Why is your pet beast so strong?
Facing the reporter's question, Xu Fan pondered for a moment, and then slowly said: "I think they are all cheating."
In short, this is a story about a group of pet beasts leading the protagonist to fly.
Reader comments
The author's writing style is okay. For those who like reading, it is very immersive, but for those who have read too many cool articles, they may not like it. I hope the author can continue to persevere. If he continues to maintain this rhythm and has a good plot and writes as much interaction between the protagonist and the characters as possible, he will definitely be able to sign the contract. Let me tell you good news, you have been promoted Recommended, I believe more people will read your book. For a new author, it is already very good, and the description of emotions is very unclear. For example, the protagonist's cat went to the underground casino and caused trouble. The emotions between the protagonist and the cat are not very clear. For most people who read the book, they can't understand it, so they feel very confused. , I know the feelings you want to express will be very complicated. I wish the author to be a better version of himself in the future, work hard to update, and make a lot of money.
Give yourself a perfect score, but don't go too far.
The author's writing style is okay. For those who like reading, it is very immersive, but for those who have read too many cool articles, they may not like it. I hope the author can continue to persevere. If he continues to maintain this rhythm and has a good plot and writes as much interaction between the protagonist and the characters as possible, he will definitely be able to sign the contract. Let me tell you good news, you have been promoted Recommended, I believe more people will read your book. For a new author, it is already very good, and the description of emotions is very unclear. For example, the protagonist's cat went to the underground casino and caused trouble. The emotions between the protagonist and the cat are not very clear. For most people who read the book, they can't understand it, so they feel very confused. , I know the feelings you want to express will be very complicated. I wish the author to be a better version of himself in the future, work hard to update, and make a lot of money.
Give yourself a perfect score, but don't go too far.