Lin Qinghan had a crush on someone in high school. That person brought warmth to his youth.
After the college entrance exams, Ji Shuyu told Lin Qinghan, “If you're still unmarried and I'm still single ten years from now, let's get together and make a life together.”
They waited for each other for ten years.
Ten years later, Ji Shuyu was dumbfounded as she walked out of the marriage registry office.
Her ten-year secret crush had come true!!!
After ten years of twists and turns, it was still you.
“Lin Qinghan, we've already wasted ten years. We can't waste the rest of our lives too.”
“Okay. I'll do whatever you say, Mrs. Lin.”
Ten years ago, Lin Qinghan was aloof and arrogant. Ten years later, he was gentle to the very core.
Lin Qinghan feels lucky. Not everyone who waits gets a happy ending.
Lin Qinghan × Ji Shuyu
After reading your work, I have a few suggestions as follows, for reference only. First, the more casual statements can be deleted or the narrative style can be changed. For example, in the first chapter, "It's not that there are no appropriate... Regrets." This sentence is like a first-person inner monologue, but we actually want to write about Ji Shuyu's psychology, so we can change it to "It's not that her conditions are not good, but that she can't let go of the regrets she had more than ten years ago." Second, it can be appropriately simple. For example, the dialogue between scanning the QR code to buy cakes and the hotel attendant taking them to the room does not need to be written; another example is that in Chapter 4, Lin Qinghan asked Ji Shuyu, "Are you watching TV on the sofa... Packing things", it doesn't matter if this paragraph is removed. Some details, such as Lin Qinghan preventing her from kowtowing when she got into the car, and preventing her from stepping on the ground with her bare feet, can be described and do not need to be deleted. Third, rendering and description can be added to certain plots. I really like that in Chapter 10 they reminisce about their high school life, there is a crossover in time, and two young people who like each other come together again at a mature age. The atmosphere here is very good, and when the plot first climaxed in Chapter 5, I felt that there should be more psychological actions, and some memories could be interspersed. The joy of youth ends up being together for a lifetime. Such a theme itself can be used in many ways to blend reality and memories. Fourth, the levels can be richer. I may not be clear when I say this. For example, in the first chapter, "He looked at Ji Shuyu's expression after he finished speaking", and then "He suddenly came over and stared at Ji Shuyu". We can not only watch this action, but also raise eyebrows, chuckle, or Ji Shuyu's eyes dodge and her hand can't help but grab the coffee cup. One more little suggestion. If you really can't think of how to simplify the title of each chapter, you can just use chapter1 or the like. This is purely my personal fault, I'm sorry. As for minor problems such as some typos and incomplete punctuation marks, you can correct them by reading it several times, so I won't go into details.
Ji Shuyu was probably really drunk. She pointed her finger at Lin Qinghan and said, "If, I mean if, we are not married in ten years, how about we go get the certificate?" Finished. Ji Shuyu kept looking into Lin Qinghan's eyes. When the little girl was drunk, she liked to stare into someone's eyes. Her sincere eyes made people easily fascinated. Lin Qinghan waited for a long time before saying: "Okay."
Lin Qinghan Ji Shuyu From youth to maturity, from school uniform to wedding dress, you are the joy of youth and the sweetness of the rest of your life. Gathering thousands of favors in one body, and also being favored by everyone in one body You are the preference among preferences, the exception among exceptions "Lin Qinghan loves Ji Shuyu for all his life."
What a blessing it is that the love we had when we were young has grown to be sincere and sincere, and that we can grow old together. It is a very happy thing.
It's okay, but the ending is a bit rushed