JOJO: Capture Diavolo at the Beginning

Highly recommended! This book not only has the feel of JOJO (but I can't tell where [smile]), but the book itself is very cheerful, and the cute DIO-chan (Mist) is basically white. Overall, it is very good. Not bad for giving five stars. (The most important thing is that there is Araki Village [laughing evilly])

A new book sets sail, reject the knife, and those who wish will take the bait! Originally, I wanted to set both sisters as heroines, but Tomato seems to have refused to allow it, so the relationship between Mira and the protagonist in the article is limited to an ambiguous one. [Cry][cry][cry] This book can be seen as a single female protagonist. It's good for everyone to know.

This book is one of the best Jojo fan books I have ever read. Originally, I didn't really like reading time travel fan books with a mastermind behind the scenes, but the author's character creation and plot coherence are very good (and the imagination is very big, after all, how can you create your own substitute if you don't have a big imagination). There are also 345 character encounters, which makes me feel that if they meet, it will really be like that. The most important thing is that many of the mortal characters in the original work have not died, at least so far I have not seen a knife. I hope the author will not be unfinished.

This Diavolo is so arrogant, I like it so much I also really like the storyline of recognizing the son. It's so comfortable to see the members of the assassination team come in in this way and have such a harmonious relationship with the protagonist. Ah, it's so comfortable. It's a bit of a pity for the heroine. Brother Deng said that Tomato is not allowed to be written, so Mira is still a bit of a pity. In JOJO, this is my favorite thing to watch after Ima. I also catch up with updates every day. Today I finally achieved it. I achieved the achievement of being the first in updating updates and being the first to comment. I'm so proud of you. Hahahahahahahahahaha. No matter what others say, this book is really my life for me. The only other JO books I have read now are Ima and Ripple. This one really suits my taste. It is really good.

It feels good, but some places are not comfortable to watch, and some places are a bit unbearable. The design of the stand-ins is quite good, and it is relatively good among JOJO fans.

Great! It's wonderful! The content is rich and the plot is exciting! Interlocking and fascinating! The foreshadowing is ingenious! The characters are delicately portrayed! This is a must-read novel! ----------Separating line---------- I have a question. The avatar is formed by condensing mental power. So, wouldn't the avatar know what is going on in his mind? Why shout it out? Do I have to shout out when using skills? If you think about it in your mind, you can use it in a few seconds, and you won't miss the opportunity because you use it too slowly. For example, Dior, when his head was smashed, he shouted, "World!" Time stopped (let's stop it), and it was not used. Dio is very smart, and he cannot give up the opportunity to fight just to look cool. (I once asked this question to a friend of mine who also watches Jojo. He explained to me that you have to shout out when playing poker. This is the same. When I gave this example, he was speechless). I have read some fanfics. Please help me.

I just read Chapter 60, and I feel it is completely inadequate. The author wrote that Tiga Pineapple completely replaced Diavolo, and there is no dual soul. It's still very interesting, with a lot of jokes incorporated into it, and the performance is still a bit funny. It also focuses on Bobo trapped on the stairs.

This should be my favorite book. Let's start with the plot - the protagonist travels through Diavolo and then rebuilds Araki Village and defeats the big BOSS with the Jojos (can't say defeated, just exiled from the world). A series of side stories unfold around this main story, mainly showing courage and cowardice, love and hatred, and our favorite street lamp pendants. This book also fulfilled a lot of regrets I had when I first read JOJO - such as the death of Dio and JOJO, the exile of extreme creatures, etc. All in all, this is a really nice book (a lot of it is original, so if you don't like it, you can leave) Let me put it bluntly, it is the top of JOJO

All I can say is that this book is good. I am drawn into JOJO even though I don't read JOJO. It's almost like a substitute (this is not a disparagement, it's just a suggestion). In short, this book can be regarded as a very good one.

