At the end of the Northern Song Dynasty, the Song and Jin Dynasties made a secret alliance on the sea. The Yanyun hometown was recovered as a farce, but it did not want to kick off the demise of the Northern Song Dynasty. A certain warehouse manager of the Chinese People's Liberation Army encountered a change and was buried underground. After all the hard work, he finally found himself here. In this era, how did ordinary people protect themselves in this era? The situation was changing. The Song army was defeated thousands of miles away. The officials hunted north and ceded the land to pay compensation. The mountains and rivers were broken. The land was abandoned like worn-out shoes. The people regarded it as grass and grass. The righteous people saved themselves. They raised the flag to fight against the Jin Dynasty and revived China. They set an eternal precedent and extinguished the thousands of years of beacon fire.
Reader comments
What's great is that it is a military warehouse. Even if there are no military vehicles, there are still light and heavy weapons, right? It seems that the military warehouse has also traveled through time, right? Don't you need such a big gold finger? Just abandoned like that?
The author of this book is very attentive and the details are in place. Some of the explanations are also very clear. Although there are some minor flaws, such as using the wrong name, overall it is still very good and in place, especially the change in the author's mentality. He is very careful in drawing this line. I hope the author will do better. The better you write, the more ups and downs the author's mentality changes. After all, it is a time-travel novel. Don't let the history of the Northern Song Dynasty limit your imagination. Let the protagonist evolve from one place to one country to one world in the continuous development. The characters can be described more, and heroes will emerge in troubled times!
I just commented on it in Chapter 77, so I won't repeat it again.
Another point is, if you change the title of the book, 50% of people will definitely be put off by the title.
At least the author is not a studio writer, but he writes with great care. Although it is not a good book, it is still above average.
Looking forward to your next book.
For authors who write books seriously, my previous comments may be too harsh. Although there are various flaws, I still hope that the author will work hard and write what he wants to write first! Looking forward to a full story. Come on!
The writing is good and the thinking is clear, which is rare
It's a pretty good book, very exciting, but I feel that technological advancement is a little too fast, and the development of productivity still needs a gradual process. Don't have too many female protagonists, as it will spoil the rhythm. I look forward to more exciting updates.
What's great is that it is a military warehouse. Even if there are no military vehicles, there are still light and heavy weapons, right? It seems that the military warehouse has also traveled through time, right? Don't you need such a big gold finger? Just abandoned like that?
The author of this book is very attentive and the details are in place. Some of the explanations are also very clear. Although there are some minor flaws, such as using the wrong name, overall it is still very good and in place, especially the change in the author's mentality. He is very careful in drawing this line. I hope the author will do better. The better you write, the more ups and downs the author's mentality changes. After all, it is a time-travel novel. Don't let the history of the Northern Song Dynasty limit your imagination. Let the protagonist evolve from one place to one country to one world in the continuous development. The characters can be described more, and heroes will emerge in troubled times!
I just commented on it in Chapter 77, so I won't repeat it again. Another point is, if you change the title of the book, 50% of people will definitely be put off by the title. At least the author is not a studio writer, but he writes with great care. Although it is not a good book, it is still above average. Looking forward to your next book. For authors who write books seriously, my previous comments may be too harsh. Although there are various flaws, I still hope that the author will work hard and write what he wants to write first! Looking forward to a full story. Come on!
The writing is good and the thinking is clear, which is rare
It's a pretty good book, very exciting, but I feel that technological advancement is a little too fast, and the development of productivity still needs a gradual process. Don't have too many female protagonists, as it will spoil the rhythm. I look forward to more exciting updates.
Good book, worth reading, cleverly designed