Naruto: Accepting Hinata as a Disciple, Blowing up Fish Ponds with a Black Coffin

The plot is very good. Come on, author! As for Naruto, as long as there aren't too many, it's okay to include one or two female characters, which is still acceptable. As long as the plot doesn't collapse, it won't be a big problem.

It looks great so far. It depends on whether the author can stick to it. Come on.

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up and opened the refrigerator, took out the 1982 collector's edition of Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit bleak, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy, gradually , a gray drizzle started outside the window. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was my tears or the heavy rain. It's possible. My mood became even more depressed. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Who are you looking down on in just a few chapters?

After reading these chapters, I looked solemn, lowered my head deeply, turned off my phone silently, stood up, opened the refrigerator, took out a bottle of 1982 collector's edition Nongfu Spring, held it tightly in my hand, and slowly walked to the window. The scenery outside the window was a bit dim, just like my mood, heavy, very heavy Heavy, gradually, it began to rain lightly in the gray sky outside. Why, my vision was blurred. I don't know whether it was me crying or the rain was heavy, maybe both. My mood became more melancholy. I could no longer suppress my inner emotions. I opened the window and shouted out the window: Just TM Who are you looking down on in the next few chapters? .

It's not that I don't like what you wrote. For now, it's mainly because the title of your book used to be a 10,000-fold rebate. I just moved it out of the bookshelf group and didn't see it before I discovered the name change. Another drawback is that the 10,000-fold rebate is now up to 1,000 times. The rebate is a random multiple. Let's wait and see and make an evaluation later. It's ugly. They say giving it two stars will lower the rating. I don't know if it's true or not. I suggest giving it two stars if you see it later. I came back to complain about this book. The main content is Naruto, but let's just say that your plot is a mess. The title of the book has been changed once. It used to be the beginning of the book with a ten thousand times rebate to teach Hinata Black Coffin, and later it was changed to the beginning of the book to teach Hinata the fiancée. However, you have been marrying Hinata for more than 300 chapters. At this time, you are basically marrying Hinata, the red-haired one, and the one from the original Hawk Squad (I can't think of it at the moment). And the biggest flaw is that there are a lot of weird things added here that can't be explained. First, the evil god came to life and added a lot of views about the gods in the Naruto world. You also made the big tengu lively, and added another evil god's name to the dialogue with the evil god's daughter (it is included later, but there is no need to continue reading this book. If you like this book, then I can't help but you can read it if you want). Second, you had previously written three prophecies for the protagonist when he went to practice at Mt. Miaomu. Even now, the entire ninja world regards you as a big boss. These prophecies have not changed at all. You don't know when you will fill the hole you dug yourself. Third, Sasuke is already dead. As far as the Naruto world is concerned, before the finale of Shippuden, just over half way through, you wrote Sasuke to death and Naruto didn't get up, and also made a bunch of definitions of gods. So what are you going to do next? Those who read this book are reading Naruto. You are doing this and writing that. How will you write later? The Akatsuki organization hasn't ended yet, Obito hasn't been exposed yet, and you're writing this. Fourth, and what I am most curious about now, you changed the title of the book back and forth, and I suspect you may change it again in the future. In this book, not only the protagonist is a time traveler, but there is also a system, so it is going to be a fight. You have just appeared, and there may be time travelers. This is not the right title for your book. Many other books basically have methods, but you are here, and you have everything. Are you going to write the system to life later? In short, this book is poisonous. I don't mind everyone reading it. If you think it's not good, just remember to share it.

Not bad, it looks good. Why is the score so low? Come on, author! The novel can be read without thinking, it can be said to be very good.

The writing is very good, the Naruto part has its own thing, and the world view opens up. Isn't it good to just write about Naruto? Those who chase Naruto are all Naruto fans, why are we going to write about a messy world later? The threshold is too high. How do you read those comics if you haven't read them yet? If we only write about Naruto, relatively speaking, the authors in the Naruto author circle are definitely at the top level. This book can be regarded as a god.

[Face covering] Sorry! I took the money, it's so embarrassing (｢･ω･)｢Hey

The five-star review urges the author to update. I hope the author can write Boruto. At present, the Naruto novel has not changed from Oh Naruto to Boruto. In my current opinion, it has not yet, maybe I haven't found it.

The writing is good and exciting [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Author, are you sure you have watched Naruto?

It was okay in the early stage, but it was not good after coming out of Death. The previous stage was comparable to Kaguya. He couldn't kill a few passers-by, and some random people came out to fight against the protagonist.

You seem to be trying to make me laugh. Yes, you succeeded.

Update quickly, the author is so short [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's great, but I just want to say, can you stop getting into Japanese comics? Can I enter Chinese comics?

Emm, how long will it take for Naruto to end [what]

This book is also very well written. I accept all refutations. If you don't accept it, do it.

Very good, there are more and more books like this. I'm afraid I'll see sudden death.

The update can be faster, because it is so beautiful, I hope you can read 200 chapters a day.

Don't let the plot collapse, this book is worth looking forward to [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it] Come on [code hold] [code hold] [code hold]

There are inevitably some flaws in some places, so I'll give it 6 stars.

I always feel that the male protagonist of this book is a loli killer.

Not bad for myself

It's not enough. Can you do it? I'm about to type.

I have almost finished reading this book. Will I not go to other worlds? [Cover face]

Not bad, but what about the other worlds mentioned in the introduction?

Like it, come on, like it, come on, like it, come on

This speed is worrying. There are now more than 300 pictures, and Naruto has not been finished yet. When can I wait until Detective Conan?

It's not bad. The protagonist knows about wolfberry, but there's something wrong with the eye-roll setting at the beginning.

Write a long article about yourself over two million! Dear author, now there is no Hinata Aizuki and Yagami Chigetsu to compete with you, because one is removed from the shelves and the other is completed. The things I encountered today were more and more destructive. For example, the book was finished, and the kitten that had been raised for a short time but was not too young was given away by a selfish father... Goodbye, the author, and from now on... Don't write abusive articles...