As Soon as I Travel Through Time, the System Will Teach Me to Rebel

Big cheers for the author. The writing and plot are both good. I would like to give you five stars to encourage you.

Overall, it's good. It's in line with my taste. I mainly focus on the growth of the protagonist and the historical system. There are failures, not successes, permanently. Overall, I give it a 5-point rating.

It's so beautiful. I give you a five-star rating. One more thing Regarding your matter of summoning military commanders, I think it can be done again. You can systemically load the generals' panels to the appropriate subordinates. This way, there will be less resistance. Suddenly, it's up to you to decide whether to do this or not. I'm optimistic about you [eating melon][cool]

The plot is very good, but updates are very, very slow I don't know why the rating is so low. When will the author improve the update speed and give you five stars?

Hurry up, it's not enough, please update 500 chapters every day [Learned][Learned][Learned][Learned]

The writing is very good. It can be seen that the author is really attentive and the characters are flesh and blood. Unlike other Shuangwen novels, it is completely a one-man show for the protagonist. Although the author's book also has some details, but overall it is very good. Come on.

I feel that this book is quite good. The past history can be traced and a new dynasty will follow. There is a lot of room for imagination. As long as you write with your heart and take your time, there is nothing wrong with it. I hope that the author will continue to work hard and will not be too lazy in the future.

It's too short, a reminder to anyone who comes in to give it a low score. I don't know if I can see it. The protagonist is a Liu Bei-type benevolent lord in the early stage. I don't know if the author will let him grow into a tycoon like Cao Cao, or if he will take a little bit of each from Liu Bei and Cao Cao, but overall it is good. Also, the author is always active, and the frequency is the same as the live broadcast. [Sinister smile]

Not bad, just don't write too many emotional dramas. After all, if you want to watch emotional dramas, just go straight to romance novels. It's better to write less emotional dramas in such novels about hegemony, but you have to have a heroine. Ancient and modern environments are different. You still have to have them. Just don't rewrite them.

I find that the author is so active, which is very uncomfortable. I have two novels that I really like to read, but the author of one of them is not doing well. Alas, why has it not been updated for a long time? There is another book that the author has not updated for some reason. I think it's time to start eating.

The logic is clear and the plot is good. It can be called a good book. However, I think the shortcoming is that the description of the climax is slightly lacking, which makes people feel less immersed. For example, the death of Luo Lin is too understated. Although the position and camp are different, it can be seen that this character is still worthy of praise. If there are more detailed descriptions, it may make people feel more immersed in the book. Many villains in many good novels I have read are very charming. I hope the author can refer to them. Another shortcoming is that the protagonist's sense of presence is a bit low, and there is nothing that makes people feel the temperament of the chosen one. Of course, this may be my own feeling, and it is not meant to be harsh. The above is purely my personal opinion. Overall, I think the book is pretty good and I hope the author can write better and better.

Super detailed, many points are worth observing. The system upgrade of this book is reasonable, the rebellion is not abrupt, and there is a lot of human touch. The details of the relationship between the characters determine the later plot. However, it may be that the early stage is too explosive, and it is a little weak later. The writing is online, mainly step by step, gradually expanding the scale, but I don't feel tired. It is reasonable. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

In my personal opinion, the protagonist does not need emotional drama, but as the leader of a force, he needs women and heirs!

Why is the rating so low? It's just a matter of details, so it's probably better. It should be more than eight points.

How can I put it this way? This book is a little embarrassing at times, but it is certainly not brainless. It can be said that it is completely written on the points that I like. I don't want to pretend to lament for the dead like other novels. This one seems to be a living person. I can't read what is good or bad, but this is indeed a very good historical novel I have read.

This is my first time seeing this kind of subject matter. Although there are some flaws, it's still okay. Come on!

There has been a shortage of books for many days, so it is difficult to find this book. However, it is short.

Not to mention, 5 stars. But I would like to give the author a suggestion: don't always use characters from the Three Kingdoms, the Tang, Song, Ming and Qing dynasties. Author, you said that the current era of the protagonist is the 23rd year of Zhenguan. Are there any characters from the Tang Dynasty that the protagonist can recruit without summoning cards? For example, Li Shimin, Li Jing, Cheng Yaojin, Yuchi Jingde, Qin Qiong, Changsun Wuji, Li Xiaogong, Wei Zheng, Fang Xuanling, Duan Zhixuan.

This book is well written, but some of the internal details are not well described. There is no emphasis on describing the strategy, and it is good to focus on the people. But competing in the world still depends on maneuvering and diplomacy.

Very good. Although there are many poisonous points in the setting, they can be basically ignored. The plot is not bad. The previous story about those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will perish is also very good. It is still very exciting and worth watching.

It can be seen that the author is a newcomer. You can skip the early stages. There are many poisonous points. I almost gave up the book after reading it. I suggest you start reading it directly from Chapter 38. There are basically no poisonous points later. It is quite exciting.

It's really good. Although it's a bit lame in the early stages, it expresses the thoughts of a normal person who has received nine years of compulsory education. There's nothing wrong with being a kind person. I really like this sense of justice and bravery! The IQ of the supporting characters is very online (quite online!)

Really good (￣y▽￣)~* Cover your mouth and snicker Come on!

Yes, the writing is very good and the storyline is very consistent.

Looks good! I liked the plot and writing very much, but the content was too little and not enough to watch! ! !

This book is not popular in the world, and everyone in Kyushu is drunk in the manor!

I just like this kind of non-brainy book, I hope the author can stick to it [Like]

I'm here to urge you to update. Author, how long has it been since you updated? [Angry] Do you still remember? [Crazy]

It's good to read, but it's too slow. There's only one book on the bookshelf, and I finished it in one go. [Cover face]

You can take a look at the book shortage. Although the author's writing is very young and the writing is not satisfactory, and the setting is poor, you can see that the author is working hard to correct it, and the author is very active. Reading the comments, you can see that the author often responds to explain and admit his mistakes. His attitude is worth learning.