Anime Crossover: From the Start, I Get a Romance System After I Transmigrate

To be honest, although the things that have always been timid in the content are just seasoning, I feel there is no need to write so much, right? Be tough when it's time to be tough. To be honest, there is nothing interesting about your book. Every novel has it, but most novels don't cover all of it, like yours. Nothing good at all.

Personally, I still like multiple female protagonists. But it doesn't matter how you write it, as long as it's not about that kind of knife. [Eat melon][eat melon]

It seems that this book has not been discovered by the comic book tycoons, so I will not hesitate to check it out.

Can someone with a biting tongue be a bit more temperamental, or someone who is gentler to the protagonist, like Mai and Rikka? If it really doesn't work, add a Xi Tzu, Da Qiao, and A Li, just be gentler to the protagonist.

Very good, is it a harem?

Super exciting

Well written. I would like to make a suggestion, the male protagonist can be softer towards the female character, but he cannot always be like this. After all, a man still has to be tough. I hope you can think about it. I don't have a high score in terms of personality right now. Don't let the heroine be so strong. If you want to write a harem story, why do you have to do this? Novels should make readers feel comfortable reading them. This is the change in points this time.

Hmm... It's a bit strange that the author always switches directly between the first person and the third person from time to time. I wonder if the author is so excited about writing that he brings himself into it [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The third person and the first person are mixed together. Every time the word "self" appears, there is a 90% chance that the sentence is a bad sentence. If the author wants to be self-conscious, he can change the protagonist's name to your name or change the whole book to the first person. I don't mind, but such frequent sick sentences make me unable to stand it. After a while, I find that the sentences are unclear and uncomfortable.

Nice writing (≧∇≦*) keep up the good work