Traveled to the World of Cultivation and Inherited the Mantle of the Ghost King

Can everyone leave me a comment? દ=๑๑( ੭ ε:)੭ु⁾⁾ It's so depressing that the comment area is empty (›´ω`‹) It's my first time posting. I struggled with this book over and over again and revised it many times before I came up with this version. I won't be able to write the next book! I have some experience! If you have any ideas, you can tell me in the comment area! I will actively improve! And I'm almost done with this book, so I can tell you about some of the settings. There are some settings I still want to talk about! The first is Ye Moli. I originally planned to expand on his life experience, but because it was too miserable, I couldn't bear it, so I covered it in a paragraph in Jiang Che's chapter. Next is Su Yaoxi. This person was originally set up to be with Ye Moli, because Ah Li didn't meet many good people except Xiao Che and Yun Duo, and was also persecuted by balabala. She thought that only Hanhan could redeem Guaiguai and have a platonic love! After thinking about it later, I decided to forget it and let Ah Li reincarnate. This life is too painful. It would be better to forget the past and start over again. So Yaoxi became a tool for the transitional plot. There are still many places that can be expanded, but because I have been rushing to delete them, some things have been cut off, so it became this version. Why delete it? Because it feels too cumbersome (personally) |ू･᷄ω･᷅)｡oO When I was writing the previous part, I really wanted to fast forward to the Jiang Che chapter. When I was writing the Jiang Che chapter, I was a little bit fast forwarding to the Bai Zhi chapter. I wrote it in a bit of a hurry and skipped a lot of things in one sentence. The author of How Can It Be Repaired! I originally wondered if this book could last to one hundred chapters! Very good! Not even eighty chapters... I will definitely write better in the new book! Thank you all for your company this month! I'm really touched. I don't know who it is. Before I recommended it, they gave me reminders every day. Seeing this reminder makes my heart feel warm. I wonder if you will see this! I am here to thank you alone! Of course, there are also those people who have been following me for updates. They have been following me for a long time since I updated. Thank you! Finally, I say goodbye to Shen Zhujun~ He is an ordinary person, very ordinary, and he got up through Jiang Che and chance, but I like him very much and am a little reluctant to leave him_(:зゝ∠)_ Thank you Shen Zhujun for accompanying me these six months. Thanks! Bye-Bye! There is another thing. The main character of this article is a double male protagonist. Deputy CP Bai Zhi Chu Liansheng, Chu Liansheng is a woman disguised as a man There is another one who is not very cp, Leng Yue Suzuli is male and female. It was my first time to write a book and I was a little excited, so I made a big fuss and planned to write about all kinds of genres. I just need a pair of lilies (miscalculation) But because I like to watch Danmei, the main CP is the two male protagonists [I learned it] [I learned it] That's it

The plot of the overall story is good, reasonable and self-justifying. I also feel that the memoirs interspersed in it help me understand the ins and outs of the plot more quickly. But there are too few sweet pets. There are not many psychological scenes between the two protagonists, and there is not much interaction later on when they express their feelings for each other. I can't get enough of it~

Yes, the author has made great progress. When I first read it, there were still many places where the interactions between the characters felt awkward and awkward, and I didn't handle them well. But as you look further back, this awkward feeling becomes less and less. You can feel that the author handles these scenes more and more naturally. He is making rapid progress, come on~(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

"Zhuang Zhou dreamed of a butterfly in his life, and I spent my life to survive a calamity."⭐️

Although I think half of it is made up by the author using other people's stories, I still like it very much

Is it over so soon? I haven't seen enough yet!

Love Junyun so much! Come on! Five-star praise!

I like it so much, especially the little fox

I love this book so much, I hope more people will read it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Except for the plot progressing a little too fast, the writing is pretty good, please give it a try

Very beautiful, I love Junyun so much [sending my heart]