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I hope it will be updated soon. At the same time, Pain's combat power in Naruto is about the same as that of a general. I hope the author will pay attention to it.

The plot is smooth and doesn't drag out, and it's quite interesting.

The writing is okay, I hope it won't be too fast. I think it should be okay to set Eternal Madara to be on the same level as the Yonko. To be honest, the various skills in Naruto are buggy enough, and you can gain points very quickly. Now you can even become a Jinchuriki by defeating the tailed beasts, which is completely different from the rest of the Straw Hats. Now it is a mysterious dragon realm that is completely out of place, and it is still cheating. It will definitely collapse if written like this.

It's pretty good, please give it a try, the author, don't let it suck.

This one is a bit faster

I hope the author can come back soon

To be honest, the author, you are really slow in updating. If you update faster, this book might be better. I think it is quite interesting. I don't know what others think.

The author advises you not to have any system wizards or use any tasks.

Ouch, not bad! Keep up the good work!

Super exciting and worthy of the author! Please update the author a lot [I'm about to cry]

That's it. . . .

Very good, author, please do it