Pirates Reborn: Unravel the Mystery of the Fetus at the Beginning

Part of it relies on the support of peers, and the rest is the author's strength. Disadvantages: The fighting scenes lack tension and lack of visual appeal. Suggestion: refer to the writing method of fighting scenes in "What should I do if I get stronger and stronger".

Since the author currently has too few chapters, I am not very good at judging. I can only say that it is not poisonous so far and can be consumed with confidence. It feels more and more watery. Maybe the author has no inspiration? Really, I personally think that the content of Incarnation of the God Stick can be briefly mentioned. After all, there should be very few people who haven't read the original work and come to read the fanfic, right? It's like waiting for several days, and the updated chapters are just a matter of reading the original work again.

I particularly like this book. Now looking for a good book in Tomato is like looking for gold in 💩.

I personally like this kind of subject matter. I hope the author can write it down well.

It's very nice, I hope the author will update it more. Who can see this?

It is better to give resource fruits to dead objects Because dead things are equivalent to eternity Death is not permanent for living people

I can only say that it's okay, but Wudi Shuangwen saw 20 pictures, which are basically equivalent to the strength of an organization of the Four Emperors. It even feels like it's a bit more advanced in terms of technology. No, it should be beyond the world in terms of technology.

Very good, but can you write more about the struggle for national development?

A very good pirate novel, comparable to One Piece: King of Pirates. I hope it won't end badly. Come on! ! !

Come on keep working hard

I personally think it's pretty good.

I don't know why this book is, I just think it looks good [please read carefully] I feel so bored, I'm drowning

Good looking, five stars to support the author, come on [salute][salute][salute]

Not bad, the logic is relatively reasonable

The author writes well. I really like this genre. I will add more and more.

I really like this kind of subject matter [Adoration][Adoration]. I hope the author will write more after finishing it. Are there any novels with similar themes? It's best if it has more words, but it's okay if it has less words.

The number one pirate farming novel is undoubtedly the first! Some people can't stand it, but it's just that they haven't reached Bafu yet, and they are still growing so far. I think it's pretty good. At least compared to most pirate stories, this one ranks first to second in my book.

It is considered the best among pirates.

It's worth reading. Come and support one of the few good pirate stories.

Very well written I hope the author can add one more chapter every day [laughing] No matter what difficulties you encounter, don't be afraid, face him bravely, come on Oli [laughter]

Personally, I think it's well written. If you like Pirates fandom, you can read it.

It's really beautiful, come on author

I quite like this kind of books

Come on, it looks good. I like it.

Actually, it's pretty good, that's all

This book is very good, but the rating is only 6.8

The writing is pretty good, but there are too few fighting scenes in hot-blooded comics.

It looks good, but it's just too little (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

It's a rare book about One Piece. Come on, author.

Not bad, give it a good review.