Was This the Life You Begged Me to Give You?

It's rare to see such a short novel in 🍅. To be honest, I thought it was okay after reading it. The plot of past and present life is very vulgar, but the author writes it well. However, I personally think it would be better if the author could write more about the entanglement of the fate of the male and female protagonists, because many novels of the same type have a common problem. It is the male protagonist/female protagonist who is reborn. It is illogical to feel guilty just because he saw the painful and regretful side of the other person after his death in the previous life, so that he thinks that he will grow old with the other person after his rebirth. Even if he is reborn, it can only be because he has a higher basic liking for the other person. Another point is that I feel that the events that happened throughout the text are all about the same length, and the focus is not very prominent. After that, the heroine was created. It felt like they should be two strong ones, but the heroine is obviously a general who protects the country. Even if she is reborn, even if the author wants to write an image of being strong on the outside but fragile on the inside, she will be like a little bird when getting along with the hero. The heroine should not be crying all the time... The heroine has always been soft and weak after losing her inner strength. As a general protecting the country, her dignity will not allow her to give up. There is very little description of the heroine regaining her strength to practice martial arts. I think this is a pity. If more words are spent on the heroine, the image of the heroine will be more fleshed out. Finally, the author made a lot of mistakes. I rarely read BE, and I don't think these problems will affect my reading of this book. The author's descriptions are okay, and many plots can arouse my emotions. I cried while reading it most of the night. Well done to the author, I look forward to his next book.

It's great, they will always be happy. Thank you to the author for giving them a happy ending [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Short article, worth reading