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This book is too slow to become popular The author should update more

Why is the author so slow to update? This book explains what the top resources of Tianlong people are. I hope that I can continue to work hard in the future!

The plot is not bad, but there is a little detail issue. One Piece never has the word martial arts, only taijutsu, and how can swallowing light become invisible? According to the refraction of time when seeing things with the eyes, what people see is darkness when there is no light. But compared with the day, one white and one black cannot be invisible. Invisibility should not be the day blending into white, and the night blending into black is invisible, just like the transparent fruit, and I feel that the protagonist's sword should be very similar to the dark fruit. Under the author's writing, One Piece has successfully turned into a fantasy novel, and the world's will has come out.

Very good pirate fanfic Really behind.

Not bad, come on, author

Not bad, come on, author

There are just a few people

Very well written, keep it up

The progress is very slow, I can't bear to watch it, I feel it's unnecessary, but I still praise it (o^^o)

It seems pretty good so far. The main character pursues becoming stronger and stronger. I feel that the goal is quite pure. This concept is quite interesting.

I have read some pretty good books and the descriptions are quite good.

I think this book is well written, you can read it, and it will also attract popularity to the author.