The Wind of the Super God Universe

The outline of the story is okay, but it is not detailed enough, and the emotional expression is not perfect. It is like eating noodles with only salt. Read more and learn more. As an online writer, you have imagination and talent. What you lack is the foundation and the sinking of time. As long as you persevere and survive the thorns on this road, you will definitely succeed and become a big shot in the online literary world. You will have tens of millions of fans and a successful person who can achieve financial freedom just by giving rewards. Come on, I'll pay you back. I believe you will succeed on this road. If you don't go through ups and downs, you won't see a rainbow. If you persist, you will definitely succeed! ! !

Is there really no one watching?

Great, we've been looking for this kind of thing for a long time, but it's a pity that there are so few

The ingredients are complex, and it feels like eating compressed biscuits. It has no taste, but it has everything.

Overall, it's very good. The author will let the protagonist wear a few more vests, so it will be perfect.

I can't bear this poison alone. Who can compete with the Eight Demonic Qi in the early stage? The ability of the Eight Demonic Qi is completely fine in the early stage. I don't want to eat beef. If Deno No. 3 Dares to say one more word, he will be demolished. As a result, everyone can shit on the protagonist's head.

The quality of this book is very good, I like it very much.

Five-star praise, I was a little angry at first, but if I think about it, there is no need to lick the protagonist group. It's not that I don't have plug-ins. However, I also hope that the protagonist can intervene and strengthen the Black Shadow Corps. Since there is a plug-in library and Tara's spell collection, there is no reason for the shadow ninja to be so weak, and there are differences in different systems. I hope the author will continue to maintain the writing style to strengthen the protagonist, connect the Alliance Super God Universe, and add the Eight Demons from Jackie Chan's Adventures. Come on, author!

I don't know why this rating has gone down so much. This book combines the Alliance of Super Gods and Demonic Qi to open up the world of Super Gods from a fantasy perspective. The protagonist gradually becomes the Lord of the Abyss from an ordinary person with a little cleverness. The plot is modified based on the original text. It is worth reading.

I don't know why the rating is so low. I think it's still very good. It's very thoughtful. Nowadays, when super god fans generally write mindless harem novels, I think it's good to have a book like this. If you don't want to read it, just cross it. Don't maliciously lower the score.

The idea is good, but the operation is a bit problematic. There are too many branches and confusing timelines that make me feel like I'm watching a game rather than a novel. All I can say is work hard. To put it nicely, you can create better works with time. To put it bluntly, you still need to practice.

It is indeed much better than that kind of harem novel. It has more brains and imagination than cool novels.

Well, it is more consistent with the original work. It has its own unique understanding of this super seminary and its imagination is very big. It is a book worth reading. I hope the author can continue to maintain this quality.

I saw Chapter 356. The author's settings include "The Adventures of Jackie Chan" and probably League of Legends (because I'm really not familiar with it, but there are characters like Zed and Wandering Mage in it), and basically write it on the premise that everyone already knows what it is, so it's not very friendly to readers like me who don't know much about these two aspects. I haven't seen the heroine yet, and I probably won't. I hope the author can add some introductions when writing about these skills or characters. Otherwise, what are the functions of the rat, dragon, and runes, the magic energy of the mountain, the magic energy of the sky, and some personal names, Bard? Something like that, I just saw it in a foggy way I can give 4 stars purely to readers who have read these two works. Other readers, well... You can probably read it as much as I did, otherwise it would be a bit difficult to read it. After all, I haven't found many amazing books with more than a million words.

A super god's world view, and then added many things that are not within the scope of the main line to this world view. According to the author, it means League of Legends? The outline of the story is good, but the author's writing style needs some refinement. I feel that the appearance of the characters is a bit abrupt, the changes in the scenes are a bit abrupt, and the descriptions of scenes, scenes, wars, etc. Are a bit sloppy. May the author improve himself and create brilliance.

I think this should be the best Super Seminary fanfic. If you want to read harem stories or invincible stories, please move on and don't maliciously write bad reviews.

This book is not only different from the original work, but also has its own innovations. Oh my, if you think what I said is not good, then you can take a look at it. A good book is not something other people say it is. Only when you read it yourself will you know (the rest is for the author to update quickly. If it is not enough, it is simply not enough)

Or have you never understood the background story of Super God? The origin of Super Seminary is La La La Demacia, and the idea of adapting this drama comes from the background story of League of Legends, although there is no plot about the void in Super Seminary yet. But it can be seen from the plot about the void in League of Legends that the void is not about a certain force or person, but an alien space full of malice! There are countless evil creatures among them! Moreover, the void is very contagious. No matter how determined a warrior is, he may be infected by the void and turn into a monster who only knows how to kill. People who play League of Legends should know that the background story of Sword Demon is related to the void. The big bugs in League of Legends are the indigenous creatures of the void world. They have the ability to devour infinitely, become stronger and grow infinitely!

Very good. Don't update the eunuch all the time. I think you can survive if you write a million words. Then you can write something more interesting, such as the alliance and the supermarket integration or something.

If it were me, I would just use the magic weapon of the Yatsudai Demon to form a magic corridor. He has discovered that the eight demons are the origin of the world, so he can directly do this, and he can join the Eight Immortals Bagua team that is Captain Bart.

Not bad (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡! Who are the heroines? Are there any roses?

It's still very nice, I don't know why the rating is so low

The writing is beautiful, and it also has its own thoughts. I like it, like it, like it, like it. That is, I just watched Jackie Chan's Adventures, several Super Seminary movies, and the League of Legends universe. His ingredients are a bit complicated.

From the current point of view, the writing is very good, but there are a lot of holes dug, and the improvement in strength is too slow.

Personally, I think the writing is okay, not the kind of mindless cool writing.

It's pretty good, much better than a system that has no brain upgrades. What some people read is that there is less written, so please write more.

It's a great super seminary fan novel written from my personal perspective. I've read countless fan novels, and the more I read them, the more boring they become. The protagonist and world view of this book gave me a different experience. It's a pity that the author should be busy with life, otherwise I'm looking forward to the next one.

Seeing that your rating is a bit low, I think it's okay. I'll give it a five-star rating.

It's a very good self-pleasure article, but the cutting is too harsh and makes me feel a little uncomfortable.

Queshi is a relatively good supernatural novel, but it's just not very friendly to readers who don't play heroes.