Being assassinated by Danzo, being used by the Third Generation, and being disgusted by Obito, these are the normal situations in Naruto fan fiction.
None of it is in this book!
The pig's feet went smoothly, and the only time his life was in danger was when he almost had his heart ripped out by the combination of Black Zetsu and Obito's Space Eye Technique.
In addition, there are very few plots in the original work, and the plot has been greatly changed, so there will be many explanatory chapters.
Rest assured, many of the points in the article are at least reasonable.
There is no fight that would take up a few chapters, it is very fast and concise, and even a great ninja war would not take up a lot of space.
Finally, there is Itachi Uchiha, who will not die well, will not die well, will not die well...
Reader comments
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Package travel package rebirth package delivery system. Because the freshmen are small
There are too many worlds, resulting in a serious shortage of travelers, so now
Recruiting time-travelers, regardless of gender, old or young, is on a first-come, first-served basis. Point
If you like it, you will get the system. (Give it a try, it won't work anyway)
Ask for money)
This book is very good, support it!! !
The writing is good, but be careful not to get too hung up on the various settings. The most important thing about online writing is that it is enjoyable, and the second is updates. The plot is smooth and exciting, and if there are enough updates, it will definitely become popular. Whether it will be a small hit or a big hit depends on luck.
The protagonist's eyes are so powerful that they can rewrite reality and are destined to be invincible. If they can forcibly fuse with White Zetsu, they can also rewrite the bloodlines of other kaleidoscopes to merge with themselves. Immortal body plus immortal eyes, you are directly invincible
The author is so awesome. The writing is great. I enjoyed reading it. I feel that the characters have brains in the author's writing. There is no cp in making a wish, making Nanhe Sang uniquely beautiful. The protagonist's IQ and strength are overwhelming. It's also great.
It's great that I know how to write shahasha
Ahhhhhh! (Dark squirming) (Rolling on the spot) (Crying) (Crawling) (Drooling) (Twisting) (Hold onto the author's thigh and hold on)
It's okay, but the author is wrong about the setting of chakra. Chakra is a kind of energy without attributes. It can change its nature through seals to release five-attribute ninjutsu. This technique of changing the nature of chakra can be inherited from ancestors or acquired.
Come on, it still looks good
The book is good. Seeing that the third generation still wanted to recall Jiraiya and Tsunade, did he have any misunderstanding about the closeness between himself and his three apprentices? It's funny that Jiraiya and Tsunade came back to mess with him.
The author's writing is really good. There may be some content that everyone has different opinions on, but just looking at the content of the article, it is really well written. The author has his own set of concepts. I am not very good at praising it, but I really recommend it.
Not bad, I just think Fugaku should have been given the Eternal Eye earlier! Don't leave it until the end!
This is one of the most beautiful Naruto fanfics I have ever seen. The setting is very good and the game is comfortable to play. However, it is still not strong enough. At that time, you should have wiped out all the higher-ups directly, just like the fourth generation of Sand Ninja. I think it's a bit bad to send Itachi out. Three pairs of kaleidoscopes, one for each person, and Konoha is gone. There's nothing to object to. History books are always written by the victors.
Cheers, author 😊
It's pretty good, he has some brains, nothing too poisonous, and he feels good when he scolds Itachi.
Develop this space where fantasy and reality coexist.
Here's a little suggestion: Just like the movie Silent Hill, where the inner world erodes the real space, let the protagonist's space briefly erode the real world (or expand the field within its own scope, refer to Luo Xiaohei's movie), and then relatively change some objective material conditions and factors in the real world.
I have two ideas: (1) The protagonist's eternal kaleidoscope can only make the enemy invincible after it is pulled into space. If it can directly counter-invade reality with divine power, it can directly obliterate or affect the enemy in reality through virtuality and reality at will.
(2) Doesn't virtuality and reality coexist in the current space? Create many ghosts in the space and release them to bite people when needed. If it really doesn't work, I wouldn't be surprised to have something similar to the main god space.
