I Am Daiyu's Biological Sister in the Red Mansion

I support it with five stars, but I hope that the subsequent prince will be able to match Qingyu and Daiyu as soon as possible, and the plot will not be too bloody.

This prince is a bit bland as the male protagonist, and I feel that he is more suitable for an affectionate male supporting character who can only get what he wants. In fact, his character is quite good with Sister Lin. He is a warm man, more suitable for flowers before the moon, but with Sister Lin, I always feel that there is something wrong.

I hope we can get Jia Baoyu away quickly [laughing and crying]

I finished reading this book by the author Dada two days ago. After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to write my first long review in my life. I just wanted to express my feelings. Mr. Lu Xun once said that different people see the Dream of Red Mansions from different angles: "The intellectuals see the romance, the revolutionaries see the queues, and the commentators see the secrets of the palace." Cao Gong only wrote the first 80 chapters. The latter chapters are generally considered to be Gao E's continuation, but there are already a lot of foreshadowings in the first 80 chapters. When I love a work to the point where I can't stand it anymore, I will do two things: 1. Dig deeper into the details buried behind the story; 2. Check out its fans. I have read a lot of Red Mansions fanfics, some imitating the style of writing and tone after carefully reading the original text, some more modern and straightforward; some using their own perspective, and some changing it beyond recognition. This one by the author is the only one of the three Red Mansions fanfics I have read that adheres to the original work to the greatest extent. What I mean here is that it fits the original work to the greatest extent possible, which means it conforms to the character settings in the original work. Personally, I think that when writing a fanfic for a literary work like Dream of Red Mansions, it doesn't mean that you have to stick to the context of the original work, but at least you shouldn't distort the facts and denigrate the characters. I have seen some fans describe Baochai in a very unsavory manner, or say that Xiren used eye drops in front of Mrs. Wang, or that Zijuan wants to be an aunt. It is not good or bad, because there are many people who are hooked after reading it, but this is for those who have never read the original Dream of Red Mansions. For those who are fans of the book, this is actually a kind of "misleading", or if they have only read it briefly, they will have some bad impressions of some characters in the book. After reading these fans, the disgust will only be further deepened, but the settings and many foreshadowings in the original work are ignored. Take Jia Baoyu as an example: Some scholars believe that jade is "desire". Shenying's waiter went down to earth and the psychic jade went to the world of mortals to experience wealth. The two together became the mortal body of Jia Baoyu. One wanted to experience the ups and downs in the world of mortals, and the other wanted to experience joys and sorrows. If we infer based on this, then Jia Baoyu is a "fake" jade, that is, a stone that just looks like jade, and finally returns to its true nature and becomes the stone under Qinggeng Peak. After knowing this, let's read the author's plot development and ending settings for Jia Baoyu in the article. As that 'butterfly', Qingyu took good care of Daiyu, and the pearl-dropping grass did not return her tears. Baoyu's desire to fade away slowed down, but his essence did not change. He was still a worldly person who was only interested in profit and fame. In the end, the mansion was about to fall to the palace. After witnessing a series of tragedies in the Jia family, he finally became a monk. This main line of Dream of Red Mansions has been retained by the author Da Da. This is the only fanfic I have read so far. Besides, those who said that Baochai was scheming didn't know how to tell. Xue Baochai can be said to be a model of Confucianism. Her acceptance of Confucian morality also implies that she suppresses her private emotions. She is very considerate and good at observation. There is a very important eyebrow comment in the eighth chapter of the Jiaxu version: According to the police fantasy love list, Baoyu is in love but not in love; the nineteenth chapter in the Gengchen version has a comment in it: Baoyu is in love but not in emotion, and Daiyu is in love. This means that Baoyu will show affection even to those who are merciless to her, while Daiyu will only show affection to those who are affectionate to her. Let's look at Baochai's "ruthless", it's very clear, so in Cao Xueqin's mind, Xue Baochai is "the crystal clear snow of the master in the mountains", a restrained and forbearing person who is like covering the earth with ice and snow. How could he be a villain like Aunt Zhao, who is playful and petty and uses insidious means to frame others? There are also many characters and many plots that have been misinterpreted and distorted by some fans, misleading readers who have not seen it or who have not yet understood the background story of Dream of Red Mansions and the connotations of its characters. It is really a pity. On the basis of adding "Lin Qingyu" to this fanfic, the author is very rare to see that there is still a fanfic that can retain most of the character settings in the original work. It's not just because we are the same person, so we should play it out; we are the same person anyway, so we should forget about feudal etiquette and just write according to modern etiquette; we are the same person anyway, so the men and women meet and chat to increase their feelings and hold hands, and the audience likes to watch it; anyway, they are the same person, the ladies and ladies can yell and then the heroine will retaliate; anyway, they are the same person, the heroine goes to the street alone, then changes her clothes and wanders around in the street. I have seen all of the above in many Dream of Red Mansions fans, but this book by the author Dada is completely absent. Here I want to shout: "Finally someone has the brains to write an article——!!!" The tragic fate of most of the girls in The Twelve Beauties of Jinling was rewritten, and they were able to spend their lives in peace. Okay~ I typed this long article for two hours and deleted, deleted, and revised it for a long time. I originally wanted to talk more about the Daughters of the Red Mansion, such as Xiren, Zijuan, Qingwen, Wang Xifeng, etc. Although they are not all top-notch good people, they all have both good and evil sides and cannot be generalized. But if I write Baoyu Baochai before writing it, it will become a thesis, haha. I write so much because I feel uncomfortable and unfair about the excessive misinterpretation of these girls in some Red Mansions fan fiction, and I feel a sincere peace of mind and touch after reading this book. It really retains many of the hidden rules of feudal etiquette, character settings, and ways of speaking, without making arbitrary changes like "Oh, that's how I feel" or "Oh, just thank you according to modern etiquette." Fans will definitely change, but at least don't slander them for nothing, and this is "Dream of Red Mansions", one of the four great classics and a literary masterpiece! Will it really make you feel uneasy if you change this way? ? When I see some people saying that Zijuan just wants to be an aunt, and they carelessly mark the paragraphs, I really ask you not to mislead people anymore. I really can't hold the board in Mr. Cao's coffin! ! ! Finally, I would like to thank the author greatly! Thank you for insisting on updating to end this long article, and thank you for not substituting some modern bloody plot into the article. I also want to apologize for typing a lot of words because no one may want to read them, but it's just a quick rant. But finally, finally, when the article reaches dozens of chapters later, you are probably worried because there are so many typos and plot errors [face covering] Little suggestion: Change it.

