Living Forever for Hundreds of Millions of Years, I Survived Ten Heavenly Days

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word per second, which is 3,600 words per hour. In a 24-hour day, you sleep for 8 hours, eat, wash for an hour, and conceive for an hour. With 14 hours left, you can code 46,800 words, 2,000 words for one chapter, or more than 240 chapters. I don't ask you to do more, just write 20 chapters.

The three recent books on immortality and immortality are all quite good. At first I thought they were just average results, but after reading them I found that they are quite well written. Good luck to the author.

For a person who is obsessed with watching Immortal being stabbed, it is satisfying to have such a film that is both Immortal and a bit funny, although it is not particularly good [laughs evilly].

Although it is not ideal, this kind of life was also the life I longed for. The protagonist may be a little unsatisfactory and a little indecisive, but isn't that how people are? All I can say is, keep up the good work!

I'm curious why this novel has such a low rating [Chigua] I know now. . . . . . .

It is the least boring book among Gou's books. The foundation is solid. Come on author. I hope you can make it to the last billions of years

It's very pretty, but the intelligence of pig's feet is a bit low, please add more intelligence.

It is recommended that the author writes about the big world later. For example, the world of immortality they live in now is only a big world of one plane. There are at least three thousand planes of big world. The big world of any plane can ascend. The big worlds of other planes are different in strength and weakness. There is a super big world with sufficient aura and hundreds of thousands of immortal cultivators. There are cracks in the first-class big world plane. Strong men invade and the war begins. There are also fairy worlds that have ascended to the upper world. They use special means to come down and one or two people are looking for a certain treasure to make enemies with the protagonist.

Overall it's pretty good, keep up the good work.

Although it is not very good and even a bit hydrological, I want to encourage the author to keep up the good work. I haven't read any immortality articles either [laughing]

Not bad, not bad. It's my type. Not brainless.

It feels pretty good. Most books are much better. When I almost can't stand listening to books anymore, this book will always use various plots to retain me. The only good thing is that this book seems to be written by two authors. For example, at the beginning of a chapter, it is written that a person has just broken through the Nascent Soul, and then in the same chapter, it is written that the same person has achieved the Great Perfection of Alchemy. As for this problem, everything else is fine. It won't give you the feeling of an invincible and enjoyable article. No matter how many chapters you read, it's better to read a few chapters. After all, this is just a suggestion from me. Please make your own choice (˵¯͒¯͒˵) Now I retract my previous evaluation. The plot of the Abyss Crack feels like a world where martial arts are based on the rules of the world of immortality. The plot is not as good as it was at the beginning. It's not that it's not well written, but it's just more dragging than before. I also found out later. The author seems to have some misunderstanding about the two words "Goudao"? I've seen a lot about this book, so I won't comment too much on it. If it hadn't made me feel so good at the beginning, I wouldn't have even bothered to leave a negative review. (ꐦÒ‸Ó)

I thought it was a ruthless road to immortality, but I didn't expect it to have a happy ending.

The previous writing was not good, but I feel like the author has changed later. Although the intelligence has always been 13, I feel that the IQ has returned. I wrote 150 chapters for the finals of a competition and haven't finished it yet, but overall it's pretty good. Suitable for book shortage [laughs awkwardly]

Personally, I think the overall story is a great one. Although the character design is a stubborn one, the protagonist is actually very strong. I think the setting of the turtle shell is a clever design, which is more reflected in wisdom rather than recklessness. Although the Three Thousand Realms ended a little hastily in the later period, the overall feeling is still very good. It is a relatively novel longevity novel.

Everyone has different opinions, but I personally prefer this book. Generally speaking, this fairy-tale work is quite good, but there are some flaws. Some chapters are confusing in logical thinking, and some places are not connected. I hope the author will pay attention to this and try to avoid such mistakes in the future. What is worthy of praise is that the description of the characters is in place, the rich psychological activities, and the drawings of the characters For example, it is relatively clear. It is described through personality, work style, experience, etc., And it is a well-founded inference about the world of Xianxia. The male protagonist is very classic and fits the theme. In short, it is just a word Gou. This Gou is very unique. It is not like the stereotype of being introduced in a few sentences, such as being invincible for how many years in seclusion. Instead, the progress of the story is inferred through the occurrence of each plot. What I'm worried about right now is that the scope of the story is extremely large, and the title of the book is majestic and majestic - Ten Heavenly Paths. According to the cultivation system, it will be more difficult to write later. I am particularly worried that it will be unfinished because of the large scope. It is rare to find a good fairy novel. I hope the author can persevere and not forget his original intention to conceive this novel. Come on author, don't let us down.

