LW31 Murder Case

How can I put it this way? I rarely read this kind of short story, but after reading it, I found it surprisingly good-looking. The plot is very simple, and it revolves around a robot taking the blame for a beloved woman. It's quite interesting.

Not bad, the writing is smooth and the words are short and concise. Some content needs to be added and improved, such as A Luo's expressions, inner activities and subtle movements. "I" have developed a liking for A Luo's body and temperament. A Luo behaves differently when she is with her boyfriend than when she is at her employer's house. It's easy to say, but you may lack vocabulary when writing. Writing is something that requires constant practice. Read more, listen more, and learn more. I don't mean to blame the author, I express it objectively [blowing kiss] I hope you will get better and better, I hope your masterpiece will sell well, give me five stars to encourage you🤗

Ah Que's imagination is so rich! Moreover, the description of A Luo in the book is also very vivid, "Her back became hazy, like a fish swimming downward in the deep sea", which immediately revealed her mystery and beauty. I think this book is worth reading and I highly recommend it!