Demon Slayer: Becoming the Black Death Mou Queen

It's so good, it would be great if there were dozens of chapters added at once, although that's not possible. Anyway, it looks great! ! Although I always hope that the brotherhood will turn sour, hehehe, so I wrote a fanfic myself, hehehe. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's really good. I really like the CP of Shi Mou and Yuanyi.

To be honest, I have known about this article for a long time, but I have never read it (I was blown away). I tied it in one breath. The first impression was that it was very bland. It was not a very exciting article but surprisingly it kept me reading. The author's writing style is really good for a newcomer, but there are a lot of emoticons, which makes me feel a little bit out of touch. The character creation is very creative, but being too creative can lead to bugs in the outline. All in all, it's well written and worth a try.

I feel that although this book is a bit more daily, it is also satisfying to resolve some of the regrets of some characters. After all, when watching anime, most of them are basically tragedies. And for the author's other systematic character "Lin Feng", no matter what the character is like, it is normal to have some disgust, and there are also people who like it. After all, no matter which character is good or bad and how I like it, it is really good for me, and it is also the author's excellence to create this disgusting character! (Personal opinion, please don't comment)

Although I feel that the character of Lin Feng is well created and fits the arrogant character of a time traveler, it feels inexplicably satisfying to write it to death. In addition, the writing is almost very good, and the subsequent plot is very smooth after the revision [laughs]

Like it very much! ! Hehe, seeing how hardworking the author is, I give you five stars.

After reading Chapter 160, the original characters are still interesting. Lin Feng appears inexplicably, but he is really a male character with bad points and bright points. In a sense, the author has written it quite successfully.

It's August, please update soon! [Crazy] Donkey, rest, slaughter, understand? [Laughing evilly] I think that things like the way of heaven should be the destiny in the dark, not the deus ex machina. For example, Komaji's transformation into a ghost was handled very well. There is no need for Lin Feng to exist. Chitong doesn't need a system, just be your top stringer. Whatever the system can do, the boss can also do. If the world line is to be closed, it can be written as Wumei happened to meet Tong Mo Suyu while shopping, and returned to the origin. There is no need for God to take action. Heaven just controls the coincidence of fate. This is best. [Thinking] Also, the protagonist has very little sense of presence! [Crying] I want to see Hei Shimo fight! ! Because I really wanted to watch the final battle but stopped here, I decided to try to write a few chapters myself! Fan creation is here! [Laughing evilly] Chapter 168 The decisive battle can be read in the story in the book circle! Chapter 169 is coming! 170 On the way!

I like it very much. There is a lot of room for improvement in this book! I personally think it has great potential! And it's very to my liking! If the plot develops to a later stage, can Su Yu be resurrected? I really like Suyu! All in all, I love it! It would be better if Lin Feng could go offline quickly! (Just my personal opinion!)

It took me a few days to finish reading it. It is one of the very few long-form books (referring to about 100 chapters or longer) that I couldn't help but keep reading. It's so pretty! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The author's writing style is still a bit immature, but it's okay. The subject matter is novel and interesting. However, I really like the subject of multiple time travellers, but the author's previous writing is really good, so I gave it four stars. Overall, this novel is really good, highly recommended! ! Furthermore, I think the plot is a bit too daily-oriented. It could use some more passionate battles.

Unfortunately, the time traveler added later ruined the entire book and returned to the original work. What's written on the back looks like shit

This is a good-looking novel, but it is just a little too confusing, especially this one, Lin Feng, who is systematic. However, according to the author's description, each character's story is so beautiful at the beginning, but it turns out to be a contrast at the end. This is a slightly sad novel, but all in all it is a very good novel.

Regarding the fact that the child who worked hard to raise was turned into a ghost by Wuhan. If you put him in for a moment, you will feel mad. I hope that the children will regain their memories and return to their old father in the future. By the way, the brotherhood between the Step Kingdom brothers is really good. It's the love between family members who like unconditional trust and tolerance. In the second life, they were reborn by chance. Will they also end up as human beings in this life?

Read it in one sitting. It's a very interesting Demon Slayer fanfic. Although Lin Feng has some poisonous points, I can still accept it. To be honest, I really like Yuanyi. Please don't die.

The book is really nice, the short stories are well written, the characters are well created, and the daily conversations are quite interesting, but can the author resume updating it quickly? It's been over a year, when can you come back?

Woohoo, I have never seen such a good article. The characters are well portrayed, there are many interactions, and occasionally hilarious plots. The descriptions and details of various emotions are really greatｸﾞｯ!(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

Wow wow wow, I feel like it's good to watch (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, the author is very attentive, readers are reading all the words, why is the update discontinued [crying] [crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] It's really based on the original work, there are many details [like]

It's very exciting. The CP pairing of Jiguo Yuan and Jiguo Yansheng knocked me to death!

This is the evaluation before Chapter 92 This was after Lin Feng appeared.

It's very well written and very imaginative, but I don't know if the plot can be stabilized after so many systems are traversed by the time traveler.

The storyline is very exciting, the characters are vivid, very interesting, and make people immerse themselves in emotions. I especially like the image of our protagonist. Good looking\(//∇//)\Author, come on, write more!

I like this book very much. The author's writing style is very good [like it]. I hope the author can continue to write more exciting articles (although I don't know how to define an author's writing style, but I just feel comfortable reading it. If you don't like it, don't criticize it)

The author should update soon. Update it quickly, update it quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Five-star praise, except that Lin Feng Traveler is a bit uncomfortable for me (I didn't feel it was too poisonous, either because my poison resistance is high, or because I looked at it too quickly and the poison didn't catch up with me and it went offline😝) There is no problem, I just caught up, come on, the author is great🎉

It's very beautiful. Hei Shimo is getting farther and farther on the road of raising cubs, and Yuanyi is resurrected.

It's great, and the author, I know you're a little tired, but don't be tired yet. Can't get enough! ! ! It's really super beautiful! ♡(զｖզ｡)

Pretty good-looking, isn't it? When can it be updated? 💔It feels like it's not enough.

It's so beautiful, why isn't the rating high?

It's very interesting, I beg the author to come back soon.