The writing is very good, but I have always wanted to ask Gaia, are the people in this organization the protagonists? No one died, and they escaped completely after showing off a skill. Yes, after reading it, I dare say it is one of the best books on JOJO😁.

It's very good. It's wonderfully written and the characters are perfect. It's not rigid but also a bit of fun and comedy. I hope the author can slow down the writing speed. I don't ask for speed, but for quality. Come on, keep writing and I will help you promote it!

This novel is one of the many Jojo series novels that I think is quite good. I saw two or three one-star negative reviews in the comment area, saying that some of the characters in the novel collapsed, or the strength of some stand-ins was reduced, but this is just a fanfic, and the authors are different. There will definitely be some collapse of the characters, which is not to say that collapse is okay, but a slight difference is acceptable; besides, if the protagonist has the Crimson King's incredible power, will this villain still be alive? There will also be some original characters and original stand-ins in the novel, which is something I am more interested in. The characterization of the characters is also quite good, but there are still some shortcomings, such as the car speed is too fast (well, it is not accurate to say this is a shortcoming, in fact, I quite like reading it), and the strength of the stand-in is slightly inflated, but overall it is quite good. Except for giving it four stars. (If you don't like your personal opinion, please don't comment)

This book is really good to read, and I couldn't put it down. Although the rating is low, it does not prevent it from being good to read, and the author has updated it a lot. Otherwise, it would be too little, and I would not be happy with it. But the premise is that you must take good care of your health, otherwise, if you are not in good health, this book is almost half-finished. I give it a five-star review.

The work is very beautiful. I only picked it up when the book was finished, so there are no puzzles or the like. Every time I start playing, I can quickly see the description of the next chapter, so it seems very enjoyable. I feel like the boss is a bit too shabby, but it makes it more enjoyable to read because of crumbs. After all, the nameless protagonist was also transformed into Diavolo by a dump truck. The protagonist used the identity of Diavolo to fulfill a lot of my wishes, such as letting Jonathan meet his descendants who are not gentlemen at all. The last time I saw such a plot was in Jojo's Eyes of Heaven, and seeing it again made me feel even more moved. In many places, it can be seen that this book continues Jojo's traditional battle of will style. In the work, every stand-in user closely relies on his own stand-in ability when fighting. There is no outrageous plot where the villain goes offline for no reason. I like the fight between Sister Lin the most. I forgot who she fought. It seems that the opponent left a hand behind. I really like that part. There's only one thing I don't quite understand. Why is such a beautiful work rated so low?

How should I put it? First of all, the combat power is very consistent with the original work and does not collapse (most fan fictions have combat power collapse in the later stage), which is particularly good. Then there are a lot of laughs in this book. The organization of Araki Village is good. Anyway, this book is really good (but I am not educated)

Well↑↓This book really made me excited! Segoni Hi Iron Duck! ! ! Wryyyyyyy!

Nice, novel imagination, in line with my thoughts, there is no lack of joy in the fighting, the IQ of the whole group is online, and the fighting plot is not to mention, it is very consistent with the setting of JOJO, looking for the enemy's stand-in ability during the battle, and finding a solution, and these children are very interesting to watch, anyway, overall ——Emperor's private family The author is about to update. I've almost finished reading [face covering] [face covering] I'm starving to death. ——Come on, if you persevere, you will get results, and it will be prosperous. This kind of update is good enough and on time. Considering that you need to go to work, you don't have to rush it. Maybe I read it too fast, but what you wrote is so good [Admiration] I can't help but, [I admire the first person who wrote a Diavolo novel] [Maybe it will be very good] Let me tell you again that an update will be on the agenda [Jacqueline] [Mira] [Diablo] [Dior] [JO Nathan] [JO Joseph] [JO Taro] [Kakyoin] [Bobo] [Ichi] [Little JO Assistant] [Little JO Runo] [Little cutie Trish] [JO Ren who I have never met] Discussing with you in the name of the sacred reader must be put on the agenda [If 100 high-quality chapters are updated in one day, maybe you will see Dio in heaven] [Author, you don't want the lovely Trish to have no father] [doge] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I won't get bored at all. I feel like I can watch it again. The protagonist's personality is very rich and the plot is very saturated. Basically, everyone is led astray by the protagonist, and they will never return from the path of comedy. Then there is Yoshikage Kira. Oh my, if it weren't for the official match, I would think it would be great for Yoshikage Kira to be the heroine.

