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It's so hard to find a book like this. This score is only 8 points. How much do Tomato people like reading cool articles?

I have finished reading Chapter 309. It is great. I like it very much. It is my favorite type. People learn to grow. The heroine gradually grows up under the education of the protagonist: like a master and a father. I like this very much. It feels like being raised by a disciple, and the tiger...

I have finished reading it, and overall it is a good novel. What I like the most is that the author did not choose to stack boxes, and did not constantly change the map like other novels of the same type. Of course, this is not to say that this is bad, but most authors do not have the ability to handle it well, and many things suddenly become strange. I can say that it is remarkable. The author's writing is up and down, and the character creation is quite good. The protagonist is dark inside and outside. The heroine is a little too kind in the early stage. It is not wrong to say that the Virgin is not enough. It will get better as she grows up, and it does not affect the perception. It's a pity that the author may be inexperienced. There are many good pitfalls that could be expanded upon. The author is a little anxious and ends the story, which is quite a pity. The final ending is acceptable and can be considered a pretty good ending. Furthermore, the combat power in the book has somewhat collapsed, and cross-border battles have become the norm, but the author's description of the battle scenes is quite good. What interests me the most is the author's description of the doppelgänger. I think this type of writing is one of the most difficult things to write in a book. If it is not handled well, it will affect the look and feel of the whole book. I would not say that the author is too good in this aspect, but the overall feeling is okay. All in all, it is a highly recommended book, but everything is based on personal perception. This review only represents my personal opinion.

Overall, it's very good. If you've read enough cool articles, reading this one is a good choice. Some readers feel that the heroine is too virginal in the early stage. I think it is very good to write like this, and it describes the growth of a character. But I don't really like Su Changqing's part. He can indeed regret it, but I think the turning point is a bit sudden. In the late Xuan Qin Dao Jianmen, the Yuan organization was also very exciting. What impressed me very much was the plot of being distracted by the deity Hua Ning and having an unstable mental state. It was very real and interesting. The ending was indeed a bit sloppy, but maybe that was because there was too much to write. All in all, I am very grateful to the author for allowing me to read such a unique novel [Thoughts]

It's more everyday, and the characters' emotions and growth follow a gradual process, which makes it very comfortable to read. The way to raise a beast as a son looks interesting.

It is currently a daily novel, with good content and writing, and the characters are in line with what a modern person who has traveled to the world of cultivating immortals should look like. The overall look and feel is very good. There is a saying that the most exciting thing about good isekai literature is the cultural differences between the two worlds. And we can clearly feel that the author pays attention to this point. The protagonist of this book is not like those cool books about cultivating immortals. But when you get tired of reading those cool articles, you will find this book to be interesting to read. I still hope that the author can update more every day. If you stick to it, I will probably become popular (poke me if it becomes popular) Finally, the above only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please go away. There is no meaning of ridicule or sarcasm. I apologize if the language is inappropriate. I apologize if any remarks are offensive. They are neither offensive nor offensive. There is no hostility. It only expresses the literal meaning without sarcasm or implication. It only represents my personal views and does not intend to cause controversy or occupy public resources. Please forgive me for inappropriate language. I respect everything. If this reply offends you, I sincerely apologize.

Super good, very good, really great. I really really like this feeling. It has a little running time and a more leisurely feeling. I hope there are less battles and more daily life. It's really super good-looking. It's rare to find such a good article. I really love it.

The content of Chapter 28 is very detailed, and the description of the environment is very beautiful. I just read Chapter 28 and I will give you a book review first (a non-professional review). If you want to criticize me, there is no need to criticize it. You are disgusted and I am disgusted too.

It is particularly beautiful. Although there are some minor flaws, the overall feeling is that of a Taoist monk. The complaints in it further reflect the overall humor. The overall writing style is relaxed and the reading is very good. It can also highlight the difficulty of the entire world of cultivating immortals. In short, it is a good novel. This is my first time writing a comment. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Squirting means you are right.