Everything is okay, but the joke about mistaken identity is not good. I think it is unnecessary. Qingyu and Daiyu have a very good relationship, so why add this joke? What's the purpose? , If possible, I would like to return to our respective places as soon as possible [send heart]

This book is not bad. It fulfills Lin Daiyu's dream of having parents, brothers and sisters. There are no more three hundred and sixty days a year, when wind, sword, frost and swords force each other to fight each other. Mrs. Jia's mother and queen doted on Baoyu too much, doting on her son is like killing her son!

The story is okay, that's why a random man was assigned to Lin Daiyu, and a prince was assigned to herself. The key is that the male protagonist fell in love without even meeting her. If the beautiful and talented female protagonist is not as good as her sister, then why does it have to be herself and not Lin Daiyu?

It's not bad, and it is consistent with the original work. I just didn't see the ending of Tanchun. Describe the decline of the Jia family in more detail. Jia Baoyu is the ceiling of Ma Baonan. He has neither ability nor responsibility. Whoever marries him will be unlucky.

It would be best if Jia Baoyu is disgusted by Lin Daiyu, and then Shui Ling teaches him a lesson for his frivolous behavior.

Shui Ling x Lin Qingyu ah ah ah sweet to death

If Qingyu enters the palace and becomes the emperor's sister-in-law, and her mother is honored by the world, what will happen if the prince knows the truth?

It's a good read. I hope the plot isn't too bloody. If you want to read a sweet pet story, the author will update it soon.

You're nervous, you won't wait until you get married to find out you admitted the wrong person, right?

It looks good, but when will the prince realize that he got the wrong person?

Can the author write more, it's not enough [I'm about to cry] Now I just pinch it and read it [crying]

I have read a few books in the Red Mansions series, and there are some good ones that can satisfy readers' wishes. This one is good. The fate of Twelve Hairpins has been changed, and those who are arrogant and unrepentant are punished. Baoyu still ends up being a monk. This is good, and it represents the gathering and separation of the world. In addition, the plot is compact and interlocking, and the characters are clearly developed, making it a smooth read that will keep you reading until the end.

No matter what, the sisters have a happy ending

Didn't the heroine give birth to twins, a boy and a girl? How come the twins later turned out to be boys? [What]

It's so beautiful. It's worth waiting for for a long time.

It looks good, but it's a pity that there is no extra story, and the heroine's space always feels useless, and there is a lot of redundancy╮(╯＿╰)╭

Everything that should be regretted has changed! Sisters should live their lives happily!

When will Lin Daiyu get married? I've been waiting for a long time. Author, please hurry up.

The ending is the biggest confidence I have in reading this book. I don't have to worry about it and it will be gone after reading it. I want to see Qingyu's happy little life, and I also want to see Daiyu's married life [full] [full] [full]

If you feel it's okay, don't listen to those people's nonsense, because there are many things they got wrong, and if I read it so far, it's already finished, and the rating is okay. If you really have nothing to read, then read this one [laughing] [laughing]

I hope the male protagonist will find out it's the female protagonist soon

It's okay. In daily life, the male and female protagonists trust each other. Even if they admit they are the wrong person before getting married, they still have to get married before telling the truth.

Are they twins, a boy and a girl, or two sons? Ps. Meeting Jia Baoyu was really Daiyu's bad luck!

It seems that I forgot about the plug-in at the end of writing this book. The plug-in has not been developed at all.

It was said earlier that they had twins, a boy and a girl, but later it turned out to be two boys?

I am looking forward to the follow-up of the book. Good luck, author!