Harry Potter and the Dark Child

For a super Harry Potter fan, this book is like a sequel to JK Rowling. Not only is it in line with the plot of the original work, but the plot is reasonable and rich, and the writing is also very good. It doesn't look like other fan fictions that are random. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing. Let's just say that from the perspective of the atmosphere, I think it's great. Like, I have a small suggestion. If you can add English spells when the characters use spells, and mark the Chinese in parentheses, it will be more interesting. Of course, this is just my suggestion. The author should not change his original considerations because of my suggestions. I hope the author can update it soon. I will always support the author with great [love]

The logic of the plot is reasonable, and the characters are consistent with the original work. However, there are some censorship of the original CP (this book is Haha CP), Dumbledore's conspiracy theory and the whitewashing of Voldemort (strictly speaking, it is a positive description of Voldemort, it does not deny that he is bad, it just seems that he is not as bad as the original work). Overall, it does look like a sequel to the original work. If you can accept the above plot flaws, it is highly recommended.

It's good-looking, and it filled my gap in the movie version. Why don't you want a eunuch? Even if it's slower, don't end it suddenly, okay? Although I said it yesterday, I still want to say it today. It is indeed a good book. The characters and descriptions are very close to the real images in the movie version. The plot is also very exciting for what will happen next. Moreover, the book will not be limited to the United Kingdom for now. It is indeed very exciting. The author gives a big boost [laughter] [like]

Why are there not enough people to rate this book? This book is absolutely terrible! Look at this emotional line, look at this grand worldview, look at this grasp of each character, look ah ah ah ah ah ah it's so beautiful oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh, maybe, even though the official match is split, everyone is blessed by the magic of love! Really good-looking, highly recommended! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Although I have only read Chapter 18, I have to say that the author's writing is very good, and even the writing style is very similar to J. K. Rowling. I don't know if you have noticed that the first, second, fourth, fifth and seventh of the seven Harry Potter films all have a part in which Harry is misunderstood, and the misunderstanding is finally solved at the end. This book by the author perfectly restores the original style of Harry Potter. Although Dumbledore in the book is a little over-written, there is nothing wrong with it. Dumbledore is just like Nick Fury in the Marvel movies. He always wants to keep everything in his hands. Many people are pawns used by him. He defeated Grindelwald decades ago and imprisoned Grindelwald in Nurmengard. Despite two months of confusion and a century of indescribable love, my love and I both died in the tower. It's very touching that the king's heart remains in the summer, but I have to say that Grindelwald did much better than Dumbledore. After reflecting on his life in Nurmengard, Grindelwald was calm and calm when facing Voldemort, as if he was relieved. Dumbledore, at this age, although he has given up his rights, has imposed his will on the people around him, the Order of the Phoenix, Harry, Hermione, Ron, etc., Many people. Take what is written in the author's book about Dumbledore asking Hermione to give up her feelings for Harry. He still wants to sacrifice Hermione and Harry's feelings in order to defeat Voldemort. What does this mean? Dumbledore has not changed and is still subconsciously supporting "for the greater good"!

The author added a perfect ending to the original work, and logically sorted out the details of many unreasonable parts of the original work. After all, a highly intelligent and talented hexagonal witch would choose to marry a guy who only talks big words, likes to gossip behind his back, cheats and refuses to admit his faults, and has a very wretched smile. He would not be able to make such a decision without being struck by the Imperius Curse ten times. There is also Ginny hugging and kissing a lot of men in the team and having an affair, and finally marrying her favorite lover, the savior Harry. Later, it seemed that she also joined the professional Quidditch team, so I laughed and suggested that Harry should take his three children for a paternity test. There must be a surprise. It can be said that the Weasley brother and sister in the original work are Rowling's biological children. It's so unfair to Harry and Hermione. In the end, they just messed up the story based on their own preferences. So this book can make up for years of regrets and give Harry and Hermione a relatively fair ending.

This is the novel whose writing style and Harry's character are most similar to the original novel I have ever seen! Some of the conspiracies and truths about Voldemort and Dumbledore may seem outrageous at first glance, but when considered in context, they still stand up to scrutiny, and the logic is very perfect! The main CP Harry and Hermione's emotional lines are also handled very well, not abrupt and in line with the characters! This is definitely the continuation of my favorite drama in the country! [Love][love][love]

I was stabbed so hard before I read Chapter 57. I thought it would be a Western magical realism novel that would take into account the beauty of magic and the sadness of reality [I almost cried] [crying] Then the author started to create various hooks and settings for Harry, and forced the introduction of new behind-the-scenes masterminds, such as buying a batch of wands for the prisoners of Akazban, Charlie helping the manager or not, snake + deer = green dragon, the plot is so dense that I don't know where to start. Personal suggestion, change the ending to: There are no descendants of the dynasty, children and grandchildren of Voldemort, everything is just Harry's fantasy to resist the Soul Eater after he was thrown into Akazban by his political enemies [Learned]

It is very in line with JK Rowling's technique, fits the original work, and fully embodies the characters' personalities. It is as if you are having a conversation with them. It is immersive. It is not unrealistic at all, not bloody, and does not hit the mark. I want to recommend him to Aunt Rowling, obtain the copyright, and then let the author publish it @

After reading Harry Potter fan fiction, I realized that many people are just Dumbledore's pawns.

