Whitebeard: I Was Gone for Two Months, and Now I’m the 17Th Emperor?

Snow Egg's new book, please support me and give me lots of praise, thank you all! (Friends who like to read One Piece can click on the author's name to view other books.) Welcome to the new book "Pirates: Give Whitebeard a Panda Eye at the Beginning"!

It's beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Hurry up and advance the plot! ! ! Waiting to see the battle on the top! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] I would like to ask again if there is a heroine?

Not bad, quite fresh [laughs evilly]

The subject matter is good, keep working hard. One more thing, don't be too lazy. Write with your heart. It's best to update a hundred pictures every day. Believe it or not, I will pop your anus.

With this rating, the spectators are showing mercy. First, the combat power collapsed, and basic battles ended within a few seconds (I have finished Chapter 103 so far) Second, the characters' personalities have changed too much, and the characters that appear are basically the same. Third, I personally feel that too much text is spent on things that are not very important. For example, the part where the foil sword goes to Fish-Man Island to fight the general star, I feel it is a bit long. Fourth, it is too simple and brainless for the protagonist to improve the strength of Team Whitebeard teammates. Personal suggestion: You can lengthen the time period for improving the captain's strength. For example, eat the skill fruit and add a few words from the protagonist, and then the captains will slowly master it through practice. They will never - barely - master - become proficient - sublimate (basically ignore the CD). The second suggestion is to return the character's personality. In this way, the combat power can be basically stabilized. Of course, it depends on the author's estimation of how long it took the captains to master their skills and how much strength they have improved. Personally, I think the improvement is too great. But this requires the author to carefully consider the timeline issue!

I think Ace should also be given the skill of a big tree to create a forest and burn it at the same time.

Very nice

The author hurriedly wrote and I wanted to know what it was like to go to the Navy Headquarters. There are 17 emperors plus Whitebeard and the protagonist, a total of 19. How could Marine Vando stop saving Ace? In the end, he had to hold the Five Old Stars and beat up the Celestial Dragons.

Good

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite a while since this chapter was released. Are you done? After the break, please update as soon as possible! Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this! [Follow me when you see it and copy it immediately]