Two-dimensional comprehensive comics, slow pace, protagonist growth, Cthulhu, non-invincible articles, only available behind the chat group.
Lin Feng was an ordinary person who could no longer be ordinary, until one day he was selected by the system and forced to time travel. In this way, Lin Feng embarked on the road to find his way home. During this period, Lin Feng saved one world after another, but he himself did not care and only wanted to go home.
This book is updated based on interest, and is updated from time to time (during internship). The author's writing is not good, so please forgive me if there are any shortcomings in the writing, thank you.
Thank you to every reader here.
Reader comments
Following the plot line is a very safe way, for readers who have never read Chunwu, but I personally think that adding some of your own thoughts and creativity can give people a brighter feeling. When writing, it is also recommended to write in paragraphs such as "language + action + psychology", which can better shape the character and make the character come alive, and also give readers a sense of the picture. If it is just the whole dialogue, it will be very tiring to read and you will not know who is talking to whom. The above is my humble opinion.
It's good to watch. I want to see The King of Dead Hair.
To be honest, this novel is very well written. Well, it's a bit boring and a bit too routine! Cough... But there are still some small details that haven't been sorted out. For example, when I arrived at the location, it was not very clear, and it looked a bit messy when I read it. Well, then there were no other problems for the time being, cough... If I see other problems later, I will revise the review again.
Except for the writing style and frequency of updates that need to be improved, the content is quite in line with my taste. Come on, old man.
The writing is very good. If there is room for improvement, it would be the dialogue between the characters. Sometimes I am not sure who is speaking.
Very nice. Come on.
What is the next world? Let's write about the main world.
Oh yeah, knives, I love knives the most
I just want to ask if the hole will be backfilled later? [What]
Well written. The author has more knives.
Currently I am very optimistic about this book and hope it can be serialized. Come on
Five stars five stars okay
Yes, but don't add so many time-travelers to the manga. If you want to add them, it's best to add them in a magical world.
Why, why [cry] [cry] [cry] My sister, can't you be better [cry] [cry] [cry]
We at IKUN are all people with lychees and branches, so we must give five-star praise [love] [love]
Very good, the best manga I have ever read so far
It must be five stars, okay?
I like it very much, keep writing
Knife, I want a knife
A very good book
Reading this novel requires concentration. Otherwise, you can't see clearly who is talking.
Sorry, I still can't understand it after reading it for a long time. My head hurts. Goodbye.
Updates are too slow (=TェT=)
You can wait a few years and see
Following the plot line is a very safe way, for readers who have never read Chunwu, but I personally think that adding some of your own thoughts and creativity can give people a brighter feeling. When writing, it is also recommended to write in paragraphs such as "language + action + psychology", which can better shape the character and make the character come alive, and also give readers a sense of the picture. If it is just the whole dialogue, it will be very tiring to read and you will not know who is talking to whom. The above is my humble opinion.
It's good to watch. I want to see The King of Dead Hair.
To be honest, this novel is very well written. Well, it's a bit boring and a bit too routine! Cough... But there are still some small details that haven't been sorted out. For example, when I arrived at the location, it was not very clear, and it looked a bit messy when I read it. Well, then there were no other problems for the time being, cough... If I see other problems later, I will revise the review again.
Except for the writing style and frequency of updates that need to be improved, the content is quite in line with my taste. Come on, old man.
The writing is very good. If there is room for improvement, it would be the dialogue between the characters. Sometimes I am not sure who is speaking.
Very nice. Come on.
What is the next world? Let's write about the main world.
Oh yeah, knives, I love knives the most
I just want to ask if the hole will be backfilled later? [What]
Well written. The author has more knives.
Currently I am very optimistic about this book and hope it can be serialized. Come on
Five stars five stars okay
Yes, but don't add so many time-travelers to the manga. If you want to add them, it's best to add them in a magical world.
Why, why [cry] [cry] [cry] My sister, can't you be better [cry] [cry] [cry]
We at IKUN are all people with lychees and branches, so we must give five-star praise [love] [love]
Very good, the best manga I have ever read so far
It must be five stars, okay?
I like it very much, keep writing
Knife, I want a knife
A very good book
Reading this novel requires concentration. Otherwise, you can't see clearly who is talking. Sorry, I still can't understand it after reading it for a long time. My head hurts. Goodbye.
Updates are too slow (=TェT=) You can wait a few years and see