Reincarnated as a Lolita, I Am the End of the Gods

It's pretty good. In the early stage (about the first 30 chapters), it was a bit boring due to some settings, and it felt a bit broken. But later on, it gets better and better. I obviously feel that the author's text has improved. It's really well written. Come on author. The author, I suggest you change the introduction. This introduction doesn't seem to fit the content very well, and the introduction looks a bit boring.

The writing is very good, and Rococo's strong and unyielding character is well portrayed (especially the aspect of crumbs). I also like combat transformation stories. I give it five stars. I hope Yangyang will continue to work hard [like][like][like]

It's rare to see such exciting fighting novels nowadays. The mixture of daily life makes the novel more comfortable and less likely to cause fatigue than pure fighting. Scene description: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The description is sometimes grand and sometimes detailed. Each scene provides the perfect environmental backdrop for the plot. The bird's-eye view of the big scene during the fight and the depiction of daily details are just right. Plot depth: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (some spoilers) More than 600 chapters have been written, and the author has gradually become more proficient in narrating the plot. From the beginning, it was like a formula, writing a very common system, encountering tasks, and completing tasks (forced). Although it has no characteristics, it gives a very effective view of the world. As you continue to go deeper, the plot becomes more ups and downs. Each adventure of Rococo (the protagonist) has its own characteristics. You can see that Rococo has experienced setbacks, encountered opportunities, explored its secrets, and finally grown in strange adventures, giving readers a rich experience. As the plot progresses, the author's writing style continues to improve and has his own style. For example: In the era of novels where system literature is rampant, the existence of the system is constantly weakened, and it is more like a game UI, giving information and exchanging items. Although there is a system, there is nothing wrong with removing it and giving the function of the system to another character. The outline is clear, without too many useless descriptions, and each plot contributes to the development of the plot. It is super hard-core. Warm reminder: There are almost no emotional scenes, the ones that drive emotions are... Characterization: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Each character has his own unique personality, rich background, and very distinct appearance. Lifelike characters appear on the page, and the words describe the joys and sorrows of each character, as if a real person is standing in front of you. Fight details: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The majestic battlefield and murderous moves can be imagined with just a few descriptions by the author, making people's blood rush! Author: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Where can I find authors who stay up late to give readers likes? Overall rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Why are you standing there? Look!

I'm lazy, but it looks good, so I posted it. The recommendation said that the author has good control over the strength and prefers polygons, so... I recommend meow... Ummm... The inside... It's just... Pretty good... Haha... (I'm not out of words, meow!) Come on, author, meow. A brief introduction? Hmm... ロリ, Fun, sentimental, highly practiced and opening a new account, cute and... Um... Quite nice?

The plot is not bad, but the writing still needs to be improved, and there are a lot of inappropriate words. But it is much better than those verbal essays. The overall plot arrangement is still very clear, and the overall plot is not too bland. As for the subject matter, I personally feel that the author used the setting of sexual transformation into a lolita, but did not write about the pleasure of turning into a lolita. The protagonist somewhat refuses to show off her cute chastity, not to mention that the article is biased towards the adventurous and combat-promoting type of article, which actually does not match the protagonist's setting. Therefore, I still recommend that the author give more thought to the material selection. There is no need to write it just to make it popular. Finally, I wish the author's writing skills will get better and better, and his new book will become more and more popular. [Working on draft]

The author is quite nice~ The author will respond to readers' questions seriously and actively make patches. It can be seen that the author has a complete outline and his writing style is getting better step by step! The key point is that the author must be a Yueji person and has referenced many urban settings, but he is definitely not a fan of Yueji. The author has absorbed many interesting settings in the city, and it is not confusing. The settings of Yueji are well integrated into the author's own settings. Although there are many confusing things in front of you, as long as you have questions, the author will definitely answer these questions in the paragraph review. The questions you will have will be asked by others in the paragraph review, and the author will definitely answer them. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better and better! It was pretty good at the beginning and the experience was great, but later on it started to pile up settings and even conflicted with the original settings. The combat power will be high and low. The combat power system is the same as that of Battle Through the Sky. After the protagonist upgrades, some people who are only slightly weaker than the protagonist will appear out of nowhere. At first it was said that level 5 was very few, but then level 5 started to suck, and so did the subsequent heroes, which just kept piling up levels and settings.

