Dou Po: Start with the Golden Crow as a Pet

Let's just say that we should be brothers with Xiao Yan. We won't steal his opportunities, but we can steal his girls, right, Medusa, Yun Yun, and the Little Medical Fairy [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

Well written, pay attention to segmentation

It's very interesting. Let's put it this way. I've read so many Dou Po fan novels. This one isn't the best, but it's pretty decent. The protagonist is not invincible from the beginning, but also gradually improves his strength. Although the plot is the same as the original, this is how the plot develops. The author may consider a Fight against some forces that have not been written before, add some new plots, and also suggest adding a little scene between Hai Bodong and Cai Die. After all, when watching Song of Sand, Cai Die's death was a pity. I hope the author can travel back in time and space later to save Hai Bodong when he met Die. This is just a suggestion that the author may consider adopting. But now we have met Medusa. If we add it later, Medusa will not know the protagonist now, which will be a bit troublesome and difficult to deal with.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn and lowered my head deeply. Silently turned off the phone, stood up, opened the refrigerator, and took out a bottle of 82 The collector's edition of Nongfu Spring, hold it tightly in your hand and walk slowly When I went to the window, the scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood Same, heavy, very heavy, gradually, it becomes gray outside It's raining lightly in the sky. Why? My vision is blurred. I don't know. Whether it's because I shed tears or because it's raining heavily, maybe it's both, I My mood became even more melancholy, and I could no longer suppress my inner feelings. I felt so excited that I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just TM Who do you look down on in the next few chapters?

I don't know why it's so good. I just know that I can integrate into the book and become a practitioner. The author may have compared himself to Jiang Ye, who can fulfill his childhood dreams in the form of writing. I must support it.

The subject matter is very good, very good. Personal opinion, just for reference: I think it would look better if there were no blue scales on the front. For example, when refining medicine, there are blue scales, which looks very unpleasant [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

It's pretty, but it's just not enough.

The author needs to work hard to code it, it's not enough to read [smile]

It's quite nice to see that Xun'er and Ling Ying seem to have to take care of everything in his home. Why is the system gone?

The writing is okay, I hope it won't turn into a harem in the future, there are many such disgusting ones. After all, writing fan fiction can actually change the original work and create something fresh, so keep going!

The author writes well

Very interesting, come on, author

Come on, it's still good

Who is the single heroine?

It looks good, but it's a little short. It's bad. The author must be short and weak (dog head).

The author writes very well, keep it up

One of the few good-looking Dou Po fans, please support me

It's not bad. It would be nice to have more. It's not enough! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's not bad, I'm a bit licking the protagonist, but I think it's okay, it's quite normal, it's nothing. I hope the author will write better and better, and there will be more updates for the author.

The writing is very good. I hope the author will work harder (ง •̀_•́)ง. Finally, I have a small request. I hope the author can write longer paragraphs into paragraphs instead of combining them into one paragraph.

After watching Attracted by a Shen, it was pretty good. I personally liked it. Big cheers for the author

Author, your book is really good. There are a lot of updates, and there are many updates. Don't let it be unfinished. Your book Dou Po is the most beautiful one I have read in recent years. I support it with five-star reviews.

Another fanfic of Superior Dou Po is released, please whip the author to add more updates [sneaky laugh]

I might as well ask who the heroine is?

So will Yun Yun and Xiao Yan be together?

Praise me for reading the author in one go [shy]

Very nice, I like this book very much

Very good, I don't know why the rating is so low, give it a five-star rating, come on, author.

It's good. I hope the author can keep writing and don't worry about trivial writing. He's not a big writer who has been writing for decades. It's good to not be confused. Free novels require a bicycle. Besides, there are really few fighting articles. This book is already very logical. Come on, take a group photo with 500,000 words [please update] [please update]

Very good essay