The plot arrangement and character design are so wonderful that I even wrote a simple book review for this purpose, but unfortunately I forgot where to put it and will write another one later. Let's briefly talk about the points I like: Kieran's extreme operation to survive, Kieran's brand of scientific cultivation of immortality, dream chasing girl Long Qiqi, self-sacrifice for the clan Xiao Yuanjie, meeting with silver coins (Devil's Deal), smart tiger chasing the wind, rebel clone 1, expansion clone 2, multi-level reverse Su Changqing,? ? Lu Junxing... That's the main thing

I feel that the rating is slightly low, but the writing is good. Many of the plots in it are very consistent with what I thought when I was bored. For example, when I go to a different world and everyone else lives in bamboo houses or adobe houses, I build a small house by myself, restore the existing furniture using formations and alchemy methods, and then live leisurely and contentedly. To be honest, the development of the emotional line is a bit slow. At 700,000 words, I can barely see the signs of the climax. The title of the book can easily cause a gap, because there is no very intense description, it is dull, but the two people are slowly changing. I'm still looking forward to it, come on

The first part of this book can be called "Daily Life of Cultivation", and my aunt is laughing basically the whole time! The latter part is more inclined to "cultivation novels". The whole book has a lively pace, and the writing is not delicate, but it is not rough. It is written with care. To the author: Stick to your heart and don't let unnecessary words confuse your thoughts. To readers: The world is uncertain, and not every ascetic must be ruthless.

It's quite unique and very different from popular cool articles. Although it has some minor flaws, it's overall very good. The writing style is also much more delicate than Tugou novels, and the protagonist's character creation is distinctive. The world view is not big, the content of the novel does not focus on cultivation, but focuses on events. The novel is not long, just click on it and it will end as soon as you get tired of it.

First time storytelling First of all, I think this book is quite good, but it is undeniable that it does have shortcomings, such as being toxic and so on. But I think it is understandable and not very poisonous. I found the plot and content to be very interesting in general. Maybe the handling of details is not sophisticated enough, the grasp of emotions is not perfect, and some of the logic is not very smooth, but I chose to keep watching. I think there are two reasons for this. One: Nothing is perfect in the world, and some flaws in the novel are acceptable. Moreover, the flaws in this book are not that serious. Just like no one is perfect, scientific experiments must have certain errors, and novels cannot require perfection in all aspects. Second: I think there are some flaws in the book that others think, but in my opinion, they add to the charm of the book. For example: Some people say that the heroine forges a sword. To be honest, I felt a little uncomfortable watching it, but after thinking about it for a while, I felt more that the heroine was closer to reality. Understand that there are not that many completely sane people in the world. Sometimes illogical actions are logical. It's true that the heroine was born as a general, and it's true that she has been on the battlefield, but these two things do not mean that she has a decisive and decisive character. She will have different feelings and thoughts outside the battlefield. There is no need to dig into this point. In my opinion, some of the poisonous-looking parts have created a certain three-dimensional sense of the heroine to a certain extent. How to describe this feeling? It's like a movie by Xingye, a classic created inadvertently. Maybe some feelings are just my feelings, and it doesn't matter if you don't accept them. What I want to say most is that reading a book ultimately depends on your own feelings. Other people's reviews are for reference only. If you have the opportunity, you should try it yourself. (After all, I used to think that low-scoring or non-high-scoring works, or works with poor reviews, were not good-looking. But then I learned about "scoring" and tried it myself. I found that it doesn't necessarily mean a good-scoring book is good-looking because it suits my taste. It may also be a book that I think sucks. It doesn't necessarily mean a low-scoring book. Others say that it is toxic and is trash. Maybe it will be my treasure.) It's my first time telling books, so I'm a little nervous [shy]

The characterization is pretty good, and each character is relatively distinct. After reading the two hundred chapters, the feeling is that it fits the title of the book for the time being, and it will probably evolve into "The Love Diary of a Master and Disciple of Immortal Cultivators" later on. This article should be suitable to be placed in a female channel. It is not much different from the current mainstream TV dramas about love and immortality. Anyway, I won't watch such TV series [laughing and crying] If I were to read the novel, I would still read it, but I would rather read it like the title of the book, about the daily life of a sinister master and a confused apprentice. Even if you fall in love, can't you find other people in the sect or other sects? Alas, it's still a master-disciple relationship. . .

