New Nation: I Build It Up Alone and Become a Great Warlord

There is no smart person around to forcibly reduce the intelligence, and while saying that you are protecting your family and the country, you promised others to let the family go, and then tied the plain-headed people to a tree for the recruits to practice assassination. They are still weak women. This is really disgusting and hypocritical. Even if you don't want to let them go, it's okay to lock them up temporarily, but it's really disgusting to have to do that.

I am the author of a new book. Thank you all for your five-star reviews.

An author with incorrect views. When you massacre the bandits in the village, you only kill the chief culprit. You even accepted a soldier here. The problem is that there are dozens of women still alive in the village. Also joined your team. So funny. I have been reading online novels for more than ten years. Seeing something weird for the first time.

The protagonist is a special forces soldier traveling through time. He behaves worse than an ordinary person. I decisively abandoned the book, no wonder the ratings were so bad. If this isn't bad, it would be strange. Compared with other similar books. Not even a little bit worse.

Well, seeing as you are a new author, I will give you five stars (I originally wanted to give you three or four stars, but thinking about how well you have written as a new author), what about your military writing? It is not suitable for the current market. Let me list it for you. 1: The opening is a little too careful and attention to detail, which is not a bad thing. The main military text is too detailed and difficult to read. After all, it will make readers feel that time is passing very hard, it is difficult to understand, and it feels like the pace is deliberately slowed down (but I also discovered that you are not too detailed and very stupid) 2: Regarding the price aspect, there is a slight contradiction (but I couldn't stand it after reading the first hundred chapters). In the first chapter, you said that one billion silver is worth a Shu land, but later you planned to establish a self-defense group and said that one hundred taels of gold is nothing to the protagonist, but for a mayor (Gou Fugui), he is indeed very rich (don't think about it, this is what I am talking about without details) (The rest of this is mainly what I want to say. You can comment on it. I mainly don't understand it.) First of all, you came to the town government alone (I will not read the original text and include the author). Although you have a gun, the following words are not reasonable. First of all, you are like this, but according to the time, since you have one hundred taels of gold, after you leave, will Gou Fugui send his subordinates to inquire about you? You didn't deal with it here (of course it's understandable in the novel, but I feel like the details here aren't handled very well) Go to bed, I have to leave at five o'clock tomorrow, we were chatting during the day

It's better not to include female soldiers in this kind of article. It's so annoying.

It turns out that there is a reason for the low rating. There is a system that makes such a trashy chicken reborn as a hairy idiot.

Personal preference! I feel verbose and hesitant! Buying a clock takes several chapters! Spending a day killing ants will make you rich! And border guards from time to time...

The writing was tedious, and I lost the desire to read it when I saw the system tasks. 500,000 Troops, one billion taels of silver, it seemed like an impossible task, and it was not an explosive system. The more I read, the more rubbish it became. When you see other people commenting on you, you still quarrel with others, which is really confusing...

This is not invincible. If you kill a creature, you will give it to the gun. It makes you uncomfortable to see Zhao Tiezhu sworn to you. He swore to everyone.