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Very good. Compared with most Douluo novels, it is more realistic and has a flesh-and-blood feel. The author has also broken away from the old template of the novel, including new locations, new characters, and new personalities. The development speed is not slow, and the skills are also very innovative. I hope there can be more passionate scenes. After all, the magic sword is just what you want to watch. It is a passionate one. Compared with being too invincible, it can add some hardships. It is better to be something that is not in the original work. It breaks the space and brings a larger world view. You can even add world chaos and the like. After all, have you seen the doomsday world in Douluo? Personally, I think it would be more interesting to break out of a fixed world view. Summary: Advantages, innovation, thinking, and emotion. Compared with the old route of Invincible, it has some changes, making it easy for people to get emotional, surpassing most Douluo novels. Disadvantages: I have my own thoughts but I dare not go further. What I have written so far does not make me feel refreshed and refreshed. A proper passionate plot will better arouse the readers' emotions. I hope to add some, but if you don't know how to write passionate stories, don't write them. After all, embarrassing passionate stories. On the contrary, it will make people uncomfortable. Currently, you are one of the Douluo novels that I think is very good. It can be said that you are ranked in the top three. And the two in front of you are just because of your good writing and fast updates. If you can continue to write a different feeling in the old Douluo plot, you can jump up to the top. Personal understanding: I like passionate novels very much, otherwise I would not read themes like Douluo, Perfection, and Divine Seal, because if a person writes with passion and truth, it is easier for people to express emotions, just like seeing the original Tang San being besieged to save Xiao Wu, and finally dying. It is really shocking and touching, and you will even get red in the face when you are involved (of course, this is a test of the author's writing style). Compared with killing without thinking, I think it is more attractive to go all out.

Author, please, can you please not take it down? Many of the Douluo I watched before have been taken off the shelves. Also update faster. The previous ones were either removed from the shelves or not updated.

Come on, come on, it looks good

Come on! Don't take it off the shelves! I like this book very much

To be honest, this book is really good! I have long been hoping to see a fanfic of Martial Soul Is the Demon Sword Thousand Blades. The battle scenes described by the author are relatively detailed, and the plot connection is OK and not stuck. In addition, the author takes into account other characters while portraying the protagonist, which is really good. However, the author still has some shortcomings, such as the writing style is a bit immature and the description of the characters' appearance is insufficient. Let's talk about a common problem among Douluo fans, that is, they can be written as enjoyable articles, but many of them lose their combat power when they are written in the middle and later stages. It's embarrassing to write in the middle and late stages. Anyway, I have read many Douluo fans who have this problem. Therefore, I suggest that the author can "delay" the protagonist's strength. The fruit power is actually a bit beyond the scope. That is, don't just join the legendary Douluo and then be hunted and then explode. It is cliché and uncomfortable to write, and it is also boring to read. In short, I am still very optimistic about the author. Please don't collapse, please. Come on!

Praise

I don't dare to give too much for fear of running out of books. But come on, author!

Chapter 20: Fight Xiaowu's place, the Thousand Blades of the Demonic Way, just use it as a defensive shield. When you are trapping someone, shouldn't it be that there are sharp weapons that can hurt you from all directions? You know, it's just like a piece of paper spinning at high speed. It's okay if you hit a flat surface, but on the cutting surface, [laughs crookedly], especially if it turns into a big hand and grabs someone, wouldn't that thing hurt you if it hits it? This knife is useless.

At that time, Qian Renxue cried and begged the protagonist to marry him. The master was severely slapped in the face. Tang Hao was stepped on by the protagonist and Xiao Wu was stewed. Then the protagonist, the Dragon King, ended it with a smile [sneaky laugh]

It's okay. It's not a systematic type. It's the kind of bland one that doesn't lick Tang San. It has its own ideas and goes with the flow. It's not the kind of cool article that is systematic from the beginning (｡ò ∀ ó｡)

The writing is quite thoughtful, and the idea of the world map of Douluo Continent is also very immersive. It seems to have that feeling. Regarding the plot, I don't follow the protagonist blindly, but I take the initiative to disrupt the plot and construct a new plot to fill it in. This idea is very good, and it is also very interesting to write. I think this book may be slow to update, but in other aspects it is very good and qualified. It is worth reading.

I don't know if I should give it a low score. So far I haven't seen anyone break up with Tang, so I'll give it 4 stars. This book is quite good and the pace is neither too fast nor too slow.

Very good. How about taking Xiao Wu away?

I bet this Douluo novel will be out of stock within a few days.

This book is very nice

Very happy to look at 😃 I think I know why the rating is so low

Let me give you a suggestion: in the later stage, add an awakening to the Demon Sword Thousand Blades, and add a thousand-year-old resentful spirit to the sea of ​​spiritual consciousness.

Hahahahahahaha, the writing is okay, why is it only 6 points [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Don't give it all five fucking stars! This book will also be blocked later, what should I do?

Really good

It's good to read, but readers, please don't keep reading. It's easy to keep new books to death.

The writing is very good, I hope it is a CP-free article.

The content is reasonable and the structure is good. I am looking forward to the next content. The system-free article is really good. Come on, author.

Not bad, good, promising

Why is the rating so low?

Personally, I think it's okay, but the update is a bit slow. I finished it in one go.

It's great. Come on, the author (ง•̀_•́)ง, the writing is super beautiful\(//∇//)\

I look good, I like it

Keep up the good work, author

Very interesting, good luck to the author.