It's really, really, really good-looking, and it suits my taste. The protagonist's strength is guaranteed to a certain extent, but he doesn't have the invincibility at the beginning to kill the whole world without thinking, and then he has a personality. Each character setting is also very complete. The plot setting, world view setting and protagonist's abilities are also very exciting. It doesn't fall into the clichés of abnormal world novels. It can be read from the words. It can be seen that the author is serious about the readers. Although the story line is long enough, the relationship between the characters is not that complicated and difficult to understand. In short, the author has a very good balance in terms of world view, writing style, length, story line development and character setting. It is really a peerless article that I can keep reading. I sincerely recommend it! Also, I have listened to it over and over again five or six times from the first chapter to more than 1,500 chapters. I listen to it every night before going to bed. I like Rococo! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

So far, overall it's okay There are appropriate connections between the plots and the series is pretty good. But my writing skills can be further developed (I won't deny that I'm picky), and so can my writing skills. A few suggestions: To be honest, I think the author should just write according to his own pace, copy, and outline. Heeding too much to the readers' opinions will not make a good book (my advice is the same). It is best to control each character well and think about the plot development from the character's perspective when writing the plot (that is, don't be too free of your own mood, and think more about the character outline and plot). (With a little personal stuff) Just leave it alone, please

I like you 9 points. Just one look at you and I like you very much! [Chigua] I love the author so much, okay?

A good book with a novel subject matter. I like to read this kind of book with a little bit of cool writing and a compact plot, with a little bit of excitement and tension. The characters are also very well created. This is considered to be at the top of the sexual transformation. Brothers, please remember to recommend it after reading it. Don't worry, the author will wait until my salary comes down to give you a master certification.

The characters are carefully created, and even the non-protagonists have many impressive impressions. The plot is exciting and unique, and the foreshadowing is hidden in the "system tasks" and character actions, making it enjoyable to watch but not tiring. Moderate jokes:.

Very good, I am a lolicon and I like Coco too much (I'm crazy) Overall, the novel has a very good worldview and a big world view. Although it has more than 800 chapters, it is still like a fog. It is so good at shaping the characters and developing emotions. It also gives me a very novel and comfortable feeling (maybe I have not read enough Bushi. In my opinion, the biggest advantage is the narrative plot. You should know that the big disadvantage of Tomato novels is that the author fails in the middle and late stages. As a result, some books become readable but lose a little bit of flavor later on. There are also many books where the setting is very confusing at the beginning (part of it, of course). Finally, I really recommend everyone to read it. For someone like me who is picky about books, this book is really perfect. It basically touches my heart. Finally, I wish the author Yangyang will get better and better as he writes more, and Coco is the best! ! It's been 25 years since I first saw Japan and I've been raising it till now. Hahahaha, now I want to watch it! Time flies so fast. I still remember the comments I made in 2023.

Although not many people watch this genre, once you accept the setting and watch it, you will definitely not be able to run away. The delicate content will not make people confused, the rigorous logic makes the reading experience further, and the author who patiently answers questions from book friends is the finishing touch. As long as you keep updating, I will always support you! ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶ з

After reading the book reviews, I scrolled down and couldn't find two or three-star negative reviews. Sure enough, putting the genre in the title of the book can avoid too many negative reviews due to different tastes. Probably, as long as this type of book is not desperate, the lower limit is 6.5-7, Good writing is 8 or above, and non-toxic and in line with public taste, 9 or above, nothing to say. (I really like this type, I hope the author can grasp it well and don't collapse later)

