Bilan: My Ship Girl's Style of Painting Is Not Quite Right

A very good Bilan fanbook, each one has a lot of content, and the content is also very exciting As for the early stage, it seems that the author could adjust the layout in the early stage. Before more than 60 chapters, a lot of words were mixed together, which was really uncomfortable to read, but after more than 70 chapters, it seems that they have been corrected. Also, the feeling of crushing firepower was not reflected in the early stage, which is a bit off topic. Also, does the author prefer royal ship girls? Let's go and experience the game, and by the way, watch the drama that I haven't finished yet. Suddenly I found it strange. Is Jiang Jiang at the cosmic level? Why does it feel like a planetary level? Didn't I introduce him before? He is so powerful. The civilization behind him is so powerful and he has experienced so many things. The article does not always brag about hitting something. Soul weapons, spiritual weapons, memetic weapons, causal weapons. He has experienced so many cosmic wars and performed missions. Why does it feel so unreliable? If he were allowed to become the captain, it would be ruined, and the fleet would be ruined! Jiang Jiang is not a young man, maybe in his 20s, but judging from your introduction, the protagonist shouldn't be a virgin, right? After going through so many things, why am I still so timid, especially when it comes to getting along with the ship girls? As for being afraid of Befa Dido. Prince Eugen. Don't treat Jiang Jiang like the virgin he wrote about! Just complaining, don't take it seriously "It's really not a gang [send heart] [eat melon]" Excerpted from the introduction "Hello, I am Jiang Jiang. I work in a starry sky fleet in parallel time and space. I am good at penetrating behind enemy lines and often get involved in unexpected things." @. Refresh time ?

Very good, currently the only two good Azur Lane fan novels on Tomato [Like] The other one is Commander's Code of Conduct

It is a very exciting novel. There are many similar fans to Azur Lane, but most of them are fake fans who talk about relationships. Although this novel also has a lot of emotional scenes, its transformation is a bright spot. It breaks away from the original perception of Azur Lane as a ship girl, and breaks the problem of quality in the game. After all, you can't use a white skin to compete with a gold skin, so it avoids the problem of quality leading to the preference of ship girls, and there will be no chance of being built and left behind in the previous article. , The problem of not seeing the light of day in the later period, and the other is that the author is very attentive, at least he is a high-ranking commander of Azur Lane, because only by being familiar with it to a certain extent can he write Shinano's sharp tail and Chicheng's character of using his tail to wrap around his beloved things. This is the best Azur fan novel I have read in Tomato over the past year. There is no one like it. Yes, there is no other one. So book friends who like Azur Lane fan novels can rest assured to read it. You will never be disappointed.

Personally, I felt that it was terrible to read (part of my fault), but the book was very interesting and a good book, so I couldn't stop reading it. I could only read this book with chest tightness, which made me feel uncomfortable. Big cheers for the author, the book is super nice

Whether it's the writing, the plot, or the imagination, it's all top-notch, and the look and feel is great. Except for a little bit, it's a masterpiece. Also the name is a little bit bad

Personally I think Tomatoes is a very exciting kanji story with very few poisonous points. The main character is already up and straight. The straight male protagonist makes the book not have the mixed and forced love stories of other kanji stories, but there are also sweet plots with straight men. He doesn't have a system but he has an intelligent brain, and his technological level is even higher than that of Siren. Seeing that the main goal in the protagonist's mind now is just to retrieve the battleship and go back, I don't know if it will change in the future. The reason for the change is because I hope to bring the ship girl with me. After all, the ship girl can also live on the battleship. The commander's place is where the ship girl's heart is. The protagonist does not have to travel alone in space. What if the protagonist's hometown finds out that the ship girl will take action against the ship girl? How can the protagonist protect the ship girl outside?

