A Thunderbolt Split Me into an Immortal Cultivator

It's quite interesting. Some books put the protagonist in a dangerous position every day. He is either caught or in danger. It's so boring. I like the protagonist to be lucky, everything goes well, and the most important thing is to be happy, which is good for health. Live happily and do things that benefit others and yourself.

It's a great book. The plot setting is very novel and the character's personality is reasonable. The protagonist has a smooth journey from being a little person to getting the golden finger. Some exaggerations are that the great martial arts master and the Qi refining stage are too powerful. So far, he is still in the Qi refining stage, but here he is set to be very powerful in the Qi refining stage! The plot has many twists and turns, and the world view is huge. It basically includes martial arts, spiritual warriors, soul masters, and demon slayers. In short, the basic Qi training period is a bit omnipotent. But this setting is good. The heroine is not available, so be sure to check it out soon

It is a novel about cultivating immortals with a human touch. The plot felt a bit draggy when I first read it, but once I read it, I couldn't stop. The novel is written fluently and describes the protagonist's psychological activities very delicately. Compared with other popular immortality novels, it gives people a completely new feel. The disadvantage is that it is not very humorous.

Very good-looking, very down-to-earth mortal cultivator.

The content is exciting and rich in details. If The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is ten points, this should have been 9.5 Points!

I have read a lot of books about cultivating immortals. To be honest, I am tired of them. I didn't expect this book to bring me some surprises. It is very interesting and the story is interesting, continuous and fascinating.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the author's writing style is superb, which makes people feel comfortable when reading. There is no infinite matryoshka plot. Even if there are many enemies and powerful people enter too early, it will not make people feel depressed and uncomfortable while reading. The protagonist should hide when it is time to hide, and there is no ambiguity when it is time to take action. Each scene is described delicately. There is not all but very little nonsense. Even if the cultivation is fast and there are many adventures, it is strange. It's not objectionable even if you meet many people. The protagonist has flesh and blood and character, is not cruel and cold-blooded but is not a bad person, and has a sense of humanity and family. It will be more heartwarming if there is a plot later in the story where he is developed and takes care of his juniors. Don't have a depressing plot where there is a sudden tribulation and a rush for time. There can be powerful enemies, but it is best to give the protagonist time, otherwise it will make readers feel depressed and uncomfortable. The only shortcoming is that the description of love is too abrupt. The heroine is Ning Ling, which is not a good choice and makes people feel uncomfortable. She is more suitable for the male protagonist's sibling or friend relationship. It only appears once in the front without any excessiveness in the middle. There is not enough foreshadowing for the sudden appearance in the back. Personally, I feel that Zuo Yuzhu is better as the heroine because the foreshadowing is basic enough and the plot is more reasonable. It is more suitable for the male protagonist and makes people feel more comfortable reading. Although I had a hunch that Ning Ling suddenly became the heroine after being rescued, I still don't believe it. I would rather this be a novel without a heroine. It feels a bit like eating delicious rice and suddenly finding half a fly in the bowl and the other half... Don't mutate the horse harem novel. It's a rare good article. I wish the author will become more inspired as he writes more and his writing will be more wonderful, making it more comfortable for readers to read. Five stars.

The fictional ones are more real, interlocking, startling and fascinating.

It looks great, why are the scores so low? The character setting of the protagonist fits his behavior very well, and the content of the story is reasonable. Come on, author!

The writing is good. He is a sensible child, and he has the incredible luck of cultivating immortals. After asking for medicine for his mother, he obtained the extraordinary qualifications of cultivating immortals. Looking for resources to cultivate immortality for my sister, I don't show off my skills, but I secretly develop them with the support of my family. It is a must-have seed for those who are strong in cultivating immortals.

Don't fall into the trap of convention, practice both martial arts and immortality. The author controls writing with ease

There are few pure traditional fantasy novels among Tomatoes, and they are more worth reading.

The plot is compact, the organization is clear, and the writing is fluent. It is indeed a good article.

A casual novel that seems ordinary but is very extraordinary. The plot is coherent, the protagonist's growth trajectory is clear, the narrative logic is reasonable, the morals and worldly connections between the world of immortals and warriors in the mortal world are naturally connected, and the language is fluent. It can definitely be rated as a five-star novel.

I like it very much, the content is very exciting, there are many novel ideas, it is easy and enjoyable to read, I follow it every day. It's not like some novels that can't be read for more than a few chapters.

It's very interesting. I like this type of novel very much. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

The author writes well and is worth reading

I haven't seen such a good book in a long time. The writing is smooth and the logic is reasonable. There is no big twist where the protagonist is often abused. The protagonist of this book relies on his own wisdom to survive all the way. This is an important point of praise. The ending is not bad, but I just didn't read enough. All the characters who appear have echoes before and after. It's a good book.

The score can be higher, 9.3! The story is complete, the plot has twists and turns, and is logical. You can continue writing! It's just that the middle and back plots aren't compact enough.

I haven't found a book like this that I can read for a long time. The author writes well.

The writing is good. Although Zhongzheng Hehe is not the best, it is still very interesting.

This novel is the most realistic work I have ever read. There are human relationships, decisive killings, and adventures. The explanations are also detailed, and the pace is very good👍

Written in a relaxed and natural way, comfortable to read

Well written. The story is very clear and distinct. Twists and turns.

The rhythm and logic of the plot are more reasonable than most fairy tales. Although there are occasional slight confusions in some settings, the flaws are not concealed! In addition, the description of the personality design of characters such as people or objects is also quite exciting and coherent. The author's biggest weakness may be that his writing skills are not sophisticated enough, but it is still far better than most novice novels. It is just that it cannot support the novel's unique and exquisite conception and structure, and cannot make it the icing on the cake. I believe that if the author is willing to continue to delve into creation, he will achieve better results (or achievements?) Sooner or later.

Exciting, thrilling moment

Fortunately, the novel has a little bit of excitement, and the writing and conception are quite novel, so it's okay.

Super beautiful, the story is exciting and exciting.

It's reasonable, the logic is right, no one is stupid, and it looks good so far.

It's quite compact, but the author forgot about Foundation Building 6 and went back to practice it all over again. There are many such situations, but overall it's good.