Time Travel: the Yandere Younger Brother Has Been Coveting Me

So is the male protagonist a loser? Nickname [face covering]

I heard that it's very cold when farming in ancient times. I feel like I'm having a headache, but I still want to write [cover my face]. When I wrote my first book, I discovered that mentality is really important, and I hope that I can still stick to it with the new book. If you like it, please leave a message! No one commented, I feel so panicked! [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good to watch, but the author couldn't continue to expand on it when he became male later on, so he had to end it with a finale. It was good for the male and female protagonists to work together. At least the fate of the unruly and vicious Shuan was too lenient for her, so it's good to be gone. Looking forward to the sequel by the later author [Read carefully]

Ah... What a pity. I found that many good novels end in a hurry. The authors all say that no one read them when they were writing [face covering] It's quite heartwarming. I haven't read a novel in a long time. It's such a pity that this one was really rushed.

The reviews I read said the ending was rushed. I was a little confused whether to read it or not, but I couldn't help but read it because the resume was quite attractive to me. Okay, that sums it up in the last two chapters [face covering]. Don't expect anything

It's been a long time since I've read the entire book. I read it in one day because it's a short and medium-length novel. The book is really warm. There's no such thing as a perfect family. Even as a reader, I yearn for such a family [smile]

The book is quite good, but the ending is too hasty and is finished in just a few sentences. The author could add some extra chapters to explain the life experience of the heroine's grandfather and Ming's fate.

I really like this book, but it's too short. I found it this morning and I've finished reading it now. It's so short! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The ending seems unsatisfactory [laughing]. The heroine and others were all written about in the beginning, but the male protagonist is not prominent. There is not much written about it. You can write more about the two getting along, and then it will be interesting later. I like this kind of short story.

How can I put it, the story is still good, but it is too compact and a bit short. The emotional drama is over just after it started, which is a bit too high or too low! But I still support the author and keep up the good work!

It was good to watch, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists changed too suddenly, and the story ended too suddenly. I didn't get enough of it. Be grateful and never give up! Even in the fiercest wind and rain, we must have the courage to raise our heads and face the front, because we believe that any suffering experience, as long as it is not destruction, is wealth!

The overall story is quite good, quite warm, the parents are short-lived, harmonious, not a family that favors sons over daughters. The heroine is the group favorite and the lucky star of their family. The main plot is that the hero is tricked by his mother and lives away from home. He meets the heroine's family. The heroine is the light that the hero encounters in the dark. Although the two people get along less when they grow up, the heroine is Bai Yueguang, and Bai Yueguang marries the hero.

Writing is indeed not easy, five stars encourage you to work hard (இдஇ; ) However, I abandoned it in Chapter 83. In fact, the story is quite good. A sick man travels back to his body. It was a bit refreshing when I read it for the first time. There are a lot of people in the family but they are all very united. At least there are no elites within the family, so I think it's a pretty good start. The main reason why I gave up was that I didn't really like the idea of ​​a time-traveling heroine forcing herself to become a female heroine, and teaching Gou Sheng not to fight to solve problems (don't persuade others to be kind without their suffering). Maybe I am more inclined towards sober kindness in the world

The previous writing is quite good, but the ending is a bit rushed. I can't help but thank the author for it. I hope the author can make a sequel, [laughs][laughs][laughs]

Anyway, let's encourage the author. It's really good to watch. Unfortunately, the ending is too hasty and there's no extra story, but I still think it's good to watch.

It's just that the ending is a bit rushed, and then the emotional transition between the male and female protagonists is a bit hasty, but everything else is pretty good, at least it's very comfortable to watch. Although I like to read short stories, I kind of wish that this version would flow more slowly. The follow-up of the male and female protagonists from siblings to lovers can be described more delicately, and there's also a follow-up to solving the mystery of the old man's life experience. It's a bit of a pity, but I recommend it.

The writing is good, but the suspense at the end left me scratching my head. The author, you are such a bad person [face covering]

It was so good that I finished reading it in one day, but the ending was a bit sudden.

It's pretty good to watch, but the ending is a bit rushed, and the ending also mentions who the heroine's father looks like. Isn't this the life experience of the heroine's grandfather? It should be revealed at the end.

It looks good but the ending is not perfect. I still want to see them get married and have children [smiles]

It would be great if there was a sequel. It was very good. I watched it all day until four in the morning and finished it.

Very good, I read every chapter without skipping a chapter!

It's so beautifully written. Worth a look

: Well written, short and concise

Ah, this ending feels like there is a follow-up. Did Mr. Yang find his family? Fill in the holes. [I'm about to cry]

It's pretty good, but there's still a bit of suspense at the end that makes people feel anxious. There's also Ming, I want to see how she regrets it.

It's okay. Although it's a bit rushed in some places, the book is still worth reading overall.

Beautiful, very warm, worth watching, recommended!

Very good looking, worth recommending, don't miss it

I like it very much, a very warm big family,