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The knight is here, haha. Locke Uemoto takes us all the way to appreciate the wizarding world from the perspective of a knight. This time it is from the perspective of a mage [laughing] Uemoto is really enjoyable to read. The chapter is long enough, author, come on! As long as you can update, I will keep reading [laughing] It's not enough anymore. . . When I read the first book, I could tell that the author was very ambitious and laid a lot of traps. The world view is huge and very appealing to my taste. (There are no ridiculous things, such as being able to herd sheep on top of your head. I personally hate these things. I usually give up on books like this.) It's really real. I hope I can persevere and don't write too much. I'm already planning to go back and read the first part again. It's not enough to watch at all -_-||

I finally have this book, first a five-star critical hit [like] Come on Xiaodou, you are the only author I am willing to follow. Let me make it clear that I am not a brainless person, I am a 3000-hour old bookworm. Mom, am I going to get angry? [Sinister smile]

This is one of the few Western novels about swords and magic that I have read in the past five years that suits my taste. The most important thing is that he has a harem! ! !

Having read Knight's Journey, I feel like it's another very good long novel.

I originally thought that the author borrowed from Knight's Journey because when I clicked on the author's works column, I only saw one book. If the reader hadn't asked me to read the name, I would have been kept in the dark. It turned out to be an old author. The writing is delicate, coherent and true. It is an absolute good book. The background is also very grand and interesting. This is the only two books that I think are very good. Absolute five-star praise, no regrets [you read carefully]

From Knight's March, it's so beautiful!

For this book, maybe I can summarize it this way: an interesting cultivation system, an interesting grand world, and interesting stories. It is a good book that will make people addicted and fascinated after reading it! ! !

Give me 5 stars first, cheers Xiaodou [Like] I just watched the beginning, and Thain's appearance is very good! He is calm and decisive in battle, it would be a pity not to be a black magician [OK] When you become a disciple, your words and deeds are appropriate, small things can make a big difference, and you can expect growth [Learned]

It's great to read your Knight's Journey, including this Lord of Ashes setting.

I've been reading it for a long time, Xiaodou, and I like reading your books. I read Knight's Journey with fascination. It's really good, especially the second one. It really touched my heart. First of all, it's the wizard I like. Secondly, it continues the grand world view of the previous book. I'm really curious about the author's brain circuit that can write such a magical book, but it's still too slow. Please read more. Ask the author what the group number is for his book club

It's okay, but there are too many trivia about the protagonist, and the battle scenes are too bland. I suggest the author read more scripts and watch more movies. However, the reversal when the protagonist is chased by a black magician was well written and thought it was a climax. It is best for the characters to be distinctive and prominent, otherwise they will be too monotonous. When a character has motivations and actions, there must also be obstacles. The character must not be afraid of obstacles and work hard to overcome obstacles. The character's personality can best be revealed when he rushes forward in the face of obstacles. Obstacles stand in the way, and the blocked party refuses to give up, so a conflict occurs. The conflict gets bigger and bigger, reaching its peak and reaching a climax. I am generally a person who "doesn't appreciate the plainness when it comes to writing." I have a lot to say, but the author writes quite well in the Western fantasy genre. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง. Personally, I don't think it's as well written as the Knight's book, it's too bland, and I abandoned the later ones like this.,,,

The plot is pretty good, the only thing I can't stand is that the male protagonist falls in love with a girl he meets, and the girl falls in love with the male protagonist when she sees him. Especially the part about Irene, who is more than 100 years older than the male protagonist, is the great-grandmother of the male protagonist's classmate, and also worked as the male protagonist's teacher. Just because the male protagonist took a look at her when she was in the hospital, she fell in love with the male protagonist. It is difficult not to doubt whether the author has some personal information. It's not that you can't accept a harem, but you've forced yourself to write a romantic relationship for the sake of a harem, and what the hell is it that ended up being thrown into the cold palace once? The emotional line is in a complete mess, and the main male character just needs to deal with his physical needs. The author has a lot of reasons: his best friend died in the war, and he went to school without a friend... He forced to write about the relationship, and then, he solved his physical needs, and then, they never showed up again. It was really sad.

The main progress is of a slow-burning type. If you like the young genius type, for example, if you are an 18-year-old who has surpassed the enemy level and has unique talents, this game should not be available, so please enter with caution. The plot is good, and the emotional route is most likely to be in the harem. I have seen three people having sex now. The author has written "Knight's Journey" before. You can go to Kangkang

Highly recommended, even better than the previous one

There are not many wizard novels nowadays, and this one is already the best among the best. Why are the chapters confused [Petrified]

This must be five points and it is very good-looking. Although the harem is a little bit, it is not bad. The story behind the Knight's Journey thousands of years later tells the story of an aristocratic young master who was captured by a black magician and went to the dark world below, and then grew up step by step. The cruel dark world slowly grew. I have to say that the author's writing is very good and the concept is very strong. The knight's journey is also good. I don't know how many chapters to write...,...

Knight is the first very long novel that I didn't want to read and then came back to read. To be honest, some of the planes are too much for the Yongzhang to find boring. I hope this book can be more streamlined. I'm looking forward to giving it a five-star review.

It's a very good book. Although I have only read more than forty chapters, it does not hinder my feeling after reading it. The writing is ranked top-to-bottom among tomato articles, and the overall writing is reasonable and smooth. The kind character of the male protagonist in this article is really rare. He was kidnapped to the underground world at the age of five or six, but he still retains a trace of conscience, which is very good.