This is a wonderful book, its thinking logic is very clear, and it makes people feel bright. I haven't found any poisonous points so far, but let's just say, change the cover. Only a good cover can attract readers [face cover] [face cover] I almost missed this good book at the beginning [face cover] [face cover]

The battles and daily routines are very good. The protagonist has clear goals and obstacles. As the plot progresses, you can feel that the protagonist makes decisions based on his own will, rather than passively progressing through the plot or tasks. His acting style is steady and skinny, but there is a bit of cheapness in the skin. When he is cheap, he will make waves and take off. Ship girls need to strengthen their knowledge of mysticism, otherwise they will be polluted after leaving the planet. Breakthroughs can be seen as the improvement of life status, or the completion of life. If you only watch the game without watching the plot, ordinary ship girls will be dissatisfied with the inability to awaken their minds, which is equivalent to the incompleteness of the soul and life. The level is too low, such as eating and drinking shikigami, Shinano's dreams, etc. You can also delve deeper into the mysterious direction. Technology crushing seems very cool now, but considering that the protagonist will definitely leave the planet later, the protagonist's mystery is definitely not low, but the ship girl is an artificial life, and there are natural flaws.

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully. It doesn't matter how long you write. As long as you don't give up or get sloppy, everything will not be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you will be a senior performer, and I will be the audience who appreciates the video. The performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's situation when watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard" Q, if he watches more episodes, he will miss one episode. He wants to watch it but can't let it go. It's a contradiction. The mixed emotions drive me crazy. I am just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel carelessly, without any intention of finishing it. But if you succeed, yes, leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. I hope you can read it with a sense of luck. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours.

Although I have never played Bilan, the novel was so interesting that I stayed up all night to read it for him.

I like it very much, give it a five-star rating! [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

Very good. There is nothing to say about the plot. The characters are also very full. The IQ of the protagonist is still online. I am looking forward to the image of Jiang Hao. I promised the author that it must be Baimao to satisfy my fantasy of silver-gray space battleships. In addition, I still update it daily.

This book is really good. As a non-Azur Lane person, I read it with gusto and successfully got into the game.

It's very nice, and it suits my LS... My taste as a gentleman [laughing evilly]

Whether it is the characterization of the plot or the shaping of the characters, I have my own understanding of it. Compared with other games of the same type, those who have not played Azur Lane may not be able to get some points, but for players, it is a good work (doge). Some of the memes are quite innovative. From what I saw, it's a knowing smile. Jpg. It blends in very well, without too much doping, but is used carefully like an idiom, making it look neater. In terms of writing or dialogue between characters, it is a bit bloated. For example, in terms of fighting scenes, I understand it from the perspective of listening to the book, and of course it only represents my personal opinion. The interaction between the ship girl and the commander is relatively light and concise, allowing people to associate the picture with the text, making it easier to imagine and have a stronger sense of immersion. Overall, it's a good piece of work. For example, the issue of combat power collapse has always been unavoidable. If we spend a lot of time describing the cruelty of the Siren War and the cruelty of losing a ship girl or losing a commander, compared to the game, it would be a little off topic. I am a 5-year veteran player and have not watched the entire plot, so I will not comment too much. But with a general understanding, and comparing the ship girls in the game, I understand their historical prototypes better. I also know that peace is hard to come by, so the relaxed and pleasant type is more in line with my taste.

Chong Guan Ni Nu X I was thrown into a blind date arranged by my parents, and I just wanted to go home quickly X Strategy for the Great Demon King Jiang Jiang ✓ It's burning, lyrical, rustling, and full of plot. It can be said that the author has mastered the setting of Azure, and even created a very interesting promotion method. At the same time, the ship of the same name is also handled very well. A commander will not create the same ship girl (except for juvenile ships). Ship girls of different commanders will continue to tend to the commander's personality, which will lead to different styles. In addition to Kanmu's worldview, the background setting of the protagonist itself also makes people want to watch a prequel. It can be said to be the best Bilan fanfic, bar none.