The book may not use many advanced techniques, and it cannot be said that it is as eye-catching as Zhu Ziqing's synaesthesia, but the whole book has been in a very stable state, everything is plain, and the author can write a light taste of war and killing, and the author has something. Furthermore, the scene rendering is in place and the character descriptions are acceptable, allowing people to put themselves in their shoes, have a sense of involvement, and bring themselves in instead of looking at others in the third person. This book has a good feel (no subjective output, please don't complain [grievance])

I finished this book today. The plot is a bit rough, but I like it very much. I hope the stories of other characters can have a good ending, just like Qiqi and Youyou can have more characterizations. Looking forward to the next book! ! !

I really like this kind of atmosphere that not only revolves around the protagonist, but also writes about the world. In the early stage, Li Shiyin was really poisonous, too poisonous. If you can accept it, it will be okay if you continue reading. I feel that many places can be written more realistically, but I still encourage it with 5 stars.

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This book seems to be quite enjoyable, the characters are quite distinct, but there are a lot of pitfalls, and the ending is a bit rushed. However, the author also clearly understands the reason for writing this way in the postscript of the book. It is an online novel. If you are short of books, you can read it and enjoy it.

This book is basically quite complete, from the ignorance of the heroine at the beginning to her unparalleled dominance in the end! The heroine is not the Virgin, she is just a girl who does not understand the world. The process of growing up slowly is part of what she must go through. This book is very comfortable to read

Reviews are mixed, with some good and some bad. The novel does have some so-called poisonous points, but I think it is at least acceptable. I think it is much better than the Madonna and other novels in other novels. The novel as a whole is more everyday, without the kind of system that goes against the grain or remains invincible until the end. It can be regarded as a daily article. I hope the author can persist in the afternoon and not be influenced by external influences and never forget his original intention. Come on

It's a good book about cultivating immortality, a bit leisurely and a bit slow-paced. I haven't read a book about cultivating immortals for a long time. I opened this one because of the title and the story. I hope that the master and the apprentice will confess their love face to face as soon as possible; I hope that Huang Wenyu can repent and find Tian Wenjin.

I really like watching it, but I don't dare to watch too much at once for fear of running out. The author's emotional description makes me feel comfortable

It's pretty good, but I'm used to reading books about decisiveness and killing. I felt a little uncomfortable while reading the book. But I think it's very interesting. I just don't want the two clones of the protagonist to do too much, don't become black, and try not to let the clones meet the people they like. Don't look for a girl 2 girls 3 or something like that. In short, I still like this book very much. Come on, author! ! Don't mess up.

I like this style better. It's a good book in Tomato.

The shortcomings of this article have basically been mentioned in the author's postscript. If new readers are not sure whether this book is worth reading, they can read the postscript first. If possible, I still hope that after the author becomes famous in the future, he will find ways to adjust the plot of this book, just like Jin Yong did back then. In fact, overall this article can be regarded as a sentence of praise for its beautiful writing, and the characterization is also quite vivid. Although the protagonist is the master and apprentice, the supporting characters are all distinctive and impressive. The combat power system is generally broken, so it would be wise not to write about it in depth. I feel that the author's writing style and characterization should be considered as his own advantage. He might as well learn the writing techniques of traditional literature. Don't write too long stories. Write each book one by one as a collection of novellas. Each story can be a different protagonist, but they can be related to each other. On the big stage set by yourself, you can sing and I appear on the stage to connect them together.

After reading, I still have a lot of thoughts. It's an excellent novel. In the end, if it were not so simple, wouldn't it be better to expand it to two or three hundred chapters, where the protagonist stays on the sidelines and secretly helps his son Qin Lu? At least the battle between the Xuan Qin Dynasty and the Dao Jian Sect should not be so simple. After all, it was also the final part of the three-step plan.

This is my first review of a novel that I have read for more than ten years. I have nothing to say about five stars. After reading the novel for the first time and finishing it, I felt like I wanted to put a knife on the author's neck and make him live with me for the rest of my life. The writing style may need to be strengthened, but the protagonists are all vividly portrayed. I hope the author can write better works, come on!

Not bad, not bad. It focuses on daily life and farming, but both the Demonic Willow Devourer and the Yuan Organization also have the wonderful features of great villains. The writing is unhurried and unhurried, forming its own unique style and rhythm.