原神：拐走哥伦比娅后，我无敌

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu waited for 900 years, Long Kui waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Zi waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. One day, one day, one month, a weak man was lying beside the bed, with a slight smile on his lips. His outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of his eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update!"

The idea is very good. The writing style needs to be improved. There are plenty of them in the text. Extremely boring conversation. Totally optional. Daily plot and mathematics are too bland. Instead, it's a bit like a running account. Not enjoyable to watch. The writing is boring. But the plot is pretty good. As for the characterization, it's not bad, it's okay. And there is. There are so many words to express feelings. Generally speaking, Chinese people don't express their love directly to their faces. Mainly just not sweet enough. You can learn from the author in this regard. My wife came from 1,000 years ago. It also writes about daily life, but in terms of emotional writing. You can learn a lot from him.

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Although this fan work is not particularly good among the Genshin Impact fan novels I have read, it still deserves this five-star rating. The author's emotional descriptions in the plot are very delicate, whether it is Nasida's secret love or the emotional descriptions of the male protagonist and Nelu after their quarrel, they are all excellent. The body swap before the quarrel reminded me of the movie "Your Name", which was a miracle for me personally. The only shortcoming is that the hero and Nelu met and got to know each other five years ago and the hero's encounter with Nasida are a little written, and there is no sense of substitution. I hope the author can make a side story or something. I will finish this novel and hope that the author will keep up the good work in the subsequent plots and not let me down too much. After all, a two-hundred-word five-star book review ruined a lot of my brain cells [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

All eyes, Follow me! Look at me! Look at me! I have something to announce: i am a "As expected, I am not being watched by the gods..." "Canrea doesn't have a**, does she?" "You are my glory to this day." "He died in the windless Ember Sea. The wind could not take away his soul..." "Can you give me your old friend's soul?" "Morax, if we are destined, we will meet again one day." "There will always be creatures on earth who dare to face the power of thunder." "Brother!" "Brother Fushe!" "Hey, Fushe!" "Floating House…" "You were born with this fate! As long as you live, you will bring danger to the people around you. It is better to die like this and bring her back..." "Childhood's dreams are the most fragile things." "Why wasn't I the one who came to Canria first..." "Fly, fly, like a bird, Look at the world for me, Fly high into the sky for me. " "I... My "Hua Sanli" is the filth condensed from the memory of Mr. "Huzhai Palace". " ""Don't be blinded, don't be shaken, and always walk on the path you firmly believe in." "Just like I remember everything about Inazuma, as long as you remember me, I can live forever. " "I know that God is omnipotent and is willing to bestow power on mankind, which shows that God has deep expectations for us. Now that the general is in trouble, it is time for us to fulfill our promise. " "The Way of Chang is magnificent, and the gods are eternal! " "Youlezhai, I really live a happy life every day. " "So... Kakata keeps collecting parts because it thinks it can "fix" its master? " "Don't worry, the forest will remember everything. " "It's really a pity that I didn't get to see Nelu's Dance of the Flower Goddess. "

Come on, I want to see Nasita pregnant with triplets [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's very sweet at the beginning, sweet in the middle, and semi-sweet in the later. I hope the author can add more emotional stories on the road (●'◡'●)ﾉ♥ Readers who like Tangtang must read it. It looks good, come on author, I will give you one Y star for the first time

Not only is there Nelu and the girl, the author even gave himself to the male protagonist [laughing]

Good looking⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄Shy If my 51 pink ball can't draw Nilu, then I don't love Nilu enough [shy]

Give me candy!! The kind that can sweeten me to death!! In fact, multiple female protagonists are not as good-looking as single female protagonists

Oh, these five stars are a beautiful thing! [Understood] But I want to pay in installments [thinking] After thinking about it, I still have to save the author's face [I understand] After all, writing a novel is not easy either [laughs evilly]

I want to see Nasida pregnant

Needless to say, let's see how many stars I give. (ฅ>ω<*ฅ). Oh hi =￣ω￣=

Personal opinion Advantages: distinct characters, many emotional lines, no knives. Disadvantages: The male protagonist seems to be unconditionally accommodating to the female protagonist, the female protagonist is a bit too willful (it seems that she has not thought about herself), and some conflicts arise for no reason. Please don't criticize your personal opinions. Thank you.

Hehe~Nilu hehe~ I don't know if it's my own fault, but I looked a little broken in the back.

Don't say anything else. Generally speaking, this book is good and very sweet, especially the last few dozen pictures. Almost all of them are sweet, extremely sweet. The first few dozen pictures are also good and sweet. The only pity is that there are some small flaws, such as the blackened part. The writing here is really bad. Fortunately, there is not much written. Of course, it can be regarded as a link between the past and the future. That's it ^ω^

Damn it, 73 and the next few chapters, the ztm exploded, people were almost dead and poisoned by the devil. If you don't treat it, two women actually started fighting. There was also a god watching the show, and the 40 to 46 people in the front were also stunned when they saw me.

Come on! Looking at Nasida's lovely eyes, can you bear to be so slow?

What's going on with the Grass God? Why do you feel like you kind of like the protagonist [Thinking] [Laughing]

I read it to him all night long. It was so good that I couldn't stop watching it.

This author has a bit of a side job! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's amazing, it's a pleasure to change your body

This book is so sweet that it makes you lose your teeth. It's your teeth that are bad, uncle [please update]

Ahem. Sorry, I forgot to give 5 stars. This novel is very interesting. Don't be a eunuch. Hmm... What is the theme of the author's next and next novel?

What do you say? At first I thought this book was about a female protagonist, but it turned out to be a harem halfway through, but it's understandable. After all, I didn't read the introduction. I think it's a daily novel, and it's good to pass the time [shy]. It also has some cool content, no knives, no poison, and edible [like] [OK]

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author [like][like][like]

The story is new and very good. Hehehe, I watched it for an hour specifically to give it five stars [I learned it]

No knife, no knife, no knife, no knife, no knife

The author should update quickly, otherwise he would just use the modifier and start working piecemeal [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Cowhide, cowhide, invincible, incoherent