Master's Sword

The writing is very good, with a good foundation. No matter how stable and rich the characters are, it can be compared with the predecessors of printed martial arts novels. It is really difficult to choose a book now. You can't look at the ranking, the popularity, or the title of the book. Choosing this book is all a coincidence due to the book shortage. If I hope to keep the pace, control the plot and characterization, it will be a great success. After reading miscellaneous books for 30 years, in recent years I have found that there are very few novels that people can read again. This book is very exciting.

A very good book, the author is very similar to Wen Ruian's writing style, dark martial arts style; much better than some so-called magical books! It's a pity that this book hasn't been developed yet. The small number of words means few people will read it, and the author is also slow to update. If the author insists on writing this book, it will definitely be a masterpiece, and I believe many people will read it! Come on author! According to the author's level, the completion of this book will definitely not be worse than The Book of the Dead under the Binglin God! I also read all the comments, and at first I thought the author was a veteran, but I didn't expect that he was a newbie! It's really rare for a novice to write such a work! I hope the author won't give up just because there are so few people reading it. If you keep at it, I believe it will definitely become a masterpiece! I'm not bragging about the author, it would be a pity not to write at this level. Over the years, some people have been promoting and criticizing Xiaobai's cool novels, which are just like domestic movies. They are all rubbish. The author's works are like pearls covered in dust but unknown. I have read hundreds of books on Tomato and very few have the patience to read them all in one go. I read the author's book in five hours in one go. I will keep it up first and then read it after I have fattened up [smile]

I finally read a novel with no time travel or rebirth. It's a great novel. Come on.

He has profound literature, broad knowledge, and is an expert in Chinese. Ordinary authors cannot write such easy-to-read novels in classical Chinese. The plot and design are reasonable and wonderful. Absolutely high marks. I like it, praise it, praise it.

Generally speaking, the writing style is smooth, the content is compact, and there are no poisonous points. The design of the protagonist's character is also quite good, but the description of the character is a bit deliberate. In addition, the arrangement of the realm is relatively unreasonable. There are basically no shortcomings in the rest. It is considered very good on Tomato's recommendation list and is worth it. Take a look, there are not enough chapters at the moment, and the progress of two updates a day can't keep up with the needs of readers. As for the score of 8.2, It is definitely on the low side. This book should be at least 9 points higher. I hope the author will continue to write. Although the current data may not be very good, it still looks very promising. Follow-up review: The gap in the realm has been filled, the number of words is enough now, and the daily updates are basically uninterrupted. Highly recommended.

The writing is good and has the flavor of the older generation of martial arts novels, but it is a bit sadistic. The reality is already very painful for me, so I want to have fun and decide not to read it. I will give it a five-star review and give you two yuan to support it [Like]

The plot is twists and turns, the story is strong, and the characters are vivid. The descriptions of practice and fighting scenes are really scene-based. There is no overnight deification. The characters and skills progress through natural growth or life-and-death duels, which is very interesting. It's not some kind of system that can soar in a day and see people enter the country quickly.

A very good novel, I think it is even better than The Sword of Beacon Fire. There are many places that make people feel excited. For example, he borrowed a sword from a wild man, and borrowed a sword from the bottom of the river to kill a white dragon. It just depends on how the big plot develops. In addition, it is not good to be Liu Xiahui all the time. I like the principal's books because the principal always gets on the horse when it is time. A man is upright. I quite like the character Yang Baodan, haha.

The writing is good, but the plot is quite depressing. Although I don't like cool writing, I feel like I'm being abused. Looking at the back, the writing is very good. But to be honest, the fighting has no visual sense. It's over with just a few strokes. The characters are also quite fleshed out. The plot is also very good. It's just that the overall immortal martial arts is a bit neither up nor down. Anyone can learn it just by looking at it. It's ridiculous to teach anyone who learns it. It's not like other books that have martial arts and mental skills. Just by looking at the moves, you can only imitate the tiger and the cat. The most troublesome thing is that no one is a good person when he abuses the protagonist in the early stage. Although there is a lot of foreshadowing later, it becomes a lot of people willing to help the protagonist without asking for anything in return. It also shows the protagonist's awesome background relationship. The book is a good book. But it doesn't look like the grudges of the swordsman. It doesn't have the coolness of a swordsman. It feels a bit depressing and aggrieved. Generally speaking, novels should not have ups and downs. There are lows and highs alternately. But after reading such a long foreshadowing in this book, I feel that there is only one big one. The book is very good. If you like low-level martial arts, you can read it. If you like martial arts books, you can take a look at "Pillow Knife".