Originally, I thought about whether the author could add some weird and mysterious elements to the content, but now I have chosen the path of simple and crude power of Dragon Ball. All I can say is... I wish you success.
Author, you don't need to belittle yourself. You can avoid many minefields by learning from the past. Now it seems that your writing is more detailed and smoother than that of Konoha.
This is caused by differences in stance and cognition. Observing from different angles, you will find that everyone agrees with it from every angle. Everyone has dark thoughts, but most people don't have the ability to realize them.
I remember that Fugaku can see the future. If Shisui's eyes are fused to activate the other gods without contact when looking into the future, others will be directly affected. Also, by tricking the eyes to look into the future a few more times, the cooldown time of the other gods can be reduced. In this case, as long as you control a few key people in the future, you can influence the direction of the future. This is the eye of destiny.
Tailed beasts are weapons that check and balance a great ninja village. Once there is one more tailed beast in a ninja village, this balance will be broken. Other ninja villages will join forces to wipe out this ninja village, and the resources will be fairly distributed to their respective ninja villages. Therefore, even if the senior ninja village gets it, they will return it, but the way of return will be slightly different.
Yes, it's concise and clear, unlike those that write about a fight that are stinky and long.
I don't know why the rating is so low, I feel it is at least 9 points or above. The analysis of all aspects of Naruto is very thorough, and the basis for the mouth escape is also very reasonable. There may be some minor flaws occasionally, but they are not harmful, it is just missing a bit.
It should be 9 points, not bad
Except for the part about forgiving Itachi for the Uchiha clan, which is indeed a bit poisonous, everything else is pretty good. Of course, if there are more poisonous points in the future, I will modify my comments.
Great writing! I like it very much, but it's a bit short. I finished it in a while. I hope the author will work hard and update more~
I bought [][][] and my kids like to eat [][][] very much.
Customize the plug-in, can you set up the poisonous milk plug-in, which can poison others, or restore blood to yourself [laughing] and become an unbeatable Xiaoqiang
I hope I can set up how much blood and mana are restored when hitting others.
Awesome, keep it up!
All roads lead to Rome
Come on, author, come on!
This is the main character's ability. I thought it was based on the training methods in novels or dream novels.
Yes, Naruto wrote his own thoughts
The author's logic is still self-consistent, so why is this score only 5.9?
Although many people slander you, I support you [smile][smile][smile][smile]
We're recruiting, and the pay is good. Package travel package rebirth package delivery system. Because the freshmen are small There are too many worlds, resulting in a serious shortage of travelers, so now Recruiting time-travelers, regardless of gender, old or young, is on a first-come, first-served basis. Point If you like it, you will get the system. (Give it a try, it won't work anyway) Ask for money) This book is very good, support it!! !
The writing is good, but be careful not to get too hung up on the various settings. The most important thing about online writing is that it is enjoyable, and the second is updates. The plot is smooth and exciting, and if there are enough updates, it will definitely become popular. Whether it will be a small hit or a big hit depends on luck.
The protagonist's eyes are so powerful that they can rewrite reality and are destined to be invincible. If they can forcibly fuse with White Zetsu, they can also rewrite the bloodlines of other kaleidoscopes to merge with themselves. Immortal body plus immortal eyes, you are directly invincible
The author is so awesome. The writing is great. I enjoyed reading it. I feel that the characters have brains in the author's writing. There is no cp in making a wish, making Nanhe Sang uniquely beautiful. The protagonist's IQ and strength are overwhelming. It's also great. It's great that I know how to write shahasha Ahhhhhh! (Dark squirming) (Rolling on the spot) (Crying) (Crawling) (Drooling) (Twisting) (Hold onto the author's thigh and hold on)
It's okay, but the author is wrong about the setting of chakra. Chakra is a kind of energy without attributes. It can change its nature through seals to release five-attribute ninjutsu. This technique of changing the nature of chakra can be inherited from ancestors or acquired.
