I Become ****

The book is very good, but the current character design of the male protagonist does not want to have a female protagonist, and does not want the male protagonist to be emotional.

Not bad, but judging from the introduction and the content of the first twenty chapters, it seems that there should be a female protagonist? I hope the emotional line is better written. The characters are well written, but can the deliciousness be expressed as a percentage in the later stage? You can eat it if it is 100%. It will become more delicious if it exceeds 100%. It would be better if you can eat it without 100%.

Overall, the writing is very good, but the host bound by the protagonist is too naive. I hope the host bound by the author next time will be smarter and more cautious. Otherwise, if all the hosts are so naive and so stupid, there will be nothing to watch. Only the showdown between wise men and wise men is the most exciting and most interesting.

It's very well written, but it has a fatal flaw, that is, there are too few

Why is there no space in the first world of the system, and then what halo can use power to influence brain waves?

It looks good, but why isn't it updated? The author is short of 100 million points

Big cheers for the author!

So-so, but good luck to the newbie author＾0＾~