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As usual, I will give five stars to my own books [Chigua]. As long as the book reviews and updates are in place, and a minimum of 10,000 updates are guaranteed every day, you will definitely not be tired from catching up! [Laughing] In the first week of 100,000 words (9/11~9/17), we will not correct the situation. The highest number of single chapter updates in history will be one update for every 150, and one update for every 20 more book reviews. Keep breathing and writing!

Good-looking and to my liking

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Well, it looks okay so far, let's take care of it first

The writing is good, but the ending is really good.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

It's really good, I hope it adds a little emotional drama.

I'm a little confused. I don't know how the protagonist, who broke through as a warrior, was able to defeat six people with his martial arts training. What kind of family is this? How did it grow so big?

Farewell to the harem, don't write random love lines, just don't let the Qilin transform into the heroine or something like that. As a follow-up review, let me elaborate a bit: the description is narrow and not developed enough, the plot is not detailed enough, but some unnecessary entangled parts are weird, and the writing is too immature.

Come on, once the word count comes up, we can promote it. It's pretty good.

Not bad, looking forward to future development (๑˙ー˙๑)