Harry Potter Slytherin

Mirabell is the most perfect tyrant, proud, beautiful, wise, and always true to herself. The only unhappiness was the death of his younger brother. He loved his sister so much. Regarding Edith, an inexplicable friendship that shouldn't have happened changed the outcome. In the name of love, she was hurt all the time. She is not worthy of being called a friend! And why did she receive the love of people around Mira as soon as she appeared? The maid regarded her as a friend. Angel left Sister Mi for her who never responded. What's more, she betrayed her. Sister Mi had no heart, she only had herself. She would only kill those who betrayed her instead of giving in and tolerating over and over again. The ending of destruction, although lonely, is the ending that best suits Mirabell's character. It is her story. She will not be shaken by one or two people, never!

It's worth watching, and it's very comfortable to listen to. The heroine is proud and perfect. I wish there wasn't a male protagonist.

The author writes very well! ! Ever since I read this book, I have fallen in love with the dark heroine! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] (One more small request, please update more [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss])

Awesome. This is the heroine I have always dreamed of. Exactly the same. Author I support you. Send an encouragement.

The heroine is strong and cold-blooded, very beautiful😍. I hope the author will not stop updating. I really like the character of the heroine.

I love it, I love it. The character of the heroine is to my liking. Good cheers for the author! This is no cp, right?

The core of tragedy wrapped in the Mary Sue skin is very uncomfortable at first glance. When reading it as a cool novel, as a movie party, I feel that some of the plots are quite OOC. As I read, I got better and better. The author has laid out the gray lines perfectly, and it is not easy to fill in all the holes. Although it is a bit stiff in part, it is even better. It cannot be said that the flaws are not overshadowed. It should be a sincere work poured out with hard work. The character and behavior of the protagonist are my favorite. The whole text is a great reading experience. Because I am an omnivore, I can actually accept both endings. I personally prefer the first one because I always expect such an ambitious and talented person. Every woman can reach the pinnacle of power, and I really dare to write this article. The protagonist is not even the third generation Dark Lord of the wizarding world, but the uncrowned master of the world. But I have to say that I watched the second ending very painfully. I was terrified all the way, watching the heroine with such absolute confidence and pride being shattered inch by inch. , Standing on the opposite side of everyone, being constantly teased, challenged, tested and betrayed, and even "betrayed" by the only person she trusted, one after another, as if there was a hand of fate pushing her almost forcefully towards this impossible "perfect" ending, completing the correction of the plot, and finally giving up her ambitious plan. In fact, it was hinted between the lines from the beginning that she was doomed to fail, and there were too many twists and turns. I was always worried that the protagonist I admired would turn into a ridiculous direction due to reasons such as "evil does not prevail over good". From a visual point of view, I did feel that she had been toyed with, but fortunately the author was not that cruel, and the ending was quite gentle. Perhaps the second chapter from the protagonist's perspective is her salvation. For geniuses, achieving fame and power is just something that is easily available. It is only the readers who project their own tendencies that cannot accept it. The readers' shortcomings are precisely the "completeness" of the protagonist who makes up for his own missing parts. It is a very good fanfic, and it is also a unique story based on HP. I would like to add that there are a lot of self-definition, which the research party should not be able to see, but the neutral evil ecstasy (?

This heroine is amazing! ! ! I hope there is no CP (if you don't like it, don't spray it)

How to say it? I felt pretty good at the beginning, the suspense was well set up, and the plot developed relatively smoothly in the end. But in the middle part, the protagonist completely gains immortality. What about the plot after that? It's a bit stretched, trying to create a full-bodied image of multiple characters, but it's not done very well. However, the image creation of the protagonist and the handling of the ending are very good, and the plot setting is indeed very good.

It's really great. The plot is not procrastinating, it is neat and tidy, and the heroine is exactly what I imagined, she is really amazing👍I like it very much😍😍

The content before the ending was very good and I enjoyed reading it very much. However, the ending made me a little nauseous and made me feel depressed. But overall it is a very good book. But the author finally wrote three endings, which at least didn't make me feel so uncomfortable.

I love the heroine so much, but I love the author even more [shy][shy]

Although I have only read a few chapters, but! This extremely bad feeling is so wonderful!

The author writes very well. Such an evil and powerful heroine. This kind of character is really rare, but she is also very lovable, so five stars Many people are scolding Edith, but I think she is the most real and magical person in the whole story. Secondly, I have a crush on Lettice and Mirabella. In the end, although the ending is more satisfying, I hope that my king will be happier instead of being lonely and strong.

I like the character of the heroine very much, and I have highlighted the character of the heroine in the past, but then I found that there are some things behind the heroine that are inconsistent with the character. The heroine is a paranoid, arrogant and conceited character. This is what I thought at the beginning and I like it very much, but in the later period, there are some things that are really strange. Fu, in the later stage, some madness was added, and some people looked at geniuses. The heroine has a conceited character, but this is not highlighted very well. The writing is okay. Overall, I like it very much. The main reason is that the setting is very good and the character is also very popular. Is there some conflict with the prominent character in the later stage? I don't know how to describe it, but there are some settings that the author can still change, and some places can be used without the original description. I think this is more in line with the setting of the book and the character of the heroine. I feel that the biggest highlight of this book is the character of the heroine, and the heroine's usual posture. First of all, the heroine is from a noble family, and she should be more elegant as a pure blood. Of course, she should not lack the characteristic of arrogance. They do not conflict in themselves. Come on, author! ! ! After thinking about it for a while, I came back. Can the author stop letting the heroine hang around the protagonist?

