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Come on, these are some good-looking books. It's so hard to see this kind of book in this era of cool writing [face covering]

I give the author a five-star rating because he kept writing so firmly without giving any ratings. Although there were many negative reviews, I found this book to my liking and I was tired of reading it.

A wave of predictions: nurturance in the early stage, surgery in the later stage, and finally the male protagonist will try his best to return to the beginning or sacrifice [eat melon]. Of course, I also like the peaceful and happy ending, but it is a pity that it is difficult to score a high score for such a novel: it does not have the ultimate emotional stimulation and situational introduction of a romance novel; nor does it have the ultimate causal logic and novel settings of a fairy tale. All in all, it's a decent combination, and it's a piece of writing that novice authors can easily master. As long as the plot is engaging and the writing is mature, it will have good results. Come on, work hard!

I quite like this bland style, but don't be too aggressive. The author will tell you what happened to the foreshadowing many years later. If you want to spoil it, be thorough or don't spoil it at all.

I saw five or six pictures. Five stars. Come on I saw that 35 turned out to be in love.

Why does foundation building require foundation building pills? Is it impossible to cultivate without pills?

It's so beautiful, the ending is full of flowers The author announced the ending in Chapter 20. The protagonist and Pan'er's manager went through many hardships to become a saint. After becoming a saint, the protagonist took Pan'er back to Earth to visit relatives. As a result, he encountered a time and space storm and returned to Earth alone with no cultivation. Fortunately, he encountered the recovery of the earth's spiritual energy and opened the time and space channel to return to Douxing Island. But because he forgot to bring something back, the time and space tunnel was closed. . . Pan'er stayed alone in the empty room: Husband. . .

The storyline is coherent and smooth, traveling through adventures and cultivating immortals. Overall, it's good, but the relationship between the male protagonist and his wife is too exaggerated, and some readers are treated as emotional idiots, and it doesn't fit in with the background of the story. Arrange four big stars and build a strong momentum! Come on!

Immortal cultivators can make the timeline longer, for example, the protagonist finds a secluded island, marries more wives, gives birth to more children, and continues to grow. Once it grows stronger, you can secretly establish auction houses, trading houses, etc.

I feel very good so far, and I hope that the subsequent plots will be equally good. Alas, I just like to read the kind of hidden novels, because almost all of these novels are very awesome and upgrade quickly. There are very few like this. I don't know why the ratings are not high. Maybe most people like that kind of novels that I don't know how to put. They have different tastes.

It is extremely rare for a mortal to practice immortal literature, and it is true that it is ordinary. Although this book is more like using a cracked version (cheating) to cultivate immortality, the focus is on the rich flavor of life in the book and the depiction of the sophistication of human relationships between mortals. It also focuses on the gap between immortals and mortals, which is undoubtedly closer to the setting of mortals. In my opinion, Han Laomo is just a traditional fairy tale written in the skin of a mortal. How could a mortal have so many nonsense? When he waded into the muddy waters of the world of cultivation, his mortal life had ended. I hope that the author can stick to his original intention of writing a book and bring a breath of fresh air to mortals' cultivation of immortality. [Blowing Kiss] There are some frictions and encounters in immortality, but the frequency must be controlled. In the early stage, the flow of mortals should still be the core. Next, I will mix in some personal stuff and beg the author to beg the heroine Da Dan [laughing and crying]

It's very good, almost like life, with a little warmth and excitement mixed in with the ordinary. As long as you don't think of yourself as a tall, rich, handsome man with a background and ability. At present, it seems that in the eyes of the female protagonist, the male protagonist is omnipotent. In the world, the male protagonist is just an ordinary person who can do his best to seek small benefits for those around him. There is no such thing as being able to overturn the entire situation by oneself, just to choose a more unfavorable situation under the overall situation.

ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ... I feel that all those who cultivate immortality have problems. If evil cultivators take a city's worth of people every day to make elixirs, how long will it take for those mortals to be exterminated. The evil cultivators are fast, have mental problems, are weak in the later stage, and are powerful in the early stage. If it were a normal world of cultivating immortals, evil cultivators should be everywhere. If you know that your talent is not good enough, you can directly become an evil cultivator and dominate in the early stage. Only geniuses will correct the way. Genius is only one in a thousand, mediocrity is like the sand of the Yellow River. [Think]

Come on! ! ! Gou Dao is awesome! ! !

I quite like reading this kind of book, good luck to the author! [Blowing kiss]

The content is very interesting, and I think it feels good for the protagonist and the heroine to be mortals, but it may not be that good if they live too long as immortals.

I like this book very much, the style is very good and there are details. Come on, author!

It's very good. Although it starts a little slow and the writing is very realistic, but overall, it should be treated as a genuine novel. This is a real novel about cultivating immortals. It doesn't have too many bells and whistles, but it's just a bit short. The author worked hard [like]

The subject matter is very good, don't be overwhelmed by the writing. Come on, it's very comfortable to read. I read it patiently in one go [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

Are you looking too far or our readers can't lift the knife? Little Pumpkin, are you a bitch? It's been three days. Do you know how I spent these three days?

I've read Chapter 16, but the number of words in each chapter is a bit too much. 😁😁😁

The author writes well. Cultivation of immortality is not just about killing people and grabbing treasures, it is not just about conspiracy, it is not just about hiding a knife in a smile, it can also be about romance and sophistication. If cultivating immortality is just for the sake of cultivating immortality, what is the use of longevity? What's the use of that state? Cultivation of immortality is just incidental. If one cannot understand the state of the world, cultivation of immortality will be in vain. As for the "toxic point" in Chapter 20, it does make people frown, but the future is unknown... Well, I have nothing to say, so I will deduct one star.

Chapter 20: Ending with Spreading Flowers. Well written. Keep up the good work. It's like watching Conan. Half of your friends come over and say this person is a murderer. It's boring.

It has been updated to chapter 39. It feels very good. Come on, the beautiful author (she must be a beautiful woman who can write such a novel)

So far, this article has been well written, with accurate logical thinking and good writing style. It is a different kind of article about cultivating immortals. It has some hints of love and is a doting wife. Come on.

I've finished reading Chapter 79. It's very interesting. Why am I going to start a new trap...

Apart from other things, I gave this 5 stars. Even if Jesus comes, I can't stop it. That's what I said. Come on! This is the beginning, don't get wet [cover your face][cover your face][cover your face][cover your face]

It feels a bit like a mortal cultivating immortality!

It looks good, but why did it break [crying]

Why is the update discontinued? . . Want to see more exciting content later.