Introduction: [Apocalypse + Rebirth + Space + Daily Life + Food]
After surviving for six years in the apocalypse, Li Siyuan finally died, but he did not expect to return to the apocalypse half a year ago. His parents were not dead yet, the space was still there, and there was still time for everything...
Stocking up on supplies, a family of three looks for a way to survive and their own paradise.
Ps: Recently I have been obsessed with articles about hoarding goods for the apocalypse. I have all kinds of fantasies every day. I am so itchy that I wrote this article. However, it is my first time for a complete novice to write an article. My writing style, logic and even common sense are very deficient. Please forgive me and give me some advice. (But please don't scold me, thank you!)
Reader comments
3 Stars, it's actually full marks for stocking up in advance. House hunting was abrupt. The plot is bizarre. There is also a 0 yuan purchase, which is 0 points convenient. It would be outrageous to move later. Why take the train when you can drive back? I suggest you rewrite it. . .
The writing is very good. There is no place where intelligence is forced to continue the plot. There are no apocalyptic stories that are the same as going out to find supplies. In many apocalyptic stories, no matter how much the heroine hoards, she forms a team to find supplies. It is all kinds of life and death. This heroine obviously just wants to survive as a family. Come on!
3 Stars, it's actually full marks for stocking up in advance. House hunting was abrupt. The plot is bizarre. There is also a 0 yuan purchase, which is 0 points convenient. It would be outrageous to move later. Why take the train when you can drive back? I suggest you rewrite it. . .
The writing is very good. There is no place where intelligence is forced to continue the plot. There are no apocalyptic stories that are the same as going out to find supplies. In many apocalyptic stories, no matter how much the heroine hoards, she forms a team to find supplies. It is all kinds of life and death. This heroine obviously just wants to survive as a family. Come on!