Where Does the Dao Begin, and Where Does Its Fate End?

What can I say, the overall feeling is okay. The beginning seems a bit boring, especially the first chapter, which is full of words and phrases, and I don't have much desire to read it. However, it gets better and better later on, and it doesn't feel like it's all talk or words; the plot also picks up, with some tightness and looseness, and it doesn't look tired. I went to find out more about it and found out that this is the author's first book and it's well written like this. However, I would like to remind the author to pay attention in subsequent updates. There are some missing words or incorrect wording and sentence construction in some places. I hope the author can do better. Give it a five-star rating➕Collect it

This is a great first book. The foreshadowing is very subtle, and it is clear now that there is a more powerful boss behind the sky. I hope that the holes in front and behind can be filled. After the male protagonist took over his father's chess game in the later stage, he didn't know what kind of state he was in, but he hoped that the female protagonist would stick around. It was really cute. There is still one star left to pay in installments. Are you angry? [Laughs evilly] (if there is no collapse in the later stage) Come on! 😆

It's not too much to give my book five stars, right? 😏😏

Based on past reading experience, I offer some personal suggestions. Once you've determined that it will be a single female lead, don't write too many scenes with a female supporting character and being ambiguous with the male lead. Don't be a eunuch. If you really can't write anymore (because I've read too many stories that ended in vain), please give me a happy ending. As for the single heroine, just make it sweeter. Who wouldn't want to watch a maniac who dotes on his wife? Come on, author.