Absolutely one of the best fan works, fully worthy of the "Harry Potter canonical sequel" on the cover. This book has Rowling's style in many places, making people think that this is the book she wrote; in terms of storyline, Harry Potter becomes a victim of political struggle, is framed and imprisoned, discovers the truth, and finally defeats the mastermind behind the scenes. I think the three more controversial points are the whitewashing of Tom Riddle, Dumbledore's conspiracy theory and the dismantling of the original CP. First of all, Tom Riddle is not actually whitewashing. In this article, Tom Riddle originally did evil, but not much. He fell in love with a pure-blood. Squib, when he got up, he only wanted to spend the rest of his life peacefully with her. After controlling the basilisk and accidentally killing Myrtle, he made a notebook and *sealed his dark side in it*. After that, he killed the descendant of Hufflepuff and took back the locket and stopped doing evil. However, the villain in this article designed to kill his lover, causing him to fall into madness again and become the Dark Lord. After that, Dumbledore entered his lover's grave and took away her grave goods to protect Harry, which made him even more painful. Dumbledore designed the death of Harry's parents in this article. I think this is a reasonable adaptation, because his actions are too ambiguous, and it is reasonable to use imagination. In this article, Rohe was changed to Hahe, which I don't dislike, but I think it should be loyal to the original work. All in all, this is an almost perfect second creation, impeccable.

All I can say is that it's really good-looking, I was blown away by it, and this book really has a world view. It's like reading another sequel after Harry Potter defeats Voldemort. The author is really thoughtful. In fact, I have read this book before, but I couldn't understand it. It's really OK to see it today. I will review it later when I have the literary talent.

A very good continuation. I have read it completely. Although it is quite small, the writing surprised me. Especially the setting, it is very attractive and strange enough. Sure enough, the savior is only sought after by people when he is the savior. People are fickle and it is difficult to be suspicious. Although there are some people with weak brains in the comment area, the overall comments are very harmonious and very good. I have invited my classmates to read it. I hope this book will get better and better! I'm not very good at writing long reviews, so I can only write a medium review [ Eat Melon ]

It cannot be described as wonderful, because this book is more than wonderful! While the characters are close to the original work, they can also create such vivid second creations. The best thing is that some doubtful points in the original work have been reasonably imagined and continued. By the way, the ending part surprised me, how could it be written with such artistic conception! ! Love it, love it

Objectively speaking, the first 2/3 or so is almost perfect, but some of the plot design in the last 1/3 is a little outrageous, and some details are not handled properly. But if you take into account that the original work also has some weird places, these small problems can be ignored. It can even be considered that this is an orthodox sequel, filling in most of the pitfalls of the original work. The writing is excellent and fits the original work. It can be said that it gives an almost best ending. I would like to ask about the author's attitude towards Rohe and Hahe. Is the author's opposition to Rohe because he dislikes Ron or because he thinks their personalities are incompatible or for some other reason? Does the author think Hach is extremely suitable or somewhat suitable, in terms of personality alone? Just for discussion, nothing else. Today I suddenly noticed that I had saved the last chapter and didn't want to finish it. Now I think of the biggest problem: Harry inexplicably became proficient in various magics in the later period, and was a bit too strong.

As a student who is not good at Chinese, I can only say that this book is so damn well written!

This book is so good. I really don't like reading this kind of writing, but I really love this book. I hope the author will update it soon, otherwise he will really send me the razor blade. The suspense set up in this book is also very popular with me, and the content is close to the original work. It is the kind of book that is not satisfying until you see the ending. The author's writing style is really good. I really don't understand why so few people have read such a beautiful book. The author quickly updated me, but I have to say, I update it once a day and wait four or five days to gain weight before reading it. It's really great! ! ! And the plot is so great! Praise! La! For a person who makes a lot of noise and makes a lot of noise, he is simply too friendly (but I actually want to see Ron chasing his wife in the crematorium, it's super sweet just thinking about it)

The praise is completely worthy. Although this book is a continuation, although it is quite different from the original work, its logic is clear. Large differences are not necessarily bad and can create the ups and downs of the plot. My final verdict is that it's worth watching.

It's such a beautiful novel, why no one has read it? It's really strange. It's so good. Dumbledore's conspiracy theory. Come on, author. When will I be able to give out gifts? I don't know what the next two parts will be about.

It's a dream come true, I love it so much, Harry and Hermione are together! ! !

The dispute between Hermione and Ron is a bit like in reality, but it's quite interesting. Hermione and Harry are together [Adoration]

The ideas in this book made me feel fresh and reasonable, and the most important thing is that Harry and Hermione are together, I am very happy ~

A very good fan novel, the plot is ups and downs, and it satisfies the fantasy of Harry and Hermione at the end of the original work [Adoration]

The writing is worthy of five stars, but I may have a different opinion on the content (perhaps I would think such a story is too dark), and it feels a bit like conspiracy for the sake of conspiracy. The villain appears a bit suddenly, and the protagonist and supporting characters are a bit extreme in character. Overall, it's a good book, but it may be a bit toxic for different people. It's worth taking the time to read and think about it.

I think this book is in the same line as the original work, very natural. I don't know why the score is so low. Many plots in it are like those laid out in the original work, which is very beautiful.

Whether it's the author's writing style or his imagination, it's really very good, and it really fits the character of the original work. Sometimes I get very angry watching it and want to scold Harry Potter. But this proves that the author has written well. Anyway, I feel very involved. After reading it, I think it deserves a five-star rating. And I loved that Harry and Hermione were together at the end.

Well, it satisfied my craving for Harry Potter

Okay, but when will the second part be released?

I've only seen half of it, it's quite interesting, it's a way of clearing Voldemort's name

To be honest, it's really amazing, but the author promised to have a second part [Thoughts]