The author's writing style is very good and he writes well. Theme, type, frame, it all works. But I always felt a little uncomfortable while reading, and it became more and more uncomfortable toward the back. I declare that this is definitely a fanfic worth reading. This is uncomfortable, maybe I'm a bit picky or have different tastes [laughing and crying] The protagonist is a space captain and is invincible at the science level. However, I may not be able to get enough of these contents. On the contrary, sometimes it feels very cumbersome, giving me the feeling that the ship girl is not the main line. Including the subsequent technological transformation of the Rubik's Cube, I personally couldn't accept it, so I just gave up. Also, to me, the main character doesn't look straight like a human being, and I don't mean to say that I have to look at him in a sexual way. It's just that I really can't accept what the protagonist does in some scenes. Mainly these two points. Let me reiterate, the book is a good book. It's worth reading for you, but my point may be a bit special. So I ran away [almost crying]. The more I look back, the more uncomfortable I feel, but the writing is obviously very good, so thinking about it makes me even more uncomfortable [crying]

This book can be regarded as another book that I didn't skip even when I was severely short of books. It also made me, a person who didn't know much about Azur Lane before, suddenly want to learn about Azur Lane after reading it. It's really good.

The daily life is relaxed, the concepts are normal, the protagonist is cute, the layers are clear, and the progress is calm. I, a reader who has never played Granblue, can understand it. Thanks to the author Xiaodera for his persistence, and the quick update! Modo Modo!

The whole book is quite good to read. Compared with other novels, this book is quite long and has fresh content. Except for the initial part of Beilian that made people feel uncomfortable. The rest is pretty good and pretty funny. And I have read it a second time, and I feel that the author has made some changes, and the arrival of the ship is a bit early. If the plot at the end of Bei Lian is deleted or modified, more people should continue to watch it. I believe that many people can't stand it after seeing the section at the end of Bei Lian. After all, it's like the thorn in the fish. It feels piercing and uncomfortable, but you can't describe it. This is already my second playthrough. There were many plots before, and I found that the author seemed to have changed them. For example, the part where the daughter of the underground godfather threatened Jiang Jiang with a child hostage was gone. And there are many changes. I think the author has made major changes.

I like Bilan, but the character of the protagonist of this book is really difficult. There is a step-by-step process in the game. Once you create it, you will soon be able to swear. Also, I think the author wants to create a funny and out-of-the-box protagonist, but it is very dramatic in the background you set. Come on, there are not many high-profile books about Bilan. I was poisoned by the first few chapters [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

All I can say is that this is a rare masterpiece of ship girl writing. Big cheers for the author [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

This work is by far the most worth-reading Kanmu series of novels. It is also a mudslide in the clear spring, especially the early part in Chongsakura. It perfectly interprets the personal charm of our flower gardener Rabbit. Everyone understands it. After all, this is a problem of bloodline suppression [smile] If you don't understand it well, you can read this novel. I think it's really good.

The writing is very good, I just hope that there will always be only this little interstellar element instead of taking over the main role. The protagonist has a pretty good personality

Come on! ! ! ! It's so hard to find such a good Kanji article! ! ! ! ! Author, give it to me! ! ! ! No eunuchs allowed! ! ! ! ! Otherwise [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully]

It's so strong! But I'm not educated, so I can only say good! It's indescribably good! Even people who have never played this game can watch it! The plot is spot on! The protagonist is smart enough! The characters of the ship girl are also well written! Okay, great, keep up the good work!

It's a pretty good book. I feel like the author should have read a lot about Azur Lane. I haven't played it personally, but I read some descriptions in the comments and got a rough idea myself. The images of the ship girls are very consistent and vivid, and they are also very friendly to those who don't know Azur Lane. Basically, there will be no incomprehensible problems. Then there is the protagonist. The protagonist is called "Rabbit Bandit" in the book. He is really vivid. Personally, I feel like it. It is much better than some Long Aotian-type protagonists whose image is too solid. It is very novel. Of course, there are also some problems, which seem to be related to the protagonist's ability setting and part of the plot, as other book friends have said. My feeling is just a little bit, I really don't feel much. All in all, it's a good book, good to read, highly recommended [sending my heart]

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Yes, the writing is at least much better, but I'm a little curious, do all types of ship girls look the same?

Big quantity, full control, more updates Those who are mild or outside the circle don't know much about the characters of the shipgirls. So far there is no strong and obvious sauce plot Ability remains stable The ship girls are all heroines [Like] Zhinao is very annoyed in the later stage [cover face][cover face]