Destiny***

Generally speaking, it's pretty good, but one point will be deducted for a chaotic system, one point will be deducted for a slightly faster plot, eight points for level, three points for no system, one point for a good plot, and four points for a good spiritual beast [Petrochemical][Petrified][Petrified]

It's pretty good. I suggest you change the cover and introduction. After all, I don't feel like the author is in the funny style.

I rarely read this type of movie. This is the first time I've read it. I think it's well written, but it's a bit like Pokémon. It's well written and worth recommending. Come on.

Shameless, self-recommend five stars [smile][smile][smile]

Let me comment after reading everything. It's a little childish in the early stage, but considering that the protagonist is still young, it's okay. The rhythm can pick up later. I hope it will mature soon and become a bit passionate. According to this plot, there will be thousands of chapters. Please keep updating the author💪💪💪

So far so good [eating melon]

I just like single female protagonists. Why is it that the protagonist is too miserable alone and needs a warm embrace? Come on! Five stars for you!

I give it a perfect score and hope the author can work hard. If possible, it would be great if the author could use less memories of dead people and try to make up for the word count. It would also be better if the author uses less swear words so there is no need to curse all the time. I think it's good to have a female protagonist and bring Bing Ling in, and then change it from no female protagonist to a single female protagonist. The plot will develop very well in this way. There is no need to deliberately arrange the scenes, just write according to the author's development. As for the campus, the plot should be almost developed by now. There are almost all the things to fight inside the school, and the only thing left behind is outside the school. Then the protagonist doesn't need to be so dark-hearted (it's as dark as it needs to be, and I'm not a virgin), and it's better to be a little more sunny and decent. I'm looking forward to writing about the world after that when I'm in college. This is also my first time giving advice on a book review, so I'm sorry.

I like the blackness