I have read Chapter 431 of this book, and I think I personally should have a better say! Changsheng Wen has lived with Widow Zhao for many years. It's a pity that Widow Zhao has been waiting for him for more than 100 years. In another twenty or thirty years, only the grave will be left after he returns! The foundation of this longevity novel is relatively solid, and there is a heroine, but why are they related to the heroine? It's been hundreds of years, but they don't have any children! Overall, this book is solid! Starting with a golden body, it was upgraded to a golden bell, and widows surrounded the protagonist. Unexpectedly, she was so loyal, and it was not known whether Widow Zhao had any descendants in the end. It was never explained in the play. ? There may or may not be one! Compared with some other full stops, this is the same as the farming novel, but not so tense. Generally, the novel has almost become a fairy after 400 chapters. The pace is very tight. In this case, the pace is very slow. All the plots are reasonable and have some humor.

Beautiful women always attract attention, but men prefer ordinary and attractive women to be their wives.

This is an immortal novel, not a Gouwen novel. It has a lot of pressing issues. The protagonist has an average personality. Compared with the protagonists of other immortality novels, he almost has an "immortality mentality". However, the protagonist is very powerful. Even if he is not a Gouwen novel, he can still read it as a horizontal tweet

The writing is smooth, the general framework has not changed, the protagonist's adventures in the growth process and the design of the companions under the influence of the protagonist's halo are also reasonable. Mystery and illusion are revealed in the mysterious and mysterious world. When we look up at the starry sky or meditate, the spiritual world has wandered across different dimensions. After dreaming for several lives, we realize that everything is empty when we wake up. The only thing that remains unchanged is the powerful soul, and life and death are just changes in the carrier.

I stopped reading 70% of the time. The book is a good book, and the subject of immortality is not bad. In fact, at first I felt that the slowly getting up + system (very special and novel) was very good. But then when the traditional Buddha, demons, gods and gods came in, I felt that it was not my personal favorite (because I read too much). I felt that it would become a traditional prehistoric book later on. However, the author is very attentive and I must give it a thumbs up. I hope to write more and more exciting books.

The author probably forgot about the female sect leader [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Does good-looking mean good-looking and longevity? It doesn't matter at all

Oh My God! , This is so pretty, ah haha, [snickering] I laughed to death, it was so pretty, it made the demon live to death when he was sleeping [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [cool] [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] [like] [laughing] [laughing] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like] [like],

"With such a long life, shouldn't you find a Taoist partner that you like and enjoy life together?"

I like this book very much. I like this genre very much. The protagonist has a piece of equipment that can be upgraded all the time. It feels like he is collecting something. The golden body magic circle is constantly being upgraded. Anyway, I like it very much. It has this very exquisite feeling. I can't put it into words. I just like this kind of gadget that can be continuously upgraded.

Not bad! The reason why I didn't give it a higher rating was mainly because I felt that the article wasn't on point. In my opinion, the male protagonist has always been unscrupulous, and he does many things "if he can make money." In that trial place, after the sect with "Dragon Teeth" was attacked by Kunlun, one person ran away; after Kunlun's senior brother died, the second senior brother seemed to run away with the money. These two people were never mentioned again. It feels like the author either forgot about it or changed his original thinking. Also, the style of the front and the back are different. I wonder if it was affected by the comments in the comment area!

I quite like it, I personally think it looks great. I really don't understand why so many people in the comment area say that the protagonist's IQ is not good. Anyway, I don't think it's a big problem. I forgot some things. This is reasonable. Of course, it may be that my own IQ is a bit lacking.

It is recommended that the title of the book be changed to "I will live forever for billions of years, and I will eat all over the heavens and all the worlds."

In fact, I felt a bit sorry to be in that village.