Come on, it still looks good
The book is good. Seeing that the third generation still wanted to recall Jiraiya and Tsunade, did he have any misunderstanding about the closeness between himself and his three apprentices? It's funny that Jiraiya and Tsunade came back to mess with him.
The author's writing is really good. There may be some content that everyone has different opinions on, but just looking at the content of the article, it is really well written. The author has his own set of concepts. I am not very good at praising it, but I really recommend it.
Not bad, I just think Fugaku should have been given the Eternal Eye earlier! Don't leave it until the end!
This is one of the most beautiful Naruto fanfics I have ever seen. The setting is very good and the game is comfortable to play. However, it is still not strong enough. At that time, you should have wiped out all the higher-ups directly, just like the fourth generation of Sand Ninja. I think it's a bit bad to send Itachi out. Three pairs of kaleidoscopes, one for each person, and Konoha is gone. There's nothing to object to. History books are always written by the victors. Cheers, author 😊
It's pretty good, he has some brains, nothing too poisonous, and he feels good when he scolds Itachi.
Develop this space where fantasy and reality coexist. Here's a little suggestion: Just like the movie Silent Hill, where the inner world erodes the real space, let the protagonist's space briefly erode the real world (or expand the field within its own scope, refer to Luo Xiaohei's movie), and then relatively change some objective material conditions and factors in the real world. I have two ideas: (1) The protagonist's eternal kaleidoscope can only make the enemy invincible after it is pulled into space. If it can directly counter-invade reality with divine power, it can directly obliterate or affect the enemy in reality through virtuality and reality at will. (2) Doesn't virtuality and reality coexist in the current space? Create many ghosts in the space and release them to bite people when needed. If it really doesn't work, I wouldn't be surprised to have something similar to the main god space. Originally, I thought about whether the author could add some weird and mysterious elements to the content, but now I have chosen the path of simple and crude power of Dragon Ball. All I can say is... I wish you success.
Author, you don't need to belittle yourself. You can avoid many minefields by learning from the past. Now it seems that your writing is more detailed and smoother than that of Konoha.
This is caused by differences in stance and cognition. Observing from different angles, you will find that everyone agrees with it from every angle. Everyone has dark thoughts, but most people don't have the ability to realize them.
I remember that Fugaku can see the future. If Shisui's eyes are fused to activate the other gods without contact when looking into the future, others will be directly affected. Also, by tricking the eyes to look into the future a few more times, the cooldown time of the other gods can be reduced. In this case, as long as you control a few key people in the future, you can influence the direction of the future. This is the eye of destiny.
Tailed beasts are weapons that check and balance a great ninja village. Once there is one more tailed beast in a ninja village, this balance will be broken. Other ninja villages will join forces to wipe out this ninja village, and the resources will be fairly distributed to their respective ninja villages. Therefore, even if the senior ninja village gets it, they will return it, but the way of return will be slightly different.
Yes, it's concise and clear, unlike those that write about a fight that are stinky and long.
I don't know why the rating is so low, I feel it is at least 9 points or above. The analysis of all aspects of Naruto is very thorough, and the basis for the mouth escape is also very reasonable. There may be some minor flaws occasionally, but they are not harmful, it is just missing a bit.
It should be 9 points, not bad
Except for the part about forgiving Itachi for the Uchiha clan, which is indeed a bit poisonous, everything else is pretty good. Of course, if there are more poisonous points in the future, I will modify my comments.
Great writing! I like it very much, but it's a bit short. I finished it in a while. I hope the author will work hard and update more~
I bought [][][] and my kids like to eat [][][] very much.
Customize the plug-in, can you set up the poisonous milk plug-in, which can poison others, or restore blood to yourself [laughing] and become an unbeatable Xiaoqiang I hope I can set up how much blood and mana are restored when hitting others.
Awesome, keep it up!
All roads lead to Rome
Come on, author, come on!
This is the main character's ability. I thought it was based on the training methods in novels or dream novels.
Yes, Naruto wrote his own thoughts
The author's logic is still self-consistent, so why is this score only 5.9?
Although many people slander you, I support you [smile][smile][smile][smile]