Great book! Very wonderfully written! Encounter a good book! Not a novice! Come on!

The author's writing style, layout, and conception are truly world-class.

This book can show that the author should be a veteran. It is rich in content and very connotative. The slow-burning format should be savored slowly. It should be exciting to read later.

The work of the gods! It's completely comparable to a sword. If it is, as the author says, just another chapter of another chapter, then I am really looking forward to that magnificent masterpiece! Hope to see it soon!

The writing is excellent, and it is considered to be the best for online articles. It is just a bit tragic. I almost gave up in the middle. It's not that I think it's bad. It's just that I can't stand it. I need to slow down. In the end, I didn't wait long and I read it again. The writing is realistic enough. Many online articles don't really polish the characters. This book is still thoughtful. There is a mild Minotaur around Chapter 220, Seize the Cow. We can eat any book in this life. I really can't bear to stuff a Minotaur, not at all. I am too squeamish to tolerate this kind of thing. Only a trace amount of Minotaur can poison me. I don't have any resistance in this aspect [crying]

I saw that Li Qielai was about to fall into despair. The writing was quite good, the characterization was okay, and the plot logic was also good. However, I really don't recommend watching it. First, it's very frustrating, not just because of the knife, but because this kind of frustration is continuous and permeating. It doesn't matter if you don't keep the clouds clear and see the moonlight. There is even little temporary comfort in the back. To be honest, this style is not suitable for writing online articles. It will cause discomfort to a large number of people. Life is hard enough, but reading is still hard. It is worse than that. To put it bluntly, it is not as enjoyable as it is. It's not that the writing is not good, or that this book is not suitable for promotion; secondly, this book The tone of the book, as the author said, is about the opposition between different camps, but it is unfolded through the perspective of a small character, He Si. The original words roughly mean this, but the small character is actually not a small person, and the opposition between the various camps is mostly shown in the male protagonist. I personally feel that it is a bit missing. Things, for example, the opposition between camps is too focused on immortals, and there can be more things than just opposition between different levels. It feels like there are very few young spirited rangers in the world who want to do whatever they want... This is just a personal opinion. All in all, it feels very bland. After all, stir-fried bitter melon needs some seasoning. As the author's first book, I think it's really well written, but I don't like it a little. When I first read it, I still felt it smelled like a sword. Later on, I got a little tired of it, and I frowned while reading it because the logic was reasonable but I felt it shouldn't be like this. I've just said a bunch of clichés here, but in summary it's a good book, but I don't recommend it. I'm looking forward to the author's new book, which should have better writing skills.

It's rare to find a good article, and I can't say it's objective and fair. I'll just give you a few brief comments. The writing style is excellent, but sometimes the writer's spirit cannot be suppressed and some unnecessary and long words tend to pop up. The combination of the structure and the author's conception complements each other, and it can be regarded as a breakout from the sameness. It's just that it has stopped now. When writing a long article, I am most afraid of this kind of interruption without warning. After a long time, I am afraid that I will not be able to advance or retreat, so I simply give up. Then this article is really a pity. It can reach 9 or more. It's a good book both in terms of the big structure and the subtlety of the writing. It would be even better if it could express more of the magnificent scenes directly from the heart.

At the beginning, I saw that the mountain was not a mountain. It felt like fishing for the moon in a well, but I didn't know why. In the middle and later stages, as the foreshadowing unfolds, this is a huge world. The dynastic rivalry within and outside the Pass, the rivalry between immortals and natives, etc. The characters written by the author are very unique, and the storyline gave me a feeling of sinking into a sea of ​​misery. The overall story is very delicate, perhaps too delicate. There are indeed some redundancies in some places, but it is innocuous. It is a very good martial arts➕fantasy novel. There are many things worth pondering and thinking about, and it is a connotative book.

Watch from beginning to end! It was the first time I watched "Zhu Xian" and I didn't want to watch anything else for fear of repeating "No Divine Commentary" again. It's really good! ! !

It's a very good novel. I hope more people can calm down and read it.

The author has extremely high literary literacy and profound writing skills. Even if he writes a novel with his feet, not many people on Tomato can match it! How would you describe the author's level? If most of the writers on Tomato are at the level of elementary school students, the author may have graduated from graduate school, and there is a gap between them in junior high school, high school, and university. Regardless of whether the author is writing a novel for the first time, or there are too many uncommon words in the article, or he is browsing Baidu while reading a book, or the whole novel is a bit boring, the flaws cannot be ignored. The author's style is simple and elegant, and he uses words carefully. He writes novels with great care. Although the general framework is Buddhist, Taoist and Confucian, the writing is really good. I hope the author will publish more novels.

