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It's very beautiful, but there are too few updates. I'm wondering why the rating is so low? But as far as the speed of this book is concerned, if the rating is low, just give it a low rating to save yourself from being screened [laughing][laughing]

So far, it's very good. I like that the protagonist can obtain weapons and equipment from dreams, and the driving is very stable. I often make mistakes.

Absolutely a good book, if it can be written more than 1,000 times, it can be shoulder to shoulder with the most popular books. Woo woo woo (┯_┯), the author is adding more updates. I give you my first time (first time tipping, first time book review, first time not skipping chapters). Please update a few more chapters every day. ˉˉˉˉˉˉThe story line is super exciting, and the world view is also very grand. I can write about the Bone Corpse Demon, Night City, God, Blind Sword Girl, Killer Doctor, Twilight Crusaders, Human World, Daily Clockwork Apple, Aberrant Secret Cabinet, and Pawn Association. , The follow-up of "The Stitched Noblesse", shopkeeper Ji's past romantic history (and Seese), and Ji Ge's handsome yuppie, we must write to the 1000th chapter, persistence is victory ✌ˉˉˉˉˉIt is better to die than to live stitched together (Clockwork Apple) This is the truth. Hey hey hey (ºº ) Apple, my clockwork apple [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] [lick the screen] There is also Cat Lady Ji Shopkeeper/Blind Sword Girl Ji Shopkeeper + clockwork apple. You can also drop it hehe hehe (ºº )

This is the most novel and favorite book I have read in the past two years. Advantages: First, the setting is very novel and the world view (basis) is relatively complete. The framework is more detailed. Second, the characters have distinct personality characteristics. The main characters have their own characteristics, which can make people very impressed. Third, the plot is relatively smooth and there are no major flaws. Disadvantages: First, although it provides a very grand world system, it only provides a basic world view, which leaves readers with a incomplete and incomplete feeling. Second, although it can be seen that the author wants to write a crazy and chaotic world, the author's writing power is slightly insufficient. The madness of the world and the characters are all superficial, such as: sex, violence, and money. Third, the plot (part) has obvious foreshadowing, no major main line has been found, and the hidden line is relatively vague. Although every incident that happened to the protagonist is relatively complete, the interweaving of the storyline is relatively confusing, making it a headache to read. Fourth, the descriptions of various items look dreamy, but actually make it more difficult for readers to read. Some are descriptions of functions, but they have no idea what they are describing. Fifth, the force system is a bit confusing. To sum it up in one sentence, the protagonist is weaker than anyone else, but he can defeat anyone. Summary: A very good book, but the author needs to work hard and continue to improve, so that I can have better books to read. PS: If you have a strong imagination or low fear resistance, please don't read this book. In the past two days, I have always felt like there are worms crawling deep in my brain. I feel that if the author's level rises a few levels, this book may actually become a cult classic.

I couldn't understand it at first, but after a while, after reading more than a dozen pictures, I became more and more addicted to it. I took the time to finish reading it in two days. Overall, the writing is good, but the early stage is too confusing, and it is difficult to understand what is what, and it is easy to discourage readers. It is much better with Dr. Yuan. In addition, I really hate those people in the review group who leave negative reviews and bad ratings after reading less than 30 minutes. Can you please read a few more before talking? Most books are not always good from beginning to end. I hope the author's writing will get better and better. At worst, he can rest for a few days and finish it once he recovers. Don't exhaust your body. Thanks for resolving my recent book drought, see you soon.

The writing style of this book is different from traditional novels. It is very novel and refreshing.

The writing is very good. The first time I saw this book, I felt that it was different. After reading it, I don't know how many times better it is than those books that only know how to read words. I like it very much. Come on, keep writing!

The world view is still a relatively common weird world view, but when you look at the title, you can tell that the author is playing with something very new. Compared with Tomato's other novels, this one is relatively niche. Unlike Tomato's books, it feels like a European light novel. It mainly focuses on jokes, curiosity and hell jokes. People who like it like it very much, but people who don't like it can't accept it. Some of the content and settings in it are a bit like playing RPG mods in the past. The characters are well created, and the scenes can be imagined. The plot can be said to be relatively reasonable for the time being (actually it doesn't matter whether it is reasonable for this type). The characters have more inner drama. But because combat mainly relies on equipment, and many of the equipment have rule-based special effects, the combat environment is very complicated to write, and you really can't understand it if you don't read it carefully. Having said so much, I feel pretty good about myself. I have read almost all of Tomato's books in various genres. The general plots that I can read now are pretty much the same. It's rare to find a book that gives me a change of taste and I'm already satisfied.

