Genshin Impact: From the Start, I Obtain a Wine Element Vision

"The Years I Abducted and Trafficked Underage Lolita in Teyvat"

Generally speaking, there are many readers who like harems

Any book lover who does not leave comments can only be a meaningless spectator, no matter how healthy and strong his body is. But if he leaves a comment, the meaning is different [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

I am an outsider! Just... Tell me how I feel Pretty good, but a little off-putting to me, but okay There are also too many details, which makes it feel interesting and boring at the same time (I saw someone say this, and I agree, because I also feel a bit boring but still a bit interesting) I just hope that the plot will be appropriate and the details will be appropriate. If you pay too much attention to details, it will feel a little special. Although details determine success or failure, too much detail will not work. Just do everything in a relaxed manner. It's best to be more fluent in the character's behavior, dialogue, etc. (It's very good now, just a reminder, although it's useless) And just stick to your own style! Some authors "borrowed" the styles of other writers, and then the works produced by those authors were very strange. Then some writers changed their styles after seeing some readers' comments, and then... They became confused.

In terms of universal rationality, it is a rare piece of good writing in the Genshin Impact area 😏 [sending my heart], it would be a pity not to pursue it [get it] If I talk about it in detail, I feel that only The Old Glory Next Door may be better at writing 🙂, but the emotional line of the book was not well handled 🥺 and it left me confused 🥺

Ahem, Tomato Shopkeeper invited me to review this book. My opinion is that the author is actually quite good. I have known him for at least many years, but writing a book, I can see that he is not the material [laughter]

It's a very good book, why is it rated so low? [What]

Good book After reading two to three hundred chapters, I don't know why the author stopped updating. Looking at it now, I have a few opinions: First, although it is about drinking, there is a sense of restraint, running around for Liyue, and for the protagonist, those overt and covert things can be seen at a glance, but it seems too clear-eyed. Secondly, looking at it now, it is indeed not a harem novel. So far, I have only attacked Ningguang, and I have been flirting with others. Moreover, I can see that the protagonist's strength has begun to be inferior to them. The third point, I think some people have commented on it, is that the writing is too detailed, and some of the protagonist's work processes are too detailed. This book is too formal in describing the business, but on the contrary, the emotional drama of the characters is reduced. If it is really written like this, it will either reduce the business and write emotional drama instead, or treat the female characters as friends from the beginning. Seeing it now, I have no explanation for the emotions of those female characters. I can only say that the author wrote the novel so realistically

It's a very good book. When I saw the author saying that it received negative reviews maliciously, I remembered that I hadn't rated it yet, so I decided to give it a five-star rating.

The writing is very interesting, very good! [Top post][top post]