The Legend of the Beginning of the Ninja World

After reading it, it's okay. It's better than most novels. The growth in strength is okay. I almost got carried away by the comments. The logic is okay. It's just that the small country has some ideas about building a ninja village. If the small country builds a ninja village, it should have to be approved by the five major ninja villages.

If the moon doesn't sleep, I won't sleep. The king of hell calls me a fool.

I have read fifty chapters so far, and overall they are very good. I feel that the character of Naruto in a novel cannot be broken. There is no system to write the feeling of Naruto's world. The author's writing style is also excellent. It is like a breath of fresh air among many Naruto stories. I also like the protagonist's character. As long as it doesn't end badly, in my opinion, it is a masterpiece. Come on, author😊

Why is it so beautiful [shy]

It is recommended that you read this book without thinking, it is still okay, but if you read it with thinking, you will get a headache

Although I have only read Chapter 60, it does not affect my urge to update. Let's not talk about whether it is good or not. Just based on the name of the author, five stars is appropriate [laughter]

It's so beautiful. It's definitely the best among Naruto stories.

It's beautiful, there's a magical book

Damn it, it's another day when I'm being persuaded to quit by the shitty yellow button. Is the author okay? !

I hope the author doesn't end up with bad work later on.

I personally think it's pretty good. As for the author's name, I have to give it five stars even if I don't read it. I'm not a black guy. I (dis)like Cai Xukun giegie the most [laughs evilly]

No, why did the style of painting change suddenly from Chapter 8? It feels like it was written by another person.

Very good, well written

Author, you are not short, you just don't have it at all.

It's really beautiful

The best of Naruto's writings

It looks good, please keep up the good work, author! Adding a stepfather to Naruto, I feel that the most attractive ones in Naruto are the sisters Kushina, Ino, and Hinata. I lost points really quickly because the latest dozens of chapters were of little interest.

The writing is good, but there are some flaws in some places, but it is very enjoyable to read. I highly recommend it.

It still looks good, keep up the good work

The writing is very real, come on

Are the protagonist and Kushina good? ? ? ? Why she was resurrected is baffling. They are just acquaintances. Is it easy to spend so much effort to resurrect Xin Jiunai? ? When the protagonist died, no one shed a single tear for him. Are you licking a dog?

Gave Uchiha a good future

Is there a female protagonist? I'm really curious. So many people are worried that the male protagonist will not be able to find a wife.

For some special reasons, I gave it five stars [laughing] [making faces]

Very beautiful, but not enough [eating melon]

Not bad, not bad, very nice [sending heart]

The little Heizi is only showing his feet.

Different Naruto, although sometimes the span is quite large, it is indeed fresh and beautiful!

Beautiful! Big cheers to the author. If you are ugly, sleep first (*^^*)

Five stars are for the author's imagination, the courage to break the original plot, and the courage to write his own plot, instead of forcing the original plot to be disgusting like other flying authors.