Genshin Impact: Got the Eye of the Wine Elemental God at the Beginning

"The Years I Abducted and Trafficked Underage Lolita in Teyvat"

Any book lover who does not leave comments can only be a meaningless spectator, no matter how healthy and strong his body is. But if he leaves a comment, the meaning is different [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

Generally speaking, there are many readers who like harems

I am an outsider! Just... Tell me how I feel Pretty good, but a little off-putting to me, but okay There are also too many details, which makes it feel interesting and boring at the same time (I saw someone say this, and I agree, because I also feel a bit boring but still a bit interesting) I just hope that the plot will be appropriate and the details will be appropriate. If you pay too much attention to details, it will feel a little special. Although details determine success or failure, too much detail will not work. Just do everything in a relaxed manner. It's best to be more fluent in the character's behavior, dialogue, etc. (It's very good now, just a reminder, although it's useless) And just stick to your own style! Some authors "borrowed" the styles of other writers, and then the works produced by those authors were very strange. Then some writers changed their styles after seeing some readers' comments, and then... They became confused.

In terms of universal rationality, it is a rare piece of good writing in the Genshin Impact area [laughing evilly] [sending my heart], it would be a pity not to pursue it [get it] If I talk about it in detail, I feel that only The Old Glory Next Door may be better at writing [smile], but the emotional line of the book was not well handled [almost crying] and it left me confused [almost crying]

Ahem, Tomato Shopkeeper invited me to review this book. My opinion is that the author is actually quite good. I have known him for at least many years, but writing a book, I can see that he is not the material [laughter]

It's a very good book, why is it rated so low? [What]

Good book After reading two to three hundred chapters, I don't know why the author stopped updating. Looking at it now, I have a few opinions: First, although it is about drinking, there is a sense of restraint, running around for Liyue, and for the protagonist, those overt and covert things can be seen at a glance, but it seems too clear-eyed. Secondly, looking at it now, it is indeed not a harem novel. So far, I have only attacked Ningguang, and I have been flirting with others. Moreover, I can see that the protagonist's strength has begun to be inferior to them. The third point, I think some people have commented on it, is that the writing is too detailed, and some of the protagonist's work processes are too detailed. This book is too formal in describing the business, but on the contrary, the emotional drama of the characters is reduced. If it is really written like this, it will either reduce the business and write emotional drama instead, or treat the female characters as friends from the beginning. Seeing it now, I have no explanation for the emotions of those female characters. I can only say that the author wrote the novel so realistically

It's a very good book. When I saw the author saying that it received negative reviews maliciously, I remembered that I hadn't rated it yet, so I decided to give it a five-star rating.

The writing is very interesting, very good! [Top post][top post]

As far as common sense is concerned, before Beidou and the male protagonist left the village to go to Liyue Lane, I expected that there must be a knife! Now, sure enough! The old village chief is gone! [Cry][cry][cry]

It's very beautiful, and there is a unique Liyue flavor between the lines. Come on come on!

The author can match the number of female protagonists like my sister named Kujo Sora

It must be five stars, and those with high ratings are not worth this one.

I feel like the writing is pretty good. If I keep writing like this for a long time, more and more people will be attracted to it. Come on, author [like]

, The writing is quite good, but not many people follow it.

Taking off from Wuhu The author waits for this period of time to pass, and then drive some more! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The book is okay, I only read it after reading the comments section. As for those who say it's toxic, I don't think there's anything wrong with it. As long as you don't take it too seriously, you can still read it. There are really not many people who can read Eggplant's book with their brains. It may be due to different personal opinions and personalities. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I have to leave too. The protagonist's abilities are a bit one-dimensional and a bit more everyday. I prefer more passionate ones. I have read Chapter 67 of Non-Poisonous. Finally, I asked what the relationship between the snake and the protagonist was. I was a little curious.

Your work is great and I can't think of any words to describe you. (I really can't think of it, this is the only way.)

Very nice book! The author should not have a harem!

So far, full marks. The part about Inazuma was written with a unique feeling, which made my blood boil. Ps: The plot of being stabbed by the official can be changed as much as possible (Baizhu)

It's not easy to come up with a seven-character name for each chapter [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

This is actually a very good book 😊 but not many people have read it. Indeed, the writing style of this book was not very good in the early stage. After all, the author himself has not written many books. But in the later stage, the details are handled very well, and the writing style gradually becomes more and more delicate. Many places are quite consistent with the original game, but there are still very few people. I can only hope that by the time I see this comment again, the rating of this book will have passed nine!

The author's first novel, overall not bad. It was inevitable that I was a bit naive in the early stage, but I felt there was significant improvement in the later stage. There is no obvious poisonous point, maybe I didn't notice it. My personal opinion is that I don't like it and I don't support it (I just read the novel to have fun and don't want to bother arguing with others).

The content is okay and the structure is okay. Overall, this book doesn't have much water content. It looks pretty good. I also want to ask if the character in the back is one of the harems? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The front is a little bit confusing, but you can still read it. I suggest you don't be too brainless. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch, but I hope you continue to write and your writing will get better and better. Come on.

I had a great feeling after reading this book. It is the kind of feeling that I can easily get myself into. There are many books. If I can't get into it myself, I would not be able to experience the resonant emotions. I think this book is still acceptable and deserves this evaluation. Good luck to the author!

Check in, the book is good, please control the points, good luck to the author.

Big cheers for the author

Very nice, but the low rating is because someone maliciously left negative reviews