I like the character of the heroine very much, she is very domineering, and she is very powerful. The various characters and plots are very interesting. That's right, author, your perspective switching makes me dizzy. Sometimes I really can't tell which person you are describing psychologically, and it's very painful. I never knew why it was sometimes said that multiple perspective exchanges can make people dizzy. Ever since I read your book. Later, I understood why I felt dizzy, because sometimes I really have to sort out who is who and which is which. If I read too fast and skip some important things, it will feel a bit strange and difficult to follow, and I may even think that the heroine is OOC.

I stayed up late to finish it. It's really great. It's the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever seen. The plot is very attractive to me. The most important thing is that the character setting is so perfect. There was a section in the middle where I thought the protagonist was going to give up evil and become good, alas, but I don't know why the rating was so low. In short, I give five stars to the author, you are the best, come on [love] [love] [love] Also, I regard the friendship between the heroines as a lily, it is a bit sweet.

I have never seen a heroine with this kind of setting before. It is super enjoyable and worth the money! ! !

This is the best HP fanfic I've seen so far! Whether it is Mirabell Beresford's image of the mad queen or Edith Renager's image of the redeemer, they both left a deep impression on me after reading the book. Almost every character is very full and has its own distinctive characteristics. What impressed me most about the last two books was the white-haired dumplings that loved to eat and the elegant Cassandra. Really great

It's really beautiful. The heroine is a typical Slytherin, but there is no male protagonist, which makes it feel less interesting. In fact, I think the heroine can have some male followers. Also, the heroine's personality... Friend seems like a foreshadowing. She shouldn't change the heroine in the future, right?

Ahhhhhhhhh I really love my sister Mi! ! It satisfies all my needs for female HP fan fiction. Will the author seriously consider writing another similar book? I promise not to miss a chapter [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

I originally wanted to give it 4.5 Points, but unfortunately I didn't have half a point, so unfortunately I could only give it four points. Advantages: 1. The plot is well connected. 2. The characters, especially the protagonist Mirabell, are successfully created. 3. The hidden line of writing is a perfect closed loop. 4. It is commendable that I have not been influenced by time travel, systems, etc. And have fallen into a cliche. Flaws: 1. It tells a good story, but it only tells a good story. It does not elevate the core of the book to the spiritual and philosophical level. This is largely due to the character image of the protagonist. (Although the protagonist is indeed very successful) 2. Ending. (Specifically referring to the part where Harry and Edith stop the protagonist) It seems that using time to rewind to achieve a closed loop is eye-catching, but if you think about it carefully, it is not so amazing. Mainly because there are similar plots in the original work. Overall review: One of the best fanfics I've seen on Tomato so far

A perfect book, the pinnacle of the Harry Potter genre of online novels. Flawless.

Not bad, I can't help but have an opinion about Edith. Compared to the two endings, I prefer the first one, but everyone's opinion is different. This book is still worth reading [like] [blowing kiss] I entered it because it didn't require redemption, but both endings are not very good, but everyone's opinion is different, and I feel sorry for the heroine.

I like how the heroine is powerful, noble, and cruel. I hope the author will not stop updating and finish the book. Come on [like][like][like]

It's rare to see such a charming and confident heroine, and her writing skills are also very good, so... Da baa baa

The protagonist was forced by her "relatives" to learn the so-called aristocratic etiquette since childhood, but the tragic fate of two consecutive lives made her character distorted. She wanted to fundamentally change this decadent magical world, so she used the magic stone and the blood of her close relatives to transform into an immortal and perfect vampire to complete her plan. She just came to the academy to be sorted and transformed into a vampire. One is sassy, the other is crazy. These are definitely the two most exciting parts of this book. Although the appearance is strong, it can never hide the emptiness and loneliness inside. It makes me feel a little sad when I look at it (つд⊂)

This book is the only "dark" novel I have ever read; it is also one of the few novels I have ever read in its entirety. Although she symbolizes friendship and redemption to me, and also has the impact of other people's wrong judgment, it is undeniable that this is an excellent novel - for me. But I still feel a little uncomfortable in my heart. This ending is not what I thought - just for me.

Nice! The protagonist is very strong, not silly and sweet, not a virgin, cold and selfish, extremely arrogant, but has the strength to match the pride, and there is no male protagonist. The plot is very smooth and perfectly hits all my favorite points! [Understood]

Well, that's it. The writing was okay, and the heroine was well-characterized. There may be some shortcomings that I didn't see, but I saw the good side. I don't think the ending is ideal. Is it a good ending? Maybe it's good for the people inside, but actually it's not what he wants most for the heroine.