A must-see for capitalists! I've learned bad things. This book is really great! Why doesn't his grandma watch it? It can be said that to add sugar to the eyes, many characters have been resurrected. There is also the saucy operation of crumbling pineapple, which is reversed. Good luck! The original is fat and has a lot of intestines. Next door Yu also recommends it.

So fun, so fun. Firstly, I didn't become a holy mother, and secondly, I didn't put others as the core. I still want to see it after watching it. But there is a small drawback. I remember that the Crimson King with Epitaph and Time Delete was ridiculously strong. I wish I could be stronger in combat instead of just barely winning.

This book is really innovative. First of all, in terms of the ability of the original characters, the author's originality is really good and his imagination is really good. There are no problems except that the combat power in the later period is a bit weak. And the overall organization (Arakisou, Assassination Squad, etc.) Has a little more warmth while advancing the plot, and the overall feeling is great. The lack of a knife at the end makes up for the original regrets of jojo. There are two personal questions I want to ask. Did Jacqueline and Mira end up not having biological children with Diavolo? Did Jacqueline still have her original personality after White Snake made the memory disc for Jacqueline?

It's really great to watch. I was a reader who didn't like original characters at first, and I also hated OOC, but this book really made me cry to death. Everyone's personality is very distinct, and the character creation is super successful. There is a willingness to give and take, and the sinister villain Diavolo faces off against the hero Ahriman who saves the world in order to destroy it. The plot is the biggest attraction. There are many foreshadowings, but almost none of them are missed. It always turns and turns again and again, but it will never feel cliche. The protagonist group later treated insect arrows as public goods, and they all have them in Beyond Heaven. In short, it was absolutely fun to watch.

The best batch in the Tomato JOJO article

What does this book say? It is quite complicated for me. It is my first enlightenment novel and the first novel I read after joining Tomato. This novel also helped me a lot in my subsequent creations, especially the author's drastic changes to the plot of the original work. This was really shocking to me when I first came here. After all, the fanfics I read basically followed the plot and were bland and boring. This book made me realize that novels can be written in this way.

So far, I have read a lot of Jojo fan novels, and this one is the best one in my opinion. The author knows Jojo very well, and is also very familiar with each person's character and characteristics. He will also pop up a joke that only Chef Jo will understand, making Chef Jo smile knowingly. I am very satisfied with it, and I am very willing to give it full marks.

The plot is well written. Although the top-notch stand-ins such as the Red King were a bit weak in the early stage, it is still very good later on. Even Zhu Zhu can look at his grandma through the keyhole and say "nice". It is really a famous scene...

Whether listening to it or reading it, I have finally finished this novel that I followed two or three years ago. Overall, it is a pretty good novel (´∀｀*). It also makes up for all the regrets of Er Qiao in his later years. It is very good. The story is generally lighthearted, humorous and somewhat funny. The battle of wits is well written, and there is no brainless plot, and the characters are almost non-ooc. Highly recommended.

It's really good to read. Every time I'm bored, I open this book and feel that smooth feeling, just like I've been constipated for many years and finally got rid of it. That smooth feeling goes from the sphincter to the sky.

There are not many leading characters in the top JoJo fanfics, and they are not invincible all the way. Sometimes other characters have a greater influence. In addition, this book has many self-created settings and self-designed characters and stand-ins, which are very good.

As a chef, I think the author's writing is pretty good. He has restored the characters of the original work to a great extent, and most of the character expansions are reasonable. It is considered one of the better among fan works.