I came to this world until my death until now."
The light flashes, and the huge sword is acquired
"It's over, Mila Luz! It's over."
Reader comments
Although I play Shield Axe, this Tachi novel is really good. As the first Monster Hunter fanfic I have read, the plot and combat descriptions feel much better than many other types of novels, and because I know the action, it feels like reading a novel. It is the slowest I have read among novels with the same word count. It may be that there are too few Monster Hunters so the rating is not high. The author must not discontinue it. If you discontinue a bad book, you will only be relieved. Losing a good book is as uncomfortable as logging out of an account that has been played for 4 years [top post]
A nice monster hunting novel, I was very surprised to see it on Tomato
Wow, it's incredible to see a Monster Hunter novel (//∇//) There aren't many books about Monster Hunter. Come on, author.
Overall, it's not bad. The reason for the points deduction is the conspiracy between people. Why did I come to see Monster Hunter? It was to see the battle of wits and courage between humans and monsters, and the camaraderie with teammates. I wasn't here to see other people playing tricks. I fight monsters with my brothers on the front line, and I want to play tricks with you when I get home? How far can I go? What about the assassination troops of the union wearing speed cat suits? Can we kill all these people? It affects my hunting!
Although the game has more routines, it is still exciting. If the monsters can have some combinations of moves other than AI, and the protagonist can use the fixed actions in the game less rigidly, the look and feel will be better.
It's actually a monster hunter! ! Miss you!
When it comes to monsters torturing people, I have to think of the works of Ghost Teacher. Talk about ghost teacher%*! #&
Come on, author, there are not as many people playing Monster Hunter as you think, so there are not many people who give rewards, and even if they play, they may not read Tomatoes, but the author must continue to write for the sake of Monster Hunter.
There are five stars for Monster Hunting. The author just doesn't finish the work and doesn't end up in the palace.
It's a pretty good novel, I've read about a hundred chapters. Fighting Gu Long basically relies on cheating to kill him, and his own abilities are basically all about maneuvering, but that's right, after all, it's not a numerical value in the game, so this is normal. It just feels like the equipment has been a bit out of date.
Over a hundred chapters, this is a classic image of a child's mother, a very vivid portrayal of a single mother. Her pathological desire for control and insecurity created such a character. This is a wake-up call for readers, and I hope everyone can pay more attention to their families and maintain their own harbor.
Also, well, I was attracted to the big ward. You hinted at me in your introduction, but why are there girls in the text?
Regardless of the monster hunting background, this is a novel worth reading, and it is not just a cover-up novel.
There are really few novels about monster hunting these days. Please do your best, author.
It can only be considered mediocre in online articles, but it is very good in monster hunting articles. It ranks among the top five monster hunting articles in Tomato. Those who are interested in monster hunting can read it.
It's novel. Even though I've never played and am a cloud player, I think this novel is the best monster hunting novel in Tomato.
Come on! Great author!
It's really good, mainly because you can see that the author's writing is really improving. The plot is really good in the middle and later stages. There are indeed a lot of minor flaws in the early stage. Regarding one thing, many people may have doubts. Here is a little spoiler. The system was created by Zulong's taboos, and the protagonist is their tool to pull them over, so the protagonist's early doubts are not unreasonable.
Specialize in one weapon. . . Not to mention it's bad, I'm already tired of it, especially the tachi, the tachi from the two new generation games, the new hunter's favorite
Is there Huihuiʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔyou know the evil star with silver wings!
Surprisingly beautiful
💯💯💯💯, But the flow of emotion is a problem
If Mira Luz is the heroine, there should be many MH players coming to see it, after all...
As a monster hunting article, it is very good. I have played several generations of Monster Hunter P3, xx, World and Rise. I felt very involved when reading this book. It is very good~
Well written, come on, author
Not bad, I like it very much
Why not play with bows and arrows [angry]
It's too loose, but it's pretty good on tomatoes.
It's really rare to see fanfics about Monster Hunter.
This novel is good, and there are pictures. I always thought that the protagonist could take off, but it seems to be slow to take off, and the person behind the scenes (Dragon) always comes out and jumps.
Three brushes, not bad
The setting is described in detail, and the protagonist has a brain but is not systematic (system is taboo)
And the characterization of the scene is pretty good.
There were not many knives, but Cheng Feng was knifed twice (return to my blacksmith brother [crying][crying][crying])
It's a rare monster hunting book, and it's well written.
I feel like it was too frustrating when the protagonist was manipulated in the middle period [face covering]
My heart surged when I read it. Even though I have never played this game, I feel from this book that the author has really worked hard. Every character in the book is vivid and has a soul. This book has been given a soul by the author.
This book deserves 5 stars
Update soon, the plot is very interesting. Although I only play p3, xx and rise, it is really interesting.
