The Five Immortal Sects

The author's conception is very logical, and it is only slightly inferior to the biography of a mortal cultivating immortality. The difference is that it is a little wordy, and there are many irrelevant or passing details written too much. Sincere words, I hope it will be helpful to the author.

I like it very much, this book is good

I couldn't stand watching it. I guess my thinking can't keep up with the author's artistic conception. Reading is fascinating. It's so tiring to twist around here and there and not be able to keep up.

Five Stars is somewhat similar to Ergen's writing style, so it should be imitated. The plot and writing are very good, and it is definitely a refreshing novel in Tomato! It's just that too much writing is wasted in many places. If we continue writing it like this, from Nascent Soul, Transformation to God, and then to the fairy world, we will probably write 3,000 chapters. There is too much foreshadowing in the early stage, which will give people a headache! In addition, the paragraph format is too long, and sometimes there is too much text in one paragraph, so it is divided into shorter paragraphs. Just have more paragraphs, and it will not be so tiring to read! Novels Novels are concise and concise, and enjoyable! Such a long paragraph is as tiring as reading a long composition! I can't stand it! This is the third time I have browsed this novel. The first two times I discarded it because of the large paragraphs and long text, which made browsing too laborious. Fortunately, I finally finished watching it for the third time. I really liked it, to be honest! The author's writing is very good and the story is well described! Compared to the crowd of followers in Tomato, it is simply so much better. I just hope that the author will streamline it. I have read 900 chapters and still have no clue. Just thinking about it gives me a headache! I can guarantee that if the author doesn't finish the book, it will be around 3,000 chapters! Even the fairy world has this narrative, 5,000 is not enough. I also hope that no matter how the author writes, he must finish it! I will come back to continue chasing in the future, come on, author! You are a potential stock, and you are expected to become a god

Yes, traditional mortals practice immortal literature. Regardless of the content, at least there are no major logical problems, and the villain's IQ is normal. Compared with the current Xiaobai articles, fast food articles and studio articles, it is more than a little better. Just don't compete with those platinum bosses. There are too many narrations in the middle of the dialogue, too many unnecessary explanations, and the plot development is too "copied".

The author may be a chatterbox and very logical; in real life, he may be the kind of person who has something to say and no one listens to him, and this is most vividly expressed through writing novels. It's just that the poor readers have to keep reading. It is recommended to read only the first and last chapters.

This is a very good novel. As long as I have been reading books for so many years, there are not many novels that I can read. Apart from the two books about cultivating immortals, this is the only one.

It is more readable than most novels of the same type. It has no pretense, the story is logically analyzed, the language is fluent, and the author has a profound literary background. A lot better than that Ergen and his ilk, but the rating is so low? Can't understand.

Does the author have any other works? Really well written

Mortal people flow the truth