It's very good. It's much faster than Knight. Knight is a bit slow. I don't like to follow books. Knight saw more than 3600 chapters. I finished reading it at that time and didn't follow it anymore. This book feels better than the previous one. Come on.

It is simply a super exciting novel in the Western fantasy continent. I hope he will write a third part. Although I have not watched the first part of Knight's Journey, I was attracted by the plot and structure. I read it again. The wizard is connected with the vast star world, and the knight is galloping in the vast universe. Thain is one of my favorite protagonists at the moment. From the process of his step-by-step struggle, the author has presented rationality and logic very well. The world view is clear and the characters have a lot to do. But I love watching it. I highly recommend [lick screen][lick screen][lick screen][lick screen]

The writing is not bad. I have been reading books for about 10 years since elementary school. I have read basically all kinds of novels. This novel can be ranked in the top five among pure mage novels. But to be honest, the early writing is really good, but the protagonist's normal level is too slow. I have seen 900 The protagonist is only a level 3 mage. He is really far away from a level 9 mage. I don't really want to read it after reading it. It is a tasteless novel that would be a pity to abandon it. But overall, the author's writing is quite satisfactory. I am still willing to give the author 4 stars. I hope the author will write better and better.

Generally speaking, this book is relatively good. The advantages are that it is long enough to be read for a long time, and the author's material in this book is very rich, which can satisfy the reader's imagination. The author is relatively understanding and willing to meet the psychological needs of the readers of this book. However, there are also some shortcomings, such as the lack of many detailed descriptions and action descriptions. Although the background worldview is grand, it must be read in conjunction with the previous book, and the previous book is also It is extremely long and boring. As a result, many people need to guess through various details and comment areas when reading this book to understand the world background and hierarchy. There are also a lot of typos. Although some have been changed, they are still there, but they do not affect the reading. The most important thing is that his descriptions in some aspects always make me speechless. We are not short of this kind of traffic, and I also hope to read it. However, in order to avoid this book being blocked, I think it is not impossible to be conservative. And when the author describes the emotions of some characters and the development of things, for example, the fighting is not so passionate and the emotions are not so rich.

Highly recommend reading my recommendations! ! ! ! First of all, let me state that this book is the second part of the Wizarding Civilization trilogy written by Xiaodou. His main audience is the readers of the first "Knight's Journey". If you don't read the first book, you won't be able to enjoy this novel at all. This book is not a so-called lord, there are only a few lords, but he is definitely not the focus, and maybe not even a branch plot. It mainly talks about plane wars, and it has a bit of a three-body feel. The world view of the whole system is very grand, and it touches on the rules of the astral world. It has a lot of imagination and good writing. However, the progress will be slower, and the excitement may not be as straightforward as the refreshing novels. There are only 5,000 chapters in Knight's Journey alone. When Xiaodou first wrote this book, he said that he would write at least 4,000. In short, it is highly recommended to read the first book. If you have not read it, you will not understand a lot if you read it directly. Moreover, many of the interesting points left by the first book are reflected in the second one. If you do not read the first book, you will not get another important aspect of this book. (Only personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

Very good, the combat power system has not collapsed. Although this book involves a lot of love between men and women, it tends to be a decompression style and does not necessarily have a relationship. Of course, a small part of it is, but most of it has an emotional basis. I don't agree with the Stallion article, nor have I seen the previous one. As of now, the first blood of Mermaid, Constructor, and Orc Priest has not been obtained yet. War and plunder are the main theme of wizard civilization, and the exploration and persistence of truth are the main theme of magicians. It is slow to warm up. Overall, there is no particularly exaggerated description, and there is no setting that cannot match it. This is a magician who pursues physical fitness, good popularity, and lust (and maybe innocence).

It's beautiful and logical, and it transitions well from dark soul to bright emotions. Slowly, the protagonist begins to become humanized step by step. Of course, his nature is still good. It's good to be a lubricant if it's a little rusty. Don't have too many in the harem and you'll be too busy.

This is a very beautiful novel. Although I haven't read the author's first novel, Knight's Journey . But I still find these settings very interesting. The author shows us a very grand world view. It would be nice if Thane wasn't so perverted. After all, Thain is just a magician, not a knight. Although his physique is almost the same as that of a knight, he is a magician who studies the mysteries of magic, so I hope the author will not add new Aba Aba. But I don't know what happened. I always feel like it lacks some novelty. The following routine feels a bit cliche. Although I was interested in doing this, depicting a cruel dark law of survival, the author's courage must be encouraged here.

Haha, the Shirahoshi and Neptune types are borrowed from One Piece. It's really well written and the wizarding world is presented perfectly.

Overall, it looks pretty good. I personally think the plot is too tight. To be honest, with the current plot, I should be able to add another 1/3 of the chapters before others come. But after all, the old author has written well. I recommend it.

If you like Knight's Journey, you must read it.

Yes, reading this book requires patience. It is a bit like playing a game. The protagonist is weak at the beginning, but slowly develops and becomes stronger. It may take a hundred chapters for an opportunity to appear and start to become stronger, but it is precisely because of this that it is a complete story. This is not the kind of time travel story, system story, or invincible story where the protagonist is naughty. The protagonist is just a boy who was abducted and trafficked when he was a child. He has normal human feelings and worries. I haven't seen this kind of story for a long time. In fact, this is a more traditional story form, not like today's online stories.