It's similar to Xianyu in terms of type, but it's more stable to drive than Xianyu, and doesn't have the slight blockage of Xianyu. The overall quality is very good. The plot at the end was a bit too mediocre, so I quit it and will watch it again if I have the chance.

Come on, author, good reading! It would be nice if I could write more.

The setting is very rich and has a grammatical atmosphere. The other weird settings are also very good. The most important thing is the character of the protagonist, I like it very much! Come on)

Not bad, weird, slightly yellow, Cthulhu's multi-system store flow weird article. An ordinary perfect work, above the level of fairy grass, but not at the top. In the words of the author: Although I look at you as if you are looking at garbage, you are actually a good book. The protagonist is a wicked, stingy and drunkard

Not bad, not bad. It is in the same genre as the novel about another world. They are both good subjects. The author keeps up the good work! ! ! !

Big cheers for the author! I don't think you want it because of a bad ending By the mysterious and cheerful Silver Gunslinger I'll send you all kinds of weird stuff Happy happy happy 😆! Happy happy happy 😆! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧ [Laughing evilly]

I really like the character settings in this book, such as the poem about the Blind Sword Girl: "People say it is good to cultivate immortality and become a Taoist, so I will go to Wuji." The black smoke steps on the snow and smiles, the road to Ziwu Xuanmen is far away. The light of one sword pierced the Nine Netherworld, and the other sword reached across the sky. Even though the hatred of a hundred deaths has not been resolved, don't say that the hatred of becoming an immortal has been eliminated. Please offer your head to repay the old repayment, and spread the wine in front of the grave to inform the villagers. All my life I only care about Jianghu affairs, who cares who God will spare? " Really handsome!

God, the foreshadowing in the early stage is very natural. After reading the 150th chapter, I almost become a god. The only comparable novel I have read on Tomato before is the copy mirror. It is really rare to find a book with such exquisite writing on Tomato.

It's a very good book, but it's a pity that there is no female protagonist in it? Moreover, the introduction seems to focus on developing system trading invincible articles, but the main text pays more attention to story details (such as equipment settings and character plots) and humorous style.

It's very interesting, and the author must finish it in a thousand chapters!

It's really interesting. This book is really good. It's almost as good as Xianyu's The Pharmacist.

The writing is very good, both in terms of writing style and storyline, but the sense of immersion is not enough, or I can't get into it.

Awesome! Although I'm stuck in writing, I really like what a friend said in the comment area: I'm stuck, I hope you end abruptly every time at the most exciting moment in your life. ——But the author will continue to update, and the most exciting part of his life will continue. Really enjoyed this book! I'm going to recommend it to my friends.

The imagination is too big, it feels like an RPG world upgrade game to fight monsters, and there are many unknown gods who strongly recommend this book. The imagination is too big, many equipments are designed by book friends in the book circle, which makes it feel immersive.

It's very good. It's very detailed in every aspect, the logic is rigorous and coherent, and there's a lot of seriousness and humor mixed in *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*. The character of the protagonist doesn't change much (it may be that the hidden emotions are slowly released later, which makes people feel a change)

It's very good to read. So far, there are no poisonous points in this book. The plot is vivid and tactful. It's a very good read. The author also updates it very quickly. I highly recommend it [Like] [Like] Why is this book not popular? If it is so beautifully written, why is it not popular? [What]

It's an interesting idea, I hope it doesn't collapse in the future.

I have been following it for a long time, and the rich content of the novel always attracted me

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The writing is really good, and every character is interestingly created. It's just that the update is a little slow, but it's worth it for this kind of plot. Come on, author! (If you engage in pornography, please use it in moderation and don't get banned)

The characters are described very delicately and it is definitely a good book [Blowing Kisses]

The first and middle stages are very good, but in the later period the author has a conscience and doesn't want to end in a dull way, so he can't continue writing, but the ending is also good and worth recommending.