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I am the author of a new book. Thank you all for your five-star reviews.

Well, seeing as you are a new author, I will give you five stars (I originally wanted to give you three or four stars, but thinking about how well you have written as a new author), what about your military writing? It is not suitable for the current market. Let me list it for you. 1: The opening is a little too careful and attention to detail, which is not a bad thing. The main military text is too detailed and difficult to read. After all, it will make readers feel that time is passing very hard, it is difficult to understand, and it feels like the pace is deliberately slowed down (but I also discovered that you are not too detailed and very stupid) 2: Regarding the price aspect, there is a slight contradiction (but I couldn't stand it after reading the first hundred chapters). In the first chapter, you said that one billion silver is worth a Shu land, but later you planned to establish a self-defense group and said that one hundred taels of gold is nothing to the protagonist, but for a mayor (Gou Fugui), he is indeed very rich (don't think about it, this is what I am talking about without details) (The rest of this is mainly what I want to say. You can comment on it. I mainly don't understand it.) First of all, you came to the town government alone (I will not read the original text and include the author). Although you have a gun, the following words are not reasonable. First of all, you are like this, but according to the time, since you have one hundred taels of gold, after you leave, will Gou Fugui send his subordinates to inquire about you? You didn't deal with it here (of course it's understandable in the novel, but I feel like the details here aren't handled very well) Go to bed, I have to leave at five o'clock tomorrow, we were chatting during the day

The first few pictures look good. I hope the author will work hard to code words and give us a better reading experience.

I must support you. Keep working and look after you.

After watching it, I felt pretty good at first, unlike the Republic of China style where people were secretive and didn't dare to say anything! Hope the update will be faster

There aren't that many children who love each other, actually. But in today's fast-paced life, some people don't allow it, and there are some elements of female videos in books written by men.

Come on, Iron Man! No matter what! [Laughing awkwardly][Laughing awkwardly][Laughing awkwardly] I still have to give five stars? Come on! ! ! ┈┈┈┈▕▔╲┈┈┈┈ ┈┈┈┈┈▏▕┈┈┈┈ ┈┈┈┈┈▏▕▂▂▂┈ ▂▂▂▂╱┈▕▂▂▂▏ ▉▉▉┈┈┈▕▂▂▂▏ ▉▉▉┈┈┈▕▂▂▂▏ ▔▔▔▔╲▂▕▂▂▂▏

A good book, five-star review

It's getting more and more flavorful, author, come on

Will it fail the review?

Not bad, come on, author!

Money is not meant to not affect

I love the author so much, cheers

I see it's okay now,

Good looking, super cool

Very good work!

This book is still good in Tomato, but the score is a bit low.

A great piece of patriotism