The writing is indeed good, the story line is clear, although there are many characters, the characters have distinct personality characteristics, and the writing is smooth, so that the readers will not fall into the fog. It is rare to find a good book, but some words and allusions in the article are too uncommon, but the author also explains it in the article. It is because I am ignorant and have little knowledge, so reading the author's masterpieces can be considered as gaining knowledge. I look forward to the author continuing his efforts and reaching greater heights.

Very beautiful, very exciting, indeed a rare masterpiece. (Can the author add more interactions between the protagonist and the heroine? I'm looking forward to it [sending my heart])

After reading two to three hundred chapters, the protagonist is always injured, but the writing is good and the mood is very artistic. It's uncomfortable to watch, and it's awkward to improve relationships and realm. If you're not very patient, don't watch it.

What can I say? The writing is good. After reading more than 100 pictures, I felt that I didn't like it, so I gave up. But it is indeed well written, but I don't like it very much.

It's such a good book... I've read it from beginning to end... I can't explain why I haven't given you a good review after reading it for so long [laughing evilly] It's the first time in so many years that I have to look up a novel in a dictionary [face covering] It must be rated seven stars! Great book! Nice! Mind-expanding! It's so mind-numbing! Your body, which is crippled from head to toe, must be supported by 90% of the qi machine to prevent it from shattering [face covering] The remaining 10% of the qi machine can destroy the fifth-level master [laughing and crying] If one day the body returns to normal, and 100% of the qi machine can be withdrawn to fight, do you have to kill the third-level master with one finger and hit the second-level master with one punch? One sword kills one level [laughing and crying] When the immortal awakens in the blessed land, Su Hui has only reached the third level. Even if you take two supplements later to reach the peak of this blessed land, it will only be one finger, one punch and one sword to kill with 100% of your Qi. Finally, I pieced together a world (blessed land) and then sewed together the sword in the snow. Just like the pig's feet, He Si's body was sewn and mended for three years [laughing and crying] Well, it was mended and mended for three days, because in three days, the body was either broken or gone. Three magic skills were needed to sew and glue them together to form... Too much water, so tired!

Come on author! Tell the truth, don't interact too much with the comments, there's no need to read them all! Answer them all! Negative energy will affect the writing! Hold on to your thoughts! Just write down the world in your heart! I read the comments and saw some of the negative comments, which made me feel uneasy. I almost finished it after reading it for a week. It was very well written! Very Jianghu style, Jianghu justice! I hope the article can be stable in the future. I think the first 100 chapters of this book are the best. I hope the author's subsequent articles and plots can be closer to the first 100 chapters! Keep the plot going! If it stays at the level of the first 100 chapters, I don't think this book can be compared to Sword. I have read too many Jianghu novels in the snow. For several years, they always conferred gods at the beginning, but then the plot description and character relationships began to collapse. I hope the author can stabilize the article and keep up the good work! Still praise the author! This novel is very well written! I hope my grades will soar! The more articles you write, the better! Stayed up late to read it! Refresh! Come on Xiaowan! Reading the new chapters, I can feel that Xiao Wan's condition is getting better! Come on and work hard! Cheer you up!

I have been reading this book for a long time, and I also read it very carefully at the beginning. When I read a book, I pay more attention to the emotional line. Basically, I hope there will be a happy ending. I don't have any objection whether you have a harem or a single heroine. I am also an innocent person. Someone spoiled that He Hua is gone. , I don't have the mood to read anymore. Life is hard, and the stories I read are so hard. I can't stand it anymore. I don't have the patience to look for something sweet to read. The article is good. I read it for a long time. Except for the feelings, the writing is quite good. That's it. I don't review every book.

The writing is very good, and perhaps because of this, the story progresses a bit unevenly from the beginning. The writing is very skillful, but the details are too detailed, and the book bag is too much. The right way to spend more time on setting up plot conflicts and triggering people's desire to explore

The writing is very good and beautiful. The quality is very high and it's not like a Tomato book. The only thing I feel is that the author has never written a long novel and the rhythm of the writing is not very good and I feel like I can't control it.

Yes, it was well written. It found a different path and created its own school. It felt very refreshing. However, the emotional drama of the protagonist was a bit lacking. In ancient times, men with great ability had to have three wives and four concubines. There is no need to be pure.