The plot is good, but the ending is a bit too fast [crying]
Although I play Shield Axe, this Tachi novel is really good. As the first Monster Hunter fanfic I have read, the plot and combat descriptions feel much better than many other types of novels, and because I know the action, it feels like reading a novel. It is the slowest I have read among novels with the same word count. It may be that there are too few Monster Hunters so the rating is not high. The author must not discontinue it. If you discontinue a bad book, you will only be relieved. Losing a good book is as uncomfortable as logging out of an account that has been played for 4 years [top post]
A nice monster hunting novel, I was very surprised to see it on Tomato
Wow, it's incredible to see a Monster Hunter novel (//∇//) There aren't many books about Monster Hunter. Come on, author.
Overall, it's not bad. The reason for the points deduction is the conspiracy between people. Why did I come to see Monster Hunter? It was to see the battle of wits and courage between humans and monsters, and the camaraderie with teammates. I wasn't here to see other people playing tricks. I fight monsters with my brothers on the front line, and I want to play tricks with you when I get home? How far can I go? What about the assassination troops of the union wearing speed cat suits? Can we kill all these people? It affects my hunting!
Although the game has more routines, it is still exciting. If the monsters can have some combinations of moves other than AI, and the protagonist can use the fixed actions in the game less rigidly, the look and feel will be better.
It's actually a monster hunter! ! Miss you! When it comes to monsters torturing people, I have to think of the works of Ghost Teacher. Talk about ghost teacher%*! #&
Come on, author, there are not as many people playing Monster Hunter as you think, so there are not many people who give rewards, and even if they play, they may not read Tomatoes, but the author must continue to write for the sake of Monster Hunter.
There are five stars for Monster Hunting. The author just doesn't finish the work and doesn't end up in the palace.
It's a pretty good novel, I've read about a hundred chapters. Fighting Gu Long basically relies on cheating to kill him, and his own abilities are basically all about maneuvering, but that's right, after all, it's not a numerical value in the game, so this is normal. It just feels like the equipment has been a bit out of date. Over a hundred chapters, this is a classic image of a child's mother, a very vivid portrayal of a single mother. Her pathological desire for control and insecurity created such a character. This is a wake-up call for readers, and I hope everyone can pay more attention to their families and maintain their own harbor. Also, well, I was attracted to the big ward. You hinted at me in your introduction, but why are there girls in the text?
Regardless of the monster hunting background, this is a novel worth reading, and it is not just a cover-up novel.
There are really few novels about monster hunting these days. Please do your best, author.
It can only be considered mediocre in online articles, but it is very good in monster hunting articles. It ranks among the top five monster hunting articles in Tomato. Those who are interested in monster hunting can read it.
It's novel. Even though I've never played and am a cloud player, I think this novel is the best monster hunting novel in Tomato. Come on! Great author!
It's really good, mainly because you can see that the author's writing is really improving. The plot is really good in the middle and later stages. There are indeed a lot of minor flaws in the early stage. Regarding one thing, many people may have doubts. Here is a little spoiler. The system was created by Zulong's taboos, and the protagonist is their tool to pull them over, so the protagonist's early doubts are not unreasonable.
Specialize in one weapon. . . Not to mention it's bad, I'm already tired of it, especially the tachi, the tachi from the two new generation games, the new hunter's favorite
Is there Huihuiʕ ᵔᴥᵔ ʔyou know the evil star with silver wings!
Surprisingly beautiful
💯💯💯💯, But the flow of emotion is a problem
If Mira Luz is the heroine, there should be many MH players coming to see it, after all...
As a monster hunting article, it is very good. I have played several generations of Monster Hunter P3, xx, World and Rise. I felt very involved when reading this book. It is very good~
Well written, come on, author
Not bad, I like it very much
Why not play with bows and arrows [angry]
It's too loose, but it's pretty good on tomatoes.
It's really rare to see fanfics about Monster Hunter.
This novel is good, and there are pictures. I always thought that the protagonist could take off, but it seems to be slow to take off, and the person behind the scenes (Dragon) always comes out and jumps.
Three brushes, not bad The setting is described in detail, and the protagonist has a brain but is not systematic (system is taboo) And the characterization of the scene is pretty good. There were not many knives, but Cheng Feng was knifed twice (return to my blacksmith brother [crying][crying][crying])
It's a rare monster hunting book, and it's well written. I feel like it was too frustrating when the protagonist was manipulated in the middle period [face covering]
My heart surged when I read it. Even though I have never played this game, I feel from this book that the author has really worked hard. Every character in the book is vivid and has a soul. This book has been given a soul by the author. This book deserves 5 stars
Update soon, the plot is very interesting. Although I only play p3, xx and rise, it is really interesting. The plot is good, but the ending is a bit too fast [crying]