Shock! a Big Master of Beast Control Is in the Family

Never have a man, never have a man, never have a male protagonist, say important things three times

I really don't want Heizu to die, it can break through successfully The article is confusing, with too many typos and broken sentences.

This novel is not bad. I don't know why the score is only over 6 points. Time passes relatively quickly and I don't write too much wasteful content. Moreover, the heroine has a spirit beast system. Although she does not go out often, as the author explained, she can grow faster with a little opportunity. Moreover, I feel that the description of the heroine is a bit immature, so it may be appropriate to stay in the base camp to cultivate her own spirit beasts, or to collect some spirit beasts from time to time. It is not bad, because there is also the development of the heroine's brother as the protagonist. I still don't want to have too many stories that are dangerous and extreme. Moreover, the protagonist has exposed some things, and the family is not strong enough. Now the external situation is relatively chaotic, so I am more worried about the protagonist. Although the protagonist also has certain strength, but generally I just see that the protagonist is awesome😄

It's a very good book, with a good atmosphere and well-drawn characters. It doesn't matter whether there is a male protagonist or not. I support Luo Xingchen whether he is a Taoist companion or a friend.

I really think this book is really great. This kind of family story is really unique and well written. Oops, I don't know what to say, but all I can say is that this book is really great. Anyone who wants to read a book about the cultivating immortal family can give it a try. This book is really yyds. Looking forward to the next update from the author's wife, it's another day of great love for the author!

Book lovers, do you know if there are any other books of this type? I feel like there are too few of this type. I've been looking for it and I like it very much. Can you mention the heroine's strength? She hasn't been practicing and is busy with family affairs. I think she can practice quietly and improve her strength.

I hope the author can continue to improve the typos and sentence fragmentation! I really like this kind of step-by-step growth article! Come on💪

It's pretty good, come on

I just want to show everyone the world I dreamed about in this way. We are a newlywed, please take care of us, [love] [love] [love]

I think it's pretty good. He's one of the few Xiu Xianwen who rises up in a family style. He doesn't stray too far from the family, and is mainly based on the two brothers and sisters joining forces. There isn't much internal strife, and they basically fight for the glory of their own family to make the family prosperous and prosperous! It's really not bad [full]

It looks okay, but this sentence fragment looks really weird. A comma suddenly appears in the middle of a sentence🤔

This book is not bad, and it is rare to see this kind of book in the female-channeled novel circle.

The plot is relatively good, okay. The heroine is a bit stupid, but I think it's pretty good and in line with human nature.

Not bad, not bad. The heroine doesn't want to get married. She wants to find a son-in-law and become the elder of the family. Haha.

This novel gave me a feeling that a little bird was born in a chicken coop. This little bird is very special and can fly. The chickens are worried that their natural enemies will find this special little bird and prevent it from flying, but they also teach it the principles of flying. Many years have passed, and the birds are still not very good at flying, but they are living a happy life. The birds want to eat bugs, and Brother Chicken tells the birds that I will find the bugs you want to eat, but don't fly. The little bird has never seen other little birds. It has never left the house. She doesn't know what a little bird like her looks like at this time. As God, I don't know either, but she doesn't seem to be eager to fly. Then I was thinking, if there was no family hatred and no world to save, would it be a pity or happiness for this little bird to stay in the chicken coop and live an ordinary life peacefully? Reviews say this novel is very bland, and I wonder if it will be any different later on.

Why did it end so suddenly? Looking at the author's big outline, there should be about 180 chapters left [laughing and crying] The ending was too rushed. The heroine grows up all the way. She is accompanied by her family and friends. It is quite warm. Ignore the emotional line. Let's not talk about typos or anything like that. The heroine's rank is up and down. Did the author forget what he wrote? [Laughs and cries] The last chapter is the late stage, and the next chapter is the early stage perfection. It's confusing.

It's not bad. It can pass the time when I'm short of books.

I really like Stardust I have seen many people saying that they hope there is no cp, but I personally think that as long as the protagonist is not a love brain, and the work is mainly about career, and other things are supplementary, it will be okay, and there is a lover who is evenly matched, and they can also help each other and pursue careers together, so that you can have a trustworthy partner on the road to career. This is just a personal opinion, please don't criticize, thank you

I hope the author can continue to work hard. I think this is the most tolerant novel that I, a bookworm, have read so many novels. I can see that the concept is okay. I hope to work hard next time.

It looks great, good luck to the author!

Protagonists who are good people, do good deeds, and love peace. Protagonists who are peace-loving are usually material. They also want peace and don't want monsters and humans to go to war. Otherwise, why would they be protagonists...

Not bad, a few imperfections, but overall it looks pretty good.

It's the first time I've seen a family so harmonious. It's pretty good. Not many Xiu Xian families are so harmonious. There are many typos and the ending is too hasty, but it's really pretty to watch.

It looks great. I finally found a heroine who doesn't use a sword [laughs]

Author, is there a male protagonist?

Author, I really want to ask if the heroine is called Su Yanxue or Su Xueyan.

It's okay, but the punctuation marks are not well arranged!

It's still very good, the only regret is the part about the ancestor, it made me cry!

It doesn't have a very silly love plot, it's in line with the logic of cultivating immortals, and it's very good

I highly recommend this book. I don't think there's any flaws at all. Warmly recommended. Come on author Come on, it's pretty good\(//∇//)\: