Black Robe Pickets: Twelve Talismans Violate the People of the Motherland

The author is an older office worker and cannot remember many things clearly. It must have been many years ago when I watched The Adventures of Jackie Chan. So when I started writing, I wrote it based on vague impressions. But as I went on and on, I checked and found that some of the impressions were not quite right. For example, the dog spell was too strong. Just patch it. Now I am checking the effectiveness of the twelve talismans while writing, trying not to deviate too far [laughing and crying] I just had an idea in the beginning and started writing it. It was nostalgic. After all, older working adults are young. Thank you for your support~ No, it's a horse charm...

Poison point: 1. To suppress golden fingers, the standard of combat strength is somewhat vague. 2. Some details are handled roughly, and names of people are wrong; sometimes the author does not remember previously written plots and overturns them temporarily. Highlights: 1. The revenge line in the early stage is well written. The poisonous points that appear are not a matter of principle. The feeling of revenge can outweigh the small poisonous points. 2: The character design is well written, and the behavior of the characters is logically consistent with the character design and consistent with the original work (TV series version) Summary: It's a passable online novel and can be read. The shortcoming is that the original plot after the revenge line is not attractive enough. It is recommended to read to 100,000 words, about 50 chapters, and stop reading when the protagonist destroys the Vought base for the second time. The original plot highlights after that are not enough to support continued reading.

Poor Azu was bullied like this, it feels so good, haha, the author will update it soon! ! !

It looks very good. I recommend adding the ability to transform into a Holy Lord and summon the Black Shadow Corps in the later stage [Cool]

Great, I love reading this kind of book! I hope there won't be a female protagonist. I really can't imagine how such a protagonist would get along with women.

I have already published this book on other platforms. I didn't expect you to use it directly. In order to verify whether what I said is correct, please quickly send the content of the next 100 chapters and I will take a look to see if it is the same as what I wrote. Otherwise I will sue you.

Emmmm What the author won't set up is that the Cow Talisman only has the same defense as strength in the muscle state.

It's perfect. I can say that it's a very good-looking black robe fan and it also has twelve talismans.

Not bad, but it always feels like a stallion novel... A kind of intuition

Where is this author? I was scrolling through Douyin today, and someone introduced this book. This road is too wide

Don't be deceived by the ratings. Although it's a bit toxic, the plot is quite interesting. It's already been mentioned in the comments, so I won't say more. Come on, author. Although there is a sister and a father, they don't play a big role. They don't have many roles, and they're not that dragging. It's just the fuse and reason for the protagonist's revenge and explosion. I hope the author will update it every day. The second part is very interesting. The ending of the first part is a bit hasty. I should meet my sister for the last time and tell everything.

Not bad, but when will the Corps come?

No, buddy, it took two years to write 200,000 words? So invincible

It's very well written, it's not a formulaic novel plot, it has the author's own style. It didn't update for a long time, which made me feel emo for a long time. Fortunately, it's back [laughs], come on!

What's awesome about the author is that he wrote my Butcher very well, and the character is the same as the original one.

The plot design is quite reasonable, the protagonist is strong, and he is not used to the natives of the original world. Everything is based on his own purpose. The first copy is good, but the ending is not clear, so he has to change the world. There is no ambiguous partner in the first copy, and it is well received.

Hey, the rating of this book is a little low. The plot is quite good. Why is the rating so low? 12 Spells, the imagination is quite good, and after being tortured by Watt Company for such a long time, an ordinary person has obtained a page like 12 spells, which is very logical. Anyway, he is a super human with a bottom line, written from the perspective of an ordinary person who has obtained super powers, written by YY ds

Not enough! Can the author please hurry up?

The Horse Talisman must have been chipped. It turns out that a flash of light can restore anything [eat melon], not just on yourself.

Dear author, come on, keep updating, I personally think it's still very interesting.

A very good Black Robe fanfic.

Very interesting plot, very appetizing language style, great, very beautiful

The pace is fast, not procrastinating, and the black robe can be smoothly integrated into its own setting. Each character has its own demands. It is not a brainless charm, so I must support it. I am a little curious about the story after the twelve talismans are collected. There is no need to completely restore the Twelve Talismans because each book has its own settings, but it is best to explain it if possible. I saw in the comments that many people used this to give low marks, which is a pity.

Except for the weakening of the 12 spells that suppress the protagonist, everything else is fine.

Horse charms can fix anything besides healing Snake charm can make objects invisible The angrier the dragon talisman is, the greater its power will be.

Come on! So far, it is still very well written. Some people don't like it because they like that kind of refreshing writing. Believe me, if you keep writing, your book will definitely stand out among books like "The Motherland". Author, your current rating is low, most likely because the number of pictures is too small, and people can't feel the true meaning of your book. Come on!

Do you need a reason for good reviews? I also hope that when I write a novel, it will be well received by others.

I didn't understand it, but I still gave it 4 stars. [Sinister smile]

The writing is okay, why is it only six points?

It's very well written, why did you stop? It's so cool! That's it