The author's writing is very good, and he is very rigorous in details, filling in holes, and logic. To be honest, in many books I read in the past, I would forget about it after digging for holes. Moreover, the author is really good at portraying the characters, with emotional backgrounds, and there are really many characters that impressed me deeply, such as Shen Fist Li Cangdong, Overlord Mo Bai (Mo Qingcang), doctor Luo Gang, Taoist priests Ke Bei and Meng Hai, etc. (There are really too many to list) I like Coco's current character very much. She treats bad guys without mercy and always tries to find ways to help them (Coco is really much gentler now). She teaches Jiuyuan the elements (although it's just that sentence, but it is really helpful to Jiuyuan). She helps Wuyue solve her troubles and fights on behalf of the element gate. At the same time, she also respects the wishes of the elements in elemental fusion (although she may also have the idea of ​​increasing the success rate), protects those one hundred civilians and lets An Coco take action, etc. I like the interactive posts between An Coco and Coco. I will be moved by the Overlord's self-sacrifice for others. I will be excited when the "Hero Coco" comes forward to save the adventurers on the train. I will feel worried when An Coco sacrifices herself and falls into a deep sleep. At the same time, I will also conduct my reasoning in various difficult events. This book gives me a different feeling from what I have read before, but all in all, I really like this book, and I hope that Yangyang can continue to work hard and keep updating (of course, you should also pay attention to your body at the same time) p. S: It's just my personal opinion. There are always some inaccurate descriptions of some places. Look how many hours you have been watching hehe

I urge you to update more, the writing is very good, it feels like watching a hot-blooded comic, but I hope the author will not focus on the female character, and the protagonist's feelings for An Keke are a bit too fast. Before, I felt that I was just a happy enemy, but I almost turned into a yandere after the line. It is obvious that the two younger brothers and the head maid have also put in a lot, but in the final analysis, there are too few female teammates to post.

It's really great, the plot is not cliche and the characters are well created. [Like] [Send heart] (But I feel that the plot is still a bit repetitive, so I quickly sent out the saved manuscript so that I can identify it again [smile] [smile])

Forget it because I posted it for Lolita. There are relatively few places to post and it's not too much. It feels really good to dip the beans. At present, Chapter 1220 has a small number of protagonists. The world view is grand and there are many and subtle foreshadowings. I hope it can be filled in. You can write a little about daily life, not too much, and the development of teammates after meeting the protagonist. Although Ah Wei, Chen Ning and others are not qualified to participate in this level of battle, they are still somewhat curious. Personally, I am looking forward to the follow-up with Chen Ning. It's already very good as it is now. The author's writing has improved visibly. I hope this book will be even better.

There are some loopholes but they are innocuous, and there is no problem with the logic. Some details must be prepared in place [Thinking] When a special (important) character appears, judge whether the background of the story should be placed in the front or back according to the situation, so as to avoid the situation of digging a hole and not being able to bury it [Note] By the way, is the Tomato author well treated? I have been reading books for several years, and many authors have run away from the book and screwed it [face covering]

It's a very good book, but the author needs to think more about it. For example, it needs to be foreshadowed, like unlocking new skills. If it is unlocked suddenly, people will have the illusion that it is a temporary setting, such as the metal stick that draws 1/10 of the blood. If there is foreshadowing, it is said that this metal stick can be researched, otherwise it will suddenly be a coincidence. There is a "breakthrough" that says this weapon suddenly appeared just for this situation. This is really strange, as if it was added just to get away with this setting. This is some advice I gave to the author. It is really well written. I like this book, and I also want to express my thoughts and let the author hear it. Of course, my expression is not very good, sorry [blow kiss]

To be honest, I was attracted by the title, hehehe [eating melon], but after reading it, I feel that the plot is really not exciting [I learned it], but I still feel that the character creation is not interesting. At present, I feel that the character traits of Awei and Jiuyuan are somewhat similar, and there is no outstanding point. Of course, the above is purely a personal conjecture. If you say you are right (Stacked Armor), there are not many people who have not seen it_(:з∠)_ I take back what I said before. The characters are really well created and the plot is very smooth. I am looking forward to the following plots_(:зゝ∠)_However, the frequency of sighs of the characters is a bit high. I hope it can be reduced a little [eating melon]

The writing is very good. Keep up the good work, the author. [Like] As a thriller, it also has rules-based ghost stories. The setting is very novel, but it does not pay too much attention to this aspect. I personally feel that the writing is very good. I hope the author will not collapse in the later stage [laughing] [love] Five stars! ! !

I can only say that it is a god. At present, almost no book of the same type can surpass it (maybe I am short-sighted), but whether it is the writing, plot or characterization, it really brings the characters to life. The plot is humorous where it should be, and knife where it should be.|･ω･｀), Sheep, you are my god!

To be honest, the writing style of this book has surpassed 90% of Tomato's novels. The character of the protagonist is also very upright. Overall, the protagonist has a small knife and a big knife. The protagonist can always save the day. But the reference of combat power becomes more and more outrageous in the later stages. At the beginning, level 3 is the mainstay of the team and the main force of adventurers. Now level 3 has changed from a talent to a talent, and level 5 has become a background from the king who can turn the tide of the war. A weaker legend can only delay time. In the final analysis, the protagonist develops too fast. In order to create an atmosphere, the author can only increase the danger of the event. Now only ordinary people are left, who still perform stably and cannot escape the fate of being a drag. The plot has good coherence. The reasoning and reversal in the foreshadowing can always make people shine. It is a pity that it is a serialized novel. According to this large-scale world view, if the author wanted to expand the writing, 600 chapters would not even be 20%. However, although it seems that the plot is advancing very quickly, in fact, only about two months have passed in the novel world... If I remember correctly, I hope the novel will not end so quickly.

Overall, this book is very nice! In my opinion: she is not just an interesting story, but more like a "miniature" society. She has many truths. For example, the King of Boxing Li Cangdong, who attacked abnormal events everywhere and saved many people, was hailed as a "hero" by the Adventurer Association and the world, but he ignored his wife and daughter - family love, and then in order to save him The daughter joined the Oracle and finally realized "I am me"; and Coco overcame many difficulties with the help of Xiao An and kept her true heart; and the death of the Overlord, which is a very interesting event. The inheritance of the Overlord is not a responsibility or a cage, but a blessing and gift from the seniors to the younger ones. Overall, I highly recommend it. (This is purely my understanding, I don't like to criticize it)

Wow, this is another book that can be included in my favorite novels. Although the description is very simple, it can bring me the exact feelings. When Loli encounters a crisis, I will feel nervous and worried. When Loli survives the strange incident, I will also feel happy. This book is written with clear ideas and rich and interesting content. Even though I like daily-style novels, the strange events in this book still attracted me very much and drove me to keep reading. I seem to be gradually becoming interested in this type of article (or content).

Very nice transformation text! The setting is very good, the writing is also good, and it doesn't stick to the purely cool writing routine! Come on, Yangyang٩(๑^o^๑)۶

It was really comfortable to read. At first, I was attracted by the title. Then I became more and more comfortable as I read the content. I like the characterization and personality traits of the protagonist and supporting characters very much. They are all very vivid and the author does not blindly promote the protagonist. In many cases, the protagonist becomes a supporting character, while those real supporting characters exude strong personality charm. Moreover, the author's IQ Online has many unexpected plots that really become more exciting the more you read. Moreover, the style of this book is fused with rules, ghost stories, and supernatural powers. The background is also very detailed. It not only includes many traditional martial arts and scenic spots and celebrities in our country, but also celebrities and locations abroad. It is a very rare novel and one of my favorite novels (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

Very interesting. This book is great. Hmm... I hope Rococo and Ancoco will be together [eating melon] in the end.

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