Travel through the world of pirates, obtain the sacred tree system, plant the sacred tree at the beginning, and create an unprecedented ninja army!
Million White Zetsu VS Navy!
Ninja Army VS Ability User Army!
Akatsuki VS Shichibukai!
Time and Space Chakra Cannon VS Ancient Weapons!
The two gods of the ninja world VS the four emperors!
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Standing on the top of the Red Earth Continent, the super-large tailed beast jade with ten tails in full body was pointing directly at the holy land of Mariejoia. Behind him stood the shadows of the past ninja villages. Bai Luo looked at the gloomy faces of Im and Wulaoxing and grinned: "If you don't want to die, all squat down with your heads in your hands..."
Reader comments
It's not bad. It's a defective product that needs to be developed. Build a kingdom. Then it felt like the protagonist was so idle that his balls ached. Now that the country has been established, it's time to consider a harem. Don't go too many, just 3 or 5 will be enough. I really like the summoning text.
It's quite good. It's better looking than the Bleach book, and more interesting than the Quincy book.
Deduct 1 point for the main character's clown-like appearance and performance.
Another point will be deducted for the Substitution Jutsu that turns into Time and Space Ninjutsu. "Finally, it's the Substitution Jutsu."
Asuma's voice sounded, and he took out a shuriken from nowhere and threw it towards Lucci.
Call out!
The shuriken cut through the air and went straight to Lu Qi's eyebrows.
At the moment when it is about to hit.
"Bang!"
Lu Qi's figure turned into a burst of white smoke again, leaving only an ordinary wooden pile on the spot, but his true body appeared ten meters away like a ghost.
The whole process is extremely fast!
This can no longer be explained by the high-speed movement of "shaving"!
This is... Space displacement!
Armed color and knowledge color are somewhat similar to Yang Dun and Yin Dun [smile]
It's just too rough, not as delicate as Yin Yang Escape
Spread ninjutsu to the world government. Are you excited to write it or do you want to completely play ninjutsu in One Piece and increase the word count?
The protagonist's mentality is best to achieve his goal in a stable manner, rather than how interesting it is. That is the author's business.
Don't forget how Otsutsuki in front was planted in the ninja world.
You are the author, and if you manipulate the plot, no one can do anything about it.
Also, you only wrote about ninjas, but not one of the major ninja clans. The ninja clan doesn't seem to have any background.
As long as there was White Zetsu, Nagato would have been fine.
Overall it's pretty good, but the boss dies too hastily, with one move and the same treatment as the supporting characters. I feel like there should be a chapter about Joeyboy and Im playing around, and then be dropped in seconds. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
So pretty, so pretty
No poisonous spots have been found so far
Although it is not a particularly good article, it is not bad. Next time, there will be fewer modifiers and pauses, and it will be less ink. I will give it four stars.
There are very few updates on Tomato. Is the author planning to stop updating? [Thinking]
The writing is very integrated with the two worlds where there is a sense of oppression but there is no pressure, and I am already looking forward to the subsequent plot. I can't get enough [face covering] [OK]
It's too short, it feels like the system is a little too high
A pretty good novel
It's so good, I finished it in one go [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
Very interesting novel
This book still has a score of 8 or above
It was well written, but it was too short. I probably didn't want to write anymore, so I finished it quickly.
Nice, looks interesting
Isn't a small water prison technique a nightmare for Devil Fruit users?
All the previous movies have not been obtained [cover face][cover face][cover face]
Very cool, just a little bit lacking
It's okay. It ended too quickly. After beating the weak chicken and golden lion, it's almost over. I haven't even gone to the Grand Route. I just read and rewrite history in an infinite month.
Very nice, I like it very much
The plot and everything else are quite reasonable and quite enjoyable to watch.
The writing is so beautiful. Don't stop updating. Why did you stop updating for two days? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's not bad. It's a defective product that needs to be developed. Build a kingdom. Then it felt like the protagonist was so idle that his balls ached. Now that the country has been established, it's time to consider a harem. Don't go too many, just 3 or 5 will be enough. I really like the summoning text.
It's quite good. It's better looking than the Bleach book, and more interesting than the Quincy book. Deduct 1 point for the main character's clown-like appearance and performance. Another point will be deducted for the Substitution Jutsu that turns into Time and Space Ninjutsu. "Finally, it's the Substitution Jutsu." Asuma's voice sounded, and he took out a shuriken from nowhere and threw it towards Lucci. Call out! The shuriken cut through the air and went straight to Lu Qi's eyebrows. At the moment when it is about to hit. "Bang!" Lu Qi's figure turned into a burst of white smoke again, leaving only an ordinary wooden pile on the spot, but his true body appeared ten meters away like a ghost. The whole process is extremely fast! This can no longer be explained by the high-speed movement of "shaving"! This is... Space displacement!
Armed color and knowledge color are somewhat similar to Yang Dun and Yin Dun [smile] It's just too rough, not as delicate as Yin Yang Escape Spread ninjutsu to the world government. Are you excited to write it or do you want to completely play ninjutsu in One Piece and increase the word count? The protagonist's mentality is best to achieve his goal in a stable manner, rather than how interesting it is. That is the author's business. Don't forget how Otsutsuki in front was planted in the ninja world. You are the author, and if you manipulate the plot, no one can do anything about it. Also, you only wrote about ninjas, but not one of the major ninja clans. The ninja clan doesn't seem to have any background. As long as there was White Zetsu, Nagato would have been fine.
Overall it's pretty good, but the boss dies too hastily, with one move and the same treatment as the supporting characters. I feel like there should be a chapter about Joeyboy and Im playing around, and then be dropped in seconds. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]
So pretty, so pretty
No poisonous spots have been found so far
Although it is not a particularly good article, it is not bad. Next time, there will be fewer modifiers and pauses, and it will be less ink. I will give it four stars.
There are very few updates on Tomato. Is the author planning to stop updating? [Thinking]
The writing is very integrated with the two worlds where there is a sense of oppression but there is no pressure, and I am already looking forward to the subsequent plot. I can't get enough [face covering] [OK]
It's too short, it feels like the system is a little too high
A pretty good novel
It's so good, I finished it in one go [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]
Very interesting novel
This book still has a score of 8 or above
It was well written, but it was too short. I probably didn't want to write anymore, so I finished it quickly.
Nice, looks interesting
Isn't a small water prison technique a nightmare for Devil Fruit users?
All the previous movies have not been obtained [cover face][cover face][cover face]
Very cool, just a little bit lacking
It's okay. It ended too quickly. After beating the weak chicken and golden lion, it's almost over. I haven't even gone to the Grand Route. I just read and rewrite history in an infinite month.
Very nice, I like it very much
The plot and everything else are quite reasonable and quite enjoyable to watch.
The writing is so beautiful. Don't stop updating